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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome !!
Loved it !!
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I hate Emma with a passion seriously!
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Posted: 13 years ago
what will geet do now
how cheap she can gets?
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


😕 me not getting what saying me confused


You have got Ruchi, Frankie, Sara, Roopali and you have almost forgotten me lol!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anmirza

I hate Emma with a passion seriously!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anupm04

what will geet do now
how cheap she can gets?
continue soon


you will find out soon me updating today
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya


You have got Ruchi, Frankie, Sara, Roopali and you have almost forgotten me lol!


such a big no mega huge lie and to prove it you can check my updates. I would never forget you if I would you would notice cause I wouldn't tease you anymore and think you would love that, now now you won't get rid of me that easy my sister from a another mother and father🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys I am back with another update cause this update is for all of you for motivating to write more except sara who insulted your update_ machine😭 she said, if I may quote: Aisi 'update machine' ka kya fayda, jo short parts likhti ho. 😡 Sune re ho Butterfly,puppies, goldyy,giantyy,baby.
Part 40
The kids heard everything.
A:Oh no what now she burned the proof
M:Chill I am a agent so I've got a plan b

Maneet smirked.Emma called evelien. There plan was set. If I can't get Maan you won't get him either. While she was in her thoughts. She felt something biting her leg. She saw a cobra. Emma yelled and fainted. Maan just came home. he heard emma scream when he entered the kitchen he saw her lay on the ground, butterfly hided himself beneath the table as Ananya instructed. oh gosh her attention seeking behaviour has started maan thought he walked out off the kitchen straight to geet's room.

M:ananya she won't die would she
A:No he did't really bite her jut nibbeld her skin she is fine she just fainted cause off her fear.
M:Shouldn't we wake her up
A:no baby will do that.

A baby eagle flew into the room and started poking his noise in Emma (credit goes to Roopali) woke up she saw the eagle and started screaming and running outside. she was feeling so scared she went to evelien all scared up. The kids had a heartly laugh.Maan walked into the room. Geet was sitting on the floor with tears in her eyes. She was all broken from inside.Maan ran towards geet picked her up and hugged her tight.

M:Misty what's wrong tell me
G:I I ruined everything

She told maan everything

M:Shh bas you didn't ruin anything I've got a litle plan on my sleeve tomorrow is 11 june are so called 12th wedding anniversary. Come let's go to the kids I will be needing there help.

Maan told the kids his plan. Everyone nodded while maneet thought daddy where do those stupid plans off you come from😆 Maneet told maan and geet everything what ajenn told him

G:Meer sheen I want to meet them
M:Mom there coming tomorrow
G:Really I can't wait to see them

Geet had tears in there eyes.So did maan he would see vicky his little brother back after 12 years and some unwanted thought wanderd in his head things geet wasn't aloud to find out not now not ever. When maan and geet where alone geet decided to ask a question which was for a while in her head.

G:Maan what happened between you and vicky?
M:I don't want to talk about it.

Maan walked away. After Maan had known the truth about geet he had never talked so rudely to her. Geet was shocked something was definitely she needed to make him feel better, like he always makes her feel better. She started searching him. She found him in his gym he was torturing himself. She couldn't see this sight. She ran towards him and hugged him from behind.

G:Maan stop torturing my dhank dhak

Maan fell something wet falling on his back. He turned around to see tears in his Misty's eyes. He wiped them away immidiatly. He hugged her tight.

M:I am sorry misty please don't cry
G:Maan what is bothering you, won't tell me

Maan let go off geet and turned around.

M:it's nothing to worry about misty.Emma's doing where just making my blood boil.

Geet knew it wasn't emma. Cause he was fine when she told him everything. It was something about Vicky that was troubling Maan.

G:Fine if you don't trust me enough to tell me they don't tell me but don'lie.

Geet turned around to leave. maan hold her wrist.

M:He trusted you will I didn't we had a fight about that

Geet turned around.

G:He believed in me

Geet was shocked and happy cause she had only seen vicky twice and they had just exchanged a hello and that's it.And he believed her. Without realising a smile crept on her lips. Somewhere that pained maan's heart. But at the other side he was also happy for his Misty.

M:Yeah will I didn't

Maan turned around. tears formed in his eyes. geet saw a glimpse of the pain in his eyes, before he turned away. She fellt terrible. She hugged him from behind.

G:It doesn't matter maan the past is the past. The only thing that matters now is that you love me more than anything and vica versa. We are back together and soon you will have your brother back.

Geet let go of maan turned him around and kissed his cheek.

G:Come on ab to mutje ek smile deh do

Maan smiled but the smile didn't reach his eyes, cause he knew he was hiding from her a dark truth. The real reason why vicky left maan and come to Calefornia. geet wasn't aloud to now not because he didn't trust her. He knew that geet is such a Misty that she will forgive him, but because he didn't want to hurt her. And he knew he would hurt her somewhere with this dark truth. but before geet could notice. he hugged her and started teasing her.

M:Mrs. Khurana aap to bari bold ho ki hai. Kya baat hai bara pyaar aara hai apne pati pe
G:What me and bold. maan leave me I won't talk to you

Maan kissed Geet's cheek. A smile formed on geet's lips.

M: Come on my misty let's go we need to rehearsal.

Geet nodded.

After Emma had calmed down she went to meet Ronald.

R:Hmm so you burned the proof
E:yes
R:Good
E:will you help us
R:Of course Emma darling.

He looked at emma from top to toe

R:But you now what I want
E:yeah yeah sure anything to ruin geet's life.

Ronald told them how he meeted geet how she thought he was married and had a child. But the truth was he was just taking care of his sister's daughter. And the ring was not a wedding ring. He just likes to where rings. But she had misinterpreted it as his wedding ring. He had seen the picture of her so called kid. That was maneet. Emma was shocked to hear that. What was the story of maneet but they hadn't time to figure that out. Ronald acted like he was changed. He wanted geet to trust him but that didn't happen she used him and trew him away he hated it that she had blackmailed him. Even though he didn't had a wife so there was nothing to be scared of he wanted to learn her a leason. And he also wanted learn Maan a leason for hitting the hell out off him. Emma and Ronald made a plan.

Precap: Party😡😭. Francessa singing. 😆 sorry girl you have no choice. What is Maan hidding???Will it torn geet apart😕. And Vicky, meer,sheen,ajenn,yash,ruchi and Roopali are here. Of course Roops kutch to pets saath lehke aai ghi😆

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome lovely update mel 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
ho no ralond also want to take revange from maaneet.
ofcource maan said bad words to vicky u have relation with geet...
poor geet..
know next what
loved it...

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