#2.kriyansh swaron FF Be My Valentine upd.30 pg 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks guys appreciate ur comments and like that why we are on 2 thread hope we do more and this FF is written by me and my co-writer Sneha aka taylenaloverx03

do send us both request for pms angel


first thread:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2780651/kriyansh-and-swaron-ff-be-my-valentine


character skecth : *again*

Reyaansh Signhania:

reyansh signhani !! the cool dude of college. deeply in love with kriya but she ignores him used to live in london but now in india as his dads business transfer etc etc..
Kriya Ghai :


Kriya ghai !! coolest and hottest chic of the college in love with rey but not ready to admit it ๐Ÿ˜› lives in london. loves india and her sis sharon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Sharon Ghai ๐Ÿ˜‰
sharon ghai in luv with swayum he is her Bf and she luv her family alot as well ๐Ÿ˜Š will do anything for them .

Swayum shikawat:
swayum shikawat also famous as awesome dancer and reyaansh signhania's brother. in love with sharon and loves the way she gets angry and her habits. she and sharon are planning to make kriyansh one ๐Ÿ˜Š( confused how are swayum and rey having different last names well ppl there is a twist ๐Ÿ˜‰)


second thread thank you everyone !! i never thought my FF will go like this

big thanks to swechas, vshalikriyaansh, srujanahpvr, _lovekriyansh_, kiran.h

, CHOCOLATEKRIYA, true_ArShafan, tinad3lover, sheetal_arsha, dildostidance01,

Eyesfriendly, Ashley007, star_2012, kria1996, Precious_Enigma, KoolKatz, meevee

, lover_D3, ardy03, Isshh, RIYA178, sapna_gada, isnat, joshyalbina,

LOV_ARSHA_KREYA, arunsunita_gm, yogini64, RockStarHuda, 1D_D3-Crazy, pkriyaansh, tish18, 21Neha21, sauravkathuria, Arsha_Kriyansh

, partyprincess16, mEgical_arsha, Arsha1994, SSsanasonu, DamonCrazy_D3,

kriyaanshd3, prrk86, asmaju, Angelic_Aditi, -Nia-, maddieee, kritid3lover, Anyaa_012, sujucoolstar, sweetapple2995,

crazysky, lovekriyaansh, shaffy_arsha, --aimy--, nams_arsha, SugarCubes, luv_arsha, Mahak Sinha,

for being so supportive thank you for commenting and like


here goes the update :


Part 27 !!! <3

Kr: chora kyu ?

r: tumne hi tu bola *laughs*

kriya holds his hands and makes him hold her round her waist again

r: kya kar rahi ho

k: mujhai pakro

r: tumne hi tu bola ki chordo and all

k: rey agar koi larki kuch kahti hai tu fight back

r: but I don't like to fight with my baatcutter

kriya blushes and hugs rey

kr: tu kya kahoa ge ?

r: jo bi tum dogi *smiles*

k: poison bi

r: pyaar main tu poison bi mery liye meta hain

outside the kitchen vinti was listening this all and bursting with lava ! XD

where as

Sharon goes in the room with coffee for swayum and wakes him up

Sh:Swayum utho na 2 baj rahe hain

Swayum hold her by her waist and pulls her closer now her body was sticking with him

He rolls on the bed

Sw: tum kuch kah rahi thi

Shorn who attempts to get up falls on swayum's chest with her head on his chest

Look look hawa hawa *privacy please*

Sh: swayum

While swayum was moving her strands of hair behind her ear

His one touch use to kill her

Sw: umm..

Sh: utho !! *gets up and pushes him*

Swayum turns and hugs his pillow tight

Sw: no

Sh: swayum tum mujhai bi aise hug kar sagte ho

Sw: nahi karuga

Sh: kyu ? *frowns*like a cute baby

Sw: meri marzi

Sharon goes and sits near him hold his hand *slowly rubbing it*

Sh: kyu !

Swayum quickly grabs her and hugs her tightly

Sharon smiles

Sw: kyunki tum mery saamne nahi thi

Sharon slowly take his finger and puts it in the hot cup of coffee

Sw: ouch ye kyu kiya

Sh: jaise tum aapni supno ki duniya se bahar aao

Sw: jab tum mery saath ho tum ye duniya hi fantasy hain

Kriya sees vinti staring at them

And directs vinti

R: *in mind* abhi vinti ko dikha daita ho ki I love kriya aur agar nahi samje gi tu kriya ko sab kuch such such batadoga

Rey goes near kriya who was making egg for him

Rey hugs her from behind and kisses her

R: jaanemun I have made something for you *kissing her on cheek*

Kriya hits him slightly by her elbow

K: vinti daikh rahi hain !

R: tu daikh ne do use humai privacy daine chahiye

K: nahi dairahi rey

R: wo humari galti nahi hain

K: aacha tumne kya banaya hain

R: tumahare liye coffee

Kr: suruf mery liye *toucjhed by his hard work*

Kriya drinks it and notices it was containing less sugar

R: kaise lagi *smiles*

Kr: bohot aachi hain

R: main taste karo *with a bigger smile*

Kr: nahi rey I like it

R: ye kya hain mujhai do !

K: nahi !

R: aise kaise!

Rey takes it forcefully and takes a sip

Rey sees in kriya's eyes

R: iss main tu chini kam hain !

K: pyaar main tu maire liye har jeez miti hain

Both share the coffe taking sips of it slowing with their eyes meeting

With every sip they were going deep in each other's eyes

Finally the coffee finishes

Rey who notices this kisses kriya

tells kriya to eat her egg and goes for a walk

vinti follows rey

as rey was in the middle of the stairs someone holds his hand

rey turning to see with a big smile on his face thinking it was kriya

but gets a shock when sees vinti and pushes her

r:daikho tum mujhse door raho

v: kyu hottie main aachi nahi ho

r: I hate you bit*h!

vinti forcefully hugs rey and kriya sees this

kriya with tears in her eyes rushes to her room

k: rey mujhai cheat kar raha hain!!

while Seeing her pictures with rey

k: how could he pehle iss vinti ko sahi karti ho aur pher rey ki class

kriya quickly messages vinti to meet her behind the house

like and comment

precape: kriya and vinti fight + kriyansh misunderstandings during packing and surprise !

Do read my besto friend hani's FF college life : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2918620/arshi-ff-college-life


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Posted: 13 years ago
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update 27 up ๐Ÿ˜‰

update 28 page 6 ๐Ÿ˜›

update 29 page 14 ๐Ÿ˜Š

update 30 page 23 ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


update 31 page 36 ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by SOBTILICIOUS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Noo kriyansh m.u urgh hate vinti nd thnx 4 da pm
Edited by D3FAN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing lovd it except the end MU but u will sort it out i m sure thanks for the pm loved it angel
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks inshall for sending me friend request and then giving the link of your post. i just love this part our ff but truly saying i have not read the previous parts but it seems interesting. i m really happy that u people r continuing kriyansh ff inspite of such a bad end. i will comment in your other parts after reading it again thanks for the link. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly congo for thread 2๐Ÿฅณ

now coming to the update:
that was awesome...๐Ÿ˜›
i hate vinti... kriyaansh ke beech mein misunderstanding karadi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations fr 2nd thread...
Awesome update...luvd it...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kriyansh wer so cute...
Swaron scenes wer gud ...luvd dem...
I hat Vinti...kriyansh ke beech mu...plzz clr it soon...
Congo fr 2nd thrd...
Edited by Arsha1994 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congo for d second thread!!!
Update was awesome!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome n loved kriyansh n loved sharons face of pouting

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