Aaliyah/Ranveer SS - For Our Country - ON HIATUS

Joker thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
Note: So I thought to increase this forum's popularity, we should all contribute. And I think short stories are pretty popular with attracting attention to the forum. So here is my little attempt of a small contribution towards this amazing serial plus forum. Enjoy and drop your opinions.

Episode 1

"Your name, lady?" asked a burly old man sitting behind the counter.

He patiently hovered his pen over the dotted line preparing to jot down her name and stamp it just like he had been doing for the past evening. But as his eye twitched, he knew an ominous event was to arrive very soon. After all, his sixth sense never betrayed him in his long and experienced 25 years.

"Mahreen.." she said mechanically, remembering exactly what Ranveer had told her to say. He had made sure she had practiced her timing as well as her facial expressions in saying everything on the mission. And here she stood trying her level best to keep her bored expression at bay.

"Aye, perfect, Mahreen," said the man stamping a little gently and excitedly than intended. It was hard to not resist pleasing the young beauty and he was already feeling younger than he ever had.

He opened a drawer and took out a brochure filled with job descriptions. Being in the underworld organisation had several different jobs needed to be attended to. And for the young beauty who stood before him; he was certain that she would definitely be a Fisher.

"Choose your work and come right back 'ere. You hear me?" he said instructively. "Now shoo and go wait."

Nodding, she turned to the overfilled couch with men. She felt alienated and extremely uncomfortable as men eyed her with one common emotion. Lust. Apart from one man who was oddly familiar with his long curly hair and flamboyant clothes. He stared at her with sadness and protectiveness and she felt even more trapped than before.

Turning back to the counter quickly, she flipped through the job descriptions until she came across the one she thought would increase her encounters with the Boss. And to her dismay, she fit the description perfectly.

The man looked up curiously. "Already decided, have ya'? Look 'ere, woman, this job will be yer' life. Picking any outta' a hat ain't the case 'ere, ya' know?" he said bluntly returning back to the work after his impromptu speech.

"I have decided. I will be the Boss' Chief Executive," she declared sliding the brochure back at him. Ranveer had wanted her to somehow alter the Boss' operation plans. What better way of altering his plans by getting to decide them? It was decided and she knew perfectly well Ranveer would be glad.

At this the old man laughed. "Ya' can't be that. Ya' too feminine to be poking yer' nose around in men business. Nah, ya' ought to be a Fisher, Mahreen."

"No! I want this job. And...and, I fit this job description perfectly," she protested balling her fists in anger.

The man nodded with a sad smile. "Yer' lady, I know ya' fit the description damn good! But here, ya' ain't alone beggin' for this job, ya know?" He pointed his arthritic finger to someone behind her. "Yer! Ya! Come 'ere, fella! And cut the glares, I ain't scared!"

Placing his fists on the counter to make his presence known, Joe growled under his breath as the man chuckled at his stiff posture.

"Ease up, fella!" the man smiled. He turned to Mahreen. "Now, ya' see. This fella here is keen on this job. And between a man and a pretty beauty like ya', I gotta' with a heavy heart offer this fella the job. Ya' see, sexism is everywhere..."

"But you can't! I need this job," she cried abruptly stomping her feet angrily as she imagined the disappointed look on Ranveer's face. No she couldn't bare to let him down! She had to have this job by hook or crook.

Goosebumps raise on her back as the man smirked at her slyly. Despite being old, he gave the aura of a man with burning lust. "I see we're desperate 'ere. Well, I could let ya' if you offer-"

"Shut up!" the man next to her roared silencing the whole room with his powerful voice. Behind the counter, there was a squeak and shuffling of papers.

"Right well, look 'ere, miss, this fella has the job. End of." said the man sliding slightly away from the counter. He asked Joe for his name again and found his stamped paper quickly filling in his job description.

"Sign 'ere and go straight in. Ya'll get a key to ya' room. Stay, work and kill." He handed him a pen and continued with his work. But after noticing that the fists remained on the counter, the man looked up confused.

"Wha' now?"

"Make her my assistant." he said enunciating every word carefully. "Do. It."

"Nah, ya' don't decide! Ya' ain't nobody. I am," oldie replied, coughing as he felt himself purging at the intense anger in the young fella's eyes.

"I am the Chief Executive of the Boss, now. I decide who gets to be my assistant."

Punching the granite desk, hardly, Mahreen voiced her opinion. "I decide what I want to do! First you steal my desired job and now you are trying to steal my rights. No!"

"Be my assistant or get the hell out of here," Joe said placing his sunglasses back on. Turning to the frail old man, he made his second command. "I'm going out. When I come back, this girl better not be doing a job for someone else but me."

"Of course, fella... I mean... sir," agreed the receptionist. And then he had walked out briefly ignoring the yelling and protesting of the furious beauty he was indirectly helping. Foolish girl, he thought.

Note: Extreme apologies for the old man's extremely old English accent but let's call it an international company with crazy oldies who used to serve pirates. Aye, aye, captain. LOL. :P

Joker
Edited by Joker - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

33

Views

5k

Users

11

Likes

70

Frequent Posters

Krazzy4u786 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Awesome , plz continue soon and
Pm me when u do
Liza. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Great Start ! Anxiously waiting for the next update :) hope you continue soon. && if you have a PM list , add me please .
numi12 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Good one, will wait for the episode 2.
Joker thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Note: Extreme apologies for this kind of late update. Also a big thank you to everyone who commented and liked the previous chapter. Regarding the PM's, I will try my best to message everyone but there is a possibility that I might not be able to sometimes therefore make sure you keep checking back on this thread. You know the gist of it...

Episode 2

"Hello?"

"You've come to the right place, my dear," said an eerie yet awkwardly familiar voice. She would've almost recognized and accepted this voice but her heart and brain told her not to.

Looking around the musty dark room, she wondered where the source of voice was coming from. The floating dust particles tickled the inside of her nose causing her to sneeze loudly.

"Oh my dear. Well aren't you just ill?" he snarled sarcastically, chuckling. "For your country, illness doesn't matter, does it, Mehreen? Or should I say Aaliyah?"

"Who is this!?" she shrieked, petrified stepping closer to the door almost ready to feel the hardness of the wood. But when she felt a soft, strong chest behind her; she knew she was not to be spared.

His strong arms fell around her like a protective cage but she refused to let herself succumb to a sweet merry land. She knew he was in trouble. She knew he was the one to be saved. And this time, she had to fight alone. For him. For Ranveer. And for their country.

***

"NO!"

Sweat fell profusely down her neck and into the nape of her robe as she sat breathing heavily. The man next to her shifted before sitting up and taking her in his arms. The hardness of his muscled chest, the strong smell of his different cologne and his mere existence was all wrong. He was not the man she wanted and even though she was sure that she wasn't in need of one; she couldn't help but imagine the man who had snatched her everything.

"What is wrong, my love?" he asked touching her cheek and moving some of her wet tendrils away. "Had another nightmare again?"

Shaking her head, she left his excessively warm embrace and lay back down. Sighing she turned away from him, not wanting to see anymore of the man who had trapped her because of her wretched face.

"Who is Ranveer?"

The sudden question penetrated her back and she felt goosebumps rise. It was only due to the robe around her did she hide her sudden reaction to one word. Ranveer.

"I...well..."

"You were yelling his name in your sleep," he said holding her wrist now. Slowly and calmly, he turned her over to face his dark brown eyes. They shone of immense love and protectiveness but also fury and confusion swimming deep in cold, brown eyes.

His eyes are warm... she thought as she gazed into the darkness she was stuck in. Her own frightened image reflected right back at her.

"He was my friend..." she muttered taking his hand to keep the whole act realistic. "But I lost him... he...he went to war."

Tears fell down her silky cheeks and she realized that once again she was in his arms. His breath was in her hair and his hands played with her loose ends. But his posture stiffened and he clutched her extremely tightly.

"My love, do you... did you..." she heard him swallow and his voice broke. "...love him?"

It was as if time had stood still for her but she knew she wouldn't mind answering that question instantly. It was no lie and this was no act. She had never believed in love and going on this mission wouldn't change that either.

Pulling away, she smiled and shook her head. "No, I didn't love him..." Her smile faltered as she said the lie she was dreading to say. "...as I love you, Mahendra."

Letting out a happy laugh, he hugged her close and kissed her hair repeatedly.

"I love you," he whispered in her hair. Pulling away again, he gazed into her hatred filled eyes which he mistook for love and affection.

"Do you love me too?" he asked vulnerably, tears floating in his now warm eyes.

Smiling seductively, she once again told her most hated lie and wondered how she was getting good at keeping this pretense. Ranveer had trained her pretty well, she finally realized.

"Yes, I love you," she hugged him and imagined her Aapa and her brother Aalif. "...so much."

Note: I am extremely sorry about this story progressing so quickly but I have decided to make this a romanticish story therefore I want to get past all this harsh mission scenes. Just to explain some points, this will start off with Ranveer falling for Aaliyah first type of story. As you can see, this mission has changed the outlook of life for Aaliyah. She is no longer the sweet girl who can be manipulated. And having to pretend to love someone else who you don't love does actually gross things out!

Secondly, I will not clarify this in an actual chapter but Mahendra thinks that Mahreen is suffering from amnesia and is actually Julia. Therefore he loves her and is excessively obsessed and protective with having her love him. (I know it's crazy but keep up!)

Lastly, this story will mainly focus on the developing not so puppy love of Ranveer's love for Aaliyah and as Aaliyah deals with her demons. In the end she will love him though so it's not an unrequited love story crap! :)
Namita-M thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
That English makes it even more facinating. Bravo! Brilliant writing. Waiting for the next instalment eagerly.
Liza. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
👏 L O V E it !
Don't worry if you're not able to send PM's
I check this thread regularly anyways .. LOL
I'm already hooked to this.
can't wait to see what happens next !
update soon ! : )
Allbut1 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
This is really great! You're doing a wonderful job building on to the concept of the show and it's beautifully written which is an immediate plus!

Waiting for the next chapter, so please update soon :)
Joker thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Note: Once again, thank you so much for commenting and liking my previous episode(s). Also, I would like to thank everyone who co-operated with me being a laze by not sending PM's. I promise I'll try next time but to everyone who wants a PM, please make sure you like the first episode post. On with the story...

Episode 3

"A.T.B - Put your hands where I can see them! NOW!" he yelled entering his apartment with his gun aimed straight at Mahendra's head. He had fluid movements and his posture was confident. His gun did not leave it's aim as he moved like a predator around him nearing Aaliyah.

But just with enough swiftness, Mahendra barricaded his way standing protectively in front of his Julia.

"You stay away from her!" He reached slowly for his hostler while engaging him in his talks. It would just be a second before he would shoot him and end this once and for all. Ranveer had been his friend in the past but he had come to separate him from his Julia. Never would he allow that - not even on his dead body.

"Shut up, Mahendra!" He touched the trigger lightly almost wishing to put a bullet through his head. How dare he get close to her? She was not his Julia. Hell, she was not even Julia!

"Now, do as I say. Put. Your. Hands. Where. I. Can. See. Them. And do it, NOW!" he commanded placing his finger dangerously close to the trigger. One shot and this man would be a goner, he thought.

"No. I want a guarantee - in writing that Julia will not be touched. Harmed!" refused Mahendra touching his hostler now. He could see Ranveer's eyes were fixed to his face and he would not realize when he would shoot him in the leg.

But before he had a chance to do that, he felt cold metal press on the back of his head. It was a feeling of confusion and his hand immediately touched his now empty hostler.

"Didn't you hear what he said? PUT YOUR HANDS UP, NOW!" She roared at the thought of Ranveer getting hurt. However what she was not aware if this was her concern for him or for her own interest at not staying a minute longer with a crazy, obsessed man.

He swung around crazily not caring if guns were aimed at his head from both sides. All that really mattered was his Julia. His Julia was holding him at gunpoint? He simply would not accept it!

"Julia, what are you doing?" he asked placing his hand on the gun and pushing it down from his face. "What is wrong with you, my love? Why are you trying to get us both killed?"

"No more shit, Mahendra! Put your hands up now or..." Ranveer cocked his gun aimed at the back of his head. "...Don't make me kill you - I would feel an ounce better if you were not killed by my hands!"

He ignored him and stared into her ample eyes. And the next minute he was being dragged away from the fabrication of his dead wife.

***

"Aaliyah, Ranveer!" cried the Chief rising from his chair and rushing to greet them. He didn't return Ranveer's usual gesture and instead hugged him tightly. "Congratulations and a very hearty welcome back!"

"Thank you, sir. I... We have caught the bas***d," smiled Ranveer turning to glance at Aaliyah who still had the blank face mask. "He's behind bars away from every detonator, bomb and Julias."

The Chief chuckled heartily at his little joke. "Aaliyah, this was your first successful mission! Congr-"

"What are you implying?" asked Aaliyah bluntly. "This was my first and final mission."

Ranveer nodded in reassurement. "Relax, Aaliyah. We will not overburden you with any more missions. Your help was appreciated and... I remember our deal."

"Deal?" echoed the Chief walking back to his chair. "Ranveer, you do know that you are our best Agent. You are the vital figure to every successful mission and you are wasting your time in silly deals!?"

"B...but, he promised," she protested, tears pooling in her brown doe eyes. Ranveer concernedly stared at her wondering how he could lighten the conversation. He hated to see her in tears or trouble for an unknown reason he did not know.

Turning to his Chief, he explained their deal and the importance of it to Aaliyah. Finally the Chief had agreed and dismissed the two.

***

As soon as they had been dismissed, Aaliyah raced to the lift without saying a mere goodbye to him. But she still felt his footsteps behind her and beside her while she waited for the lift.

Not wanting to wait any longer she turned to walk down the stairs but the next minute she was on the linoleum floor. The air had whooshed out of her after colliding with an iron chest and she felt her whole body protest against massive force.

Ranveer would've laughed if she hadn't stared up at him dazed. He wondered how much he had indirectly harmed her by just blocking her way. And then a memory of him picking her up flashed before him. He stared down at her and saw recognition light up in her eyes.

Quickly standing up and ignoring the deja vu, Aaliyah muttered an apology and raced past him down the stairs. Her legs protested but she ran until she was out and away from his piercing stare.

He stared after her as she ran - or more likely limped. Why was he so concerned for her? Why did he care for a mere foolish girl like her? Was what Chief said true? Was he really falling in love with her?

Note: Pardon my errors and mistakes in this episode(s) and once again I would like to clarify some points because this story will be progressing very quickly.

First of Ranveer and Aaliyah were on this mission for 4 months where Ranveer decided that they would end the mission early. That was because of his protectiveness or should I say love for her...

Second, Aaliyah and family scenes will be very brief and I didn't think I would say this but next episode is Ranveer's strong realization of his love for Aaliyah.

Until then, ciao! :D
Liza. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
& it just keeps getting better.
Really really great part.
I also love the the way you write.
Hope you update again soon. Please :)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".