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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2780651/kriyansh-and-swaron-ff-be-my-valentine




second thread thank you everyone !! i never thought my FF will go like this
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here goes the update :
Part 27 !!! <3
Kr: chora kyu ?
r: tumne hi tu bola *laughs*
kriya holds his hands and makes him hold her round her waist again
r: kya kar rahi ho
k: mujhai pakro
r: tumne hi tu bola ki chordo and all
k: rey agar koi larki kuch kahti hai tu fight back
r: but I don't like to fight with my baatcutter
kriya blushes and hugs rey
kr: tu kya kahoa ge ?
r: jo bi tum dogi *smiles*
k: poison bi
r: pyaar main tu poison bi mery liye meta hain
outside the kitchen vinti was listening this all and bursting with lava ! XD
where as
Sharon goes in the room with coffee for swayum and wakes him up
Sh:Swayum utho na 2 baj rahe hain
Swayum hold her by her waist and pulls her closer now her body was sticking with him
He rolls on the bed
Sw: tum kuch kah rahi thi
Shorn who attempts to get up falls on swayum's chest with her head on his chest
Look look hawa hawa *privacy please*
Sh: swayum
While swayum was moving her strands of hair behind her ear
His one touch use to kill her
Sw: umm..
Sh: utho !! *gets up and pushes him*
Swayum turns and hugs his pillow tight
Sw: no
Sh: swayum tum mujhai bi aise hug kar sagte ho
Sw: nahi karuga
Sh: kyu ? *frowns*like a cute baby
Sw: meri marzi
Sharon goes and sits near him hold his hand *slowly rubbing it*
Sh: kyu !
Swayum quickly grabs her and hugs her tightly
Sharon smiles
Sw: kyunki tum mery saamne nahi thi
Sharon slowly take his finger and puts it in the hot cup of coffee
Sw: ouch ye kyu kiya
Sh: jaise tum aapni supno ki duniya se bahar aao
Sw: jab tum mery saath ho tum ye duniya hi fantasy hain
Kriya sees vinti staring at them
And directs vinti
R: *in mind* abhi vinti ko dikha daita ho ki I love kriya aur agar nahi samje gi tu kriya ko sab kuch such such batadoga
Rey goes near kriya who was making egg for him
Rey hugs her from behind and kisses her
R: jaanemun I have made something for you *kissing her on cheek*
Kriya hits him slightly by her elbow
K: vinti daikh rahi hain !
R: tu daikh ne do use humai privacy daine chahiye
K: nahi dairahi rey
R: wo humari galti nahi hain
K: aacha tumne kya banaya hain
R: tumahare liye coffee
Kr: suruf mery liye *toucjhed by his hard work*
Kriya drinks it and notices it was containing less sugar
R: kaise lagi *smiles*
Kr: bohot aachi hain
R: main taste karo *with a bigger smile*
Kr: nahi rey I like it
R: ye kya hain mujhai do !
K: nahi !
R: aise kaise!
Rey takes it forcefully and takes a sip
Rey sees in kriya's eyes
R: iss main tu chini kam hain !
K: pyaar main tu maire liye har jeez miti hain
Both share the coffe taking sips of it slowing with their eyes meeting
With every sip they were going deep in each other's eyes
Finally the coffee finishes
Rey who notices this kisses kriya
tells kriya to eat her egg and goes for a walk
vinti follows rey
as rey was in the middle of the stairs someone holds his hand
rey turning to see with a big smile on his face thinking it was kriya
but gets a shock when sees vinti and pushes her
r:daikho tum mujhse door raho
v: kyu hottie main aachi nahi ho
r: I hate you bit*h!
vinti forcefully hugs rey and kriya sees this
kriya with tears in her eyes rushes to her room
k: rey mujhai cheat kar raha hain!!
while Seeing her pictures with rey
k: how could he pehle iss vinti ko sahi karti ho aur pher rey ki class
kriya quickly messages vinti to meet her behind the house
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precape: kriya and vinti fight + kriyansh misunderstandings during packing and surprise !
Do read my besto friend hani's FF college life : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2918620/arshi-ff-college-life
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