Astitva sajan &mayur ff part1 pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
very nice start.

gunur story wr lil confusing.

waiting for their past revel.

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice update both parts were super cool per mera ek question hai ap nah 1 page pai ek chota sai intro diya tha woa tu yeh nai tha and usmai leads bhi sajan tha jb kah yaha joa update hai usmai mayur part bhi hai tu kya yeh dono story joa ap nah update kii woa aur jiski intro ap nah 1 page pai dii hai woa alag hai yah same hai agar same hai kyu kah 1 page wali ff tu sajan based thii tu nd mayur tu characters mai bhi nai tha tu ab kaisa ah gaye ? i am really confused pllzzz i know ap comments kah reply nai karti ub becuz u are really busy and i can understand that per plzzz hu saka tu mera is question ka jwb dah diya gha plzz nai tu mai confuse he rahao gii
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Ok guys before i start the story need to confirm that first i told its on sajan but again i changed my mind to write it on both mayur and sajan anyways its a short story hardly seven parts i will end it with love and hatred after that i will continue the other two ffs and my new story new beggning
i will reply to your comments but only when i update becoz most of the time i am inactive
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A car dashes with a bus after that scene shifts to hospital
a girl gains consciousness
doc-ab aap kaise feel kar rahe hain
n-mere saath jo the woh kaise hain
doc-ji woh
n-kya hua doctor please bataiyena
doc-aapke alawa us accident main koi nahin bacha car blast hua tha
n-kya
she tries to commit suicide not listening to anyone there
shilpa-paagal ho gayi ho humne tumhari jaan marne ke liye nahin bachaya yehaan pe bahut saare log hain jo jeena chahte hain par zindagi ne unhein bahut kam waqt diya tum bahut khush naseeb jo tumhein jeene ka mauka mila tumhein apne zindagi ko khatam karne ka koi haq nahin hain
n-main kiske liye jiyu sab kuch khatam hogaya main bahut akeli pad gayi hun
shilpa tries to console her with her words soon nupur and shilpa get close one day she was standing at window
shilpa-kya baat hain phir kya soch rahi waise atlast tumhein is hospital se chutkara mil gaya
she gives a painful smile
shilpa-ab kya hua
n-discharge hoke mere saath mere ghar chalo beti kitarah rakhoongi
n-main aapke saath kaise aa sakti hun
shilpa-kyun nahin aasakti
n-aapke gharwaale
shilpa-mere ghar main koi nahin hain main akeli rehti hun mere bache us main rehte hain tum mere saath chalogi toh mujhe ek saath milegi mujhe hamesha se betiyan pasand hain kya tum meri beti nahin banogi
she hugs shilpa atlast she got someone with whom she can forget her loneliness
after discharge nupur was always lost in her world only tears were present in her eyes
shilpa sees her pain and decides to talk to her
one day at dinner
shilpa-toh aage ka kya plan hain
n-ji
shilpa-beta kab tak tum aise rahogi tumhein dekh rahi hun toh mujhe main khud dikhai derahi hun mere saath bhi wohi hua jo tumhare saath hua par maine jeena nahin choda mujhe mere parivaar ke liye aage badna pada akelepan kitna mushkil hain mujhse acha koi nahin jaanta mere paas toh majburi thi par tum azaad ho khud ko apne atith se baahar lao aur nayi zindagi ki shuruvaat karo bhul jao jo kuch tumhare saath hua tumhari yeh pareshani tumhare parents ko takleef degi woh upar se tumhein dekh rahe honge unke liye apne life main aage bado
she was again lost in questions
next day morning shilpa hears aarti morning
she sees her praying to god
n-goodmorning mom yeh lijiye prasad aap hospital ke liye tayyar hojaiye main naashta banati hun
shilpa-kaafi improvement dikh raha hain acha hain
n-100% improvement hain
she smiles
shilpa-sahi kaha waise subah tere haste hue chehre ko dekhana pura din acha hi rahega
they have breakfast together shilpa leaves to hospital
in the evening while she returns home she sees nupur seriously reading paper
shilpa-aisi bhi kya khabar hain jo itne dhyan se paper pad rahi ho
n-woh main paper main walkins dekh rahi thi socha ghar pe akele rehne se acha hain ki job karun
shilpa-acha idea hain
n-aapko bura nahin laga
shilpa-ismein bura maanne waali kya baat hain job main join hogi toh naye log milenge naya environment milega aur meri beti life main aage badegi
n-thanks mom aap bina kahe hi meri dil ki baat samajti hain
next day morning shilpa leaves her at the venue
shilpa-all the best beta
n-thanks mom
at the interview hall
n-yeh sab toh kaafi developed lag rahe hain inke dresses styles baat karne ka tareeka sab kuch itna modern hain insab ko chod kar mujhe kyun select karenge i think mujhe waapas jaana chahiye
she was about to leave receptionist calls her name she goes inside a handsome young boy was busy checking some applications
n-may i come in sir
m-yes miss nupur bhushan aapka naam bahut acha hain
n-excuse me
m-mera compliment naam ko tha aapko nahin waise koi puraana experience
n-yeh mera pehla interview hain
m-pehla interview har kisike liye mushkil hota hain aapko nervous hone ki zaroorat nahin hain ek gayi toh dusri aayegi bevajah pareshan hona loosers ka kaam hain
n-yeh itne aataam se mujhse baat kyun kar raha hain ab toh confirm hain rejection
m-aapke certificates kahaan hain
n-mere paas certificates nahin hain
m-aapne socha kaise bina certificates main aapko job dunga
n-sir main apne talent ke balbute par job paane aayi
m-toh aapko apne talent par itna barosa hain toh main aapke liye ek test rakhta hun agar aap jeeti toh job confirmed warna you need to leave
n-i will surely win
m-i like your confidence all the best miss nupur
n-thanks mayu
mayank keeps a small test
after the test
m-aapko kya lagta hain you won or loose
n-yeh main kaise bata sakti hun aap decide karenge agar aap mujhe job dena chahte hain toh i will surely pass
m-abhi toh itna confidence tha ab kya hua
n-mujhe khud ke talent par barosa hain par yehaan wohi hoga jo aap chahenge
m-i like your way of answering anyways you have pass your test you can join from tommorow
n-thanks a lot sir i needed this job a lot
m-no need to say thanks this job is for your talent
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An accident scene shifted to hospital
g-main yehaan kaise aayi
doctor aapke car ka accident hua tha
g-mere saath jo the woh kaise hain
doc-accident main sirf aap hi miley the car blast hua tha ho sakta hain accident main woh log marr gaye
g-kya
she becomes unconscious
after she gains consciousness she becomes dull doesnt talk to anyone
doctor-aapke gharwaale koi hain toh bataiye
g-mera koi apna nahin hain sab mujhe chod ke chale gaye
doctor-oh i am sorry jab tak aap ek job nahin dundti aap hamaare hospital ke hostel main reh sakti hain
g-thanks a lot
she felt a relief she didnt understand where to go she has no one to stay with
there were some walkins going in a company
she goes to the company
s-hi sweetheart kaisi ho
sheena-main ghar pe hun tum kahaan ho
s-office jaa raha hun majburi hain agar nahin gaya toh dau gussa karenga
sheena-ok then sham ko milte hain
sam cuts the phone
he is happy go lucky guy changes girlfriends like dresses
he reaches office
today there were interviews in the office for his pa post
sam sees lot of girls looking hot and sexy
s-acha timepass hoga thodi der
he calls the first person
she wore a mini skirt
s-aapka naam
girl-ria
s-aap is company main kaam kyun karna chahti hain
r-becoz i feel i am best suited for this post
he interviews lot of girls but was satisfied with none
though he is a party guy he is good businessman he works simcerely he wanted a girl who can work who listens to him and does her work sincerely
it was gunjans turn
he was suprised to see a girl in salwar
s-aapka naam
g-gunjan
s-aap itna kyun darr rahi hain main aapko bhoot dikh raha hun
g-ji nahin
s-relax and take your seat
she sits shivering
s-isse pehle kahin work kiya
g-ji nahin
s-ok fine aapke certicates dikhayenge
g-sir woh
s-kya woh
g-woh mere paas certificates nahin hain
s-wat bina certificates ke tum interview main kya kar rahi ho
his bit harsh voice fears her more tears drop from her eyes
s-yeh ladkiyan bhi na har baat pe roti rehti hain
he had to conduct the test as it was rule but he was least interested to join her in company
but after the test he was suprised to see her performance she was too intelligent in terms of work
s-aapka ppjob toh main nahin dena chahta tha but i was impressed by your performance becoz of your talent hope apne kaam main bhi yehi intelligemce dikhayengi congrats miss gunjan you have been selected
g-thanks sir
she was very much happy atlast she got a job she needed this job for her living
s-you can join from tommorow
g-sure sir
the reason behind sam appointing gunjan was her intelligence her look he felt she is not like other girls so might take her work seriously
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wao it was really really awesome update superb work so gunur are now separate aww poor girls and now living alone and now their have find job in sayank office wao its intresting let see wht happens nxt reallly awesome update and thanx for clearing my doubt about the ff

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