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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaagarwalv

👏 Happy that ur problems are over. Njoyed updates

Feeling really bad for Vicky and Geet. Maan is really bad.
Waiting to see what Geet is plannning and how she will escape from Maan and make him change 😉
Really he is tooo bad, Raped her on her wedding nite, not cool, punishing her, raping her again and again, Tooo bad😭
Lets see how he makes up to that..
Mrs MSK do something girl power. Make him beg MANUPALATION, Jealousy, tears... 😉
Waiting for the updates make it soon !!!!

Hey Neha!
thanks so much! I know Maan is really bad...worse then the shetan 😆😆😆 but what can he do..he was molded into this person...'

don't worry the story just begun...lets see what Geet does next😳😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys
good morning!

Will be updating late today
until then enjoy this first chapter of Opposite World😳

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

hey guys

good morning!

Will be updating late today
until then enjoy this first chapter of Opposite World😳




read and commented too dear
first only
waiting for the update of this and BM dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 18

Geet sat beside Vicky as he slept peacefully. Not once did Maan came in to check up him ever since they reached the hospital over an hour ago. The doctor had said Vicky can go home but Maan insisted he stay overnight here. This showed he cared for Vicky but then why cover it all up? Why does he hide his emotions with anger? Day by day she was getting confused with him..she didn't know what his true face face and what to believe. Her mission was getting fuzzy, her thoughts were all disturbed by his constant changing behavior.

Maan sat outside walking back and fourth in anger...he looked inside the window to see Geet holding Vicky's hand with a sad face...he snarls..."So what if he is sick? I am making him stay here all night..isn't that enough? Then why is she still sitting inside there? What does she want? I gave him the best private room, a room the size of the bedroom with top facilities and doctors isn't that enough?" He leaves the place unable to look at the sight in front of him.

Geet didn't know when she fell asleep. She woke up after she heard her name being called. Slowly she opened her eyes to see Vicky looking at her with worry. She pats his head with smile..

Geet: How are you feeling now?

Vicky: Where am I?

Geet: In the hospital...you got sick so we brought you here

Vicky (looks around for Maan) Is he mad? I don't want to go back there..I don't like it...Dadima tried stopping but the guys wouldn't listen..they just grabbed me while I was kicking and screaming..no one listened to me...

Geet: Sshh its okay ..I will talk to your brother...I will make him understand okay?

Vicky (smiles) okay thanks!

Geet: So tell me are you hungry?

Vicky: yes...since you are here now..I will eat with you

Geet (smiles and plays with his hair) that's like a good boy

Just then the door opens...Geet adjusted herself when she saw a strange man...ever since Maan raped her on their first night and almost forced himself on her afterwards she gets uncomfortable with unknown guys presence. For some reason, she feels safe when he is around...maybe because he "owns" her like his little puppet...but still since he is not here she is feeling weird...the doctor slowly came toward Vicky's bed with a smile. He starts viewing his file looking at each thing very thoroughly. He was a young doctor, maybe a recent graduate. His name tag said Armaan Mehra MD. He looks at Vicky and winks at him making him giggle.

When he walked even closer, Geet quickly moved back without seeing a table behind her. She knocks over the glass water jug causing it to break on the floor. She screams when she unknowingly steps on the piece of glass. Armaan immediately pulls up a chair for her to sit. Geet slowly hops closer to the chair sitting down while holding her foot...

Armaan: Here let me take a look at that

Geet (moves her foot) no its okay...

Armaan: It looks like a deep cut...I have to take out the glass..

Geet: No its fine..I will manage

Armaan (sighs and looks at Vicky) So Vicky looks like your friend is scared of doctors...(Vicky starts laughing...) You are the only brave one here..(he winks at Vicky)

Geet (does a shocking face) what do you mean? I am not scared

Armaan: really well it doesn't seem like it...

Vicky: bhabi you should prove it...

Armaan: Yeah prove it

Geet extends her foot so that he can examine it...he pulls up a chair for himself..he holds her foot in his hand while examining the glass. He tells her to hold her foot while he puts on some gloves bringing first aid kit with him.

Armaan: okay this might pinch a little..(He holds her foot...rolling up the salvaar a little for the grip...he gently takes out the glass...Geet winces in pain...) hmm the glass is out...looks like you are not a coward...(he smiles at her..she smiles back...) what do you say Vicky?

Vicky: She is never scared...

Armaan: Yeah she is one brave lady...(he bandages her foot after cleaning her wound slowly...) so this lady have a name?

Geet: Its Geet..nice to meet you..(she extends her hand..Armaan shakes her hand...)

Armaan: Pleasure is all mine...(he winks and kisses her hand)

Maan who was back after signing the discharge papers stopped just outside of the room when he saw a male doctor holding his Geet's foot. Jealousy and anger ran through his vein when he kissed her hand. She was only his and how dare someone touch what belongs to him. He saw her and Vicky laughing at his jokes when he had started examining Vicky. Geet...he said her name with anger under his breath..when he saw her looking at him and laughing with that doctor..How dare she! He opens the door slamming it against the wall due to great force. Everyone stopped laughing and looks at Maan. Maan goes up to Armaan and punches him on the face making him fall on the floor.

Geet: Maan what are you doing..he is the doctor

Maan (looks at her pulling her hair with anger) I can do whatever I want...(he lets go of her..she hops back due to her injured foot...he goes near Armaan picks him up with one hand...) You touched my wife? No one touches what belongs to him..no one...and you dared to touch my property? (Geet hears all this shocked...he throws Armaan across the room...security guards came after hearing noises but no one stopped Maan...he steps on Armaan's stomach making him scream...he sees the hands that touched her foot..he steps on them until he begged for mercy...he stops) take him away

As soon as they left, he goes up to Geet...she pushes him away with anger...

"property? I am NOT your property! I am your wife...treat me like a wife! Give me the rights I want and need

Maan: SHUT UP! (Vicky shakes in fear hearing him yell and seeing this much violence in front of him for the first time)

Vicky: bhabi...(Geet looks at him..Maan stops and looks at Vicky with anger...she starts to go near him when Maan holds her hand stopping her)

Maan: Nurses will take care of him and take him home as well. You need to come with me...(he drags Geet with him while she struggled to be free...)

I wrote this right now in a rush...I will think of something for Geet and how she can start getting back to Maan..for now I hope you guys liked this part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
gosh i feel so sorry for the doctor =[

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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 Mrs MSK. Was waiting really njoyed the updates
😡Maan is sooo evil. He really has a lot to make up to Geet.
Poor Dr Armaan muft mein mara gaya,😭 but Geet is mentally affected by her rape😭 Dreading what will happen to Geet now 😕
Waiting for the updates Make it soon. Phir kya huaa?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet shuld stab Maan with knife😡😡😡😡😡😡
Idiot n all the bad words he is
Faltu me he hurted Armaan
Feeling bad fr him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ufff...this maan...hez a maniac despo...hehel..bt gud 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww i feel bad for all of them except Maan !

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