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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

interesting start! Is the woman Khushi?

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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
This is amazing! Very different and really good

Thank you :) glad you liked it.

-shiz&fari

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samia19

@samia19

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

sound really interesting, pm me when u update, thxx

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hey both of you! :)

the concept is brilliant. i don't think i've ever read anything like this before

i can figure out that the girl is khushi, but who's the guy? they were married and she cheated on him. man, that's really sad! there is no excuse for adultery :| i wonder what made her do it though. she put her children's lives at stake too! she should've thought about that atleast.

i'm sure she doesn't want to part with her children, but then they can't lead a life full of lies either. i'm curious to know if they get divorced or not.

i feel really sad for the children, it will be really harsh on them!

update soon

-aish

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snowflake.

@snowflake.

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Outstanding start! Concept is pretty unique, Love it 👏 Request! *teary eyes* Please adjust Imraan Abbas and Mahira somewhere in the story 😒😔

Fairy i just observed Shiza was correct! Barun's body isnt visible in the banner *runs away*

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

LOOKING FORWARD TO THE STORY 😃

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shareen

@shareen

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

OMG. Fairy and Shiza, you girls are amazing! I absolutely LOVED LOVED it. You guys have a very unique and interesting concept. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it..You guys have a wonderful style of writing.

Looking forward to the next part.

My guess: the girl's Khushi, the husband is karan, and arnav is the guy khushi's in love with? :P

And i agree with Aanchal..Can we have mahira too, please? :P For some reason while reading this, i had mahira in my mind- as the girl is the story :P

The banner is BEAUTIFUL, Fariha! <3