MG SS - We r just friends?sure? Part 8 03/04 pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
awesome update...

dm is mindblowing...

its amazing...so dey r giving dem J medicine...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
loved it! oh gosh! precap = awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
vicky there for sixer...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Part 8

OK I promised .

Bro actually I am in love ..

Ufff whats new in that, you are in love every weak .Even you remember number of girls till you date ..Nhiii Na Phir , Vicky please leave me alone for some time .

Bro you don't understand I am in love not infatuation. The love like between you and angel ( Maan raised his eyebrow ) i mean the love you both define for your soul mates .I am serious about her and want marry her too .

Hmm whose that girl ,who changed my bro ?

Bro you know her .

Meera

Bro u r impossible .Where r you lived Meera is in love with Yash and he will proposed her tomorrow .

Then who she ?

Angel Bro .. angel , Bro I love Angel .

Whattt...

Yes bro your geetu and mine angel ..

Bro why you are shocked , you should be happy na .Its also solve your problem ?

Maan is still shocked state , not understand whats going around him .First Geetu opt for MBA London , he will be in India without her for two years and my stupid flirt brother claim that he is in love with my geetu .Aur uppar se geetu mujhse baat nhi kar rhi hai , kal meri itni important meeting hai afternoon mein college aur mein presentation tyaari karne ki jagah ise idiot ki stupidity suna rhe ho .Kal tak iske yeah pyaar fever bhi thik hojayega par agar ise sach mein sae geetu pyaar hogaye nhiii .Yeah nhi ho sakte geetu aur Vicky no ways ..

Bro bro

Hmm

Aap kya soch rho ..geetu aur mera relation aapki bhi help kar sakte hai ?

Kaise ? aur mujhe pata kal tak na yeah tera love fever thik ho jayage toh jayad dreams mat dekh geetu ko lekar .

Bro aise kuch nhi hai aap meri feelings nhi samaj rhe hai ..Mera liye angel bahut special hai aap ise kaise soch sakte hai ki kal tak mein use bhul jaoge , Jab ek saal mein nhi bhul .Yes i have feeling for her from last one year but i realise from last few months its not infatuation but love .First i think you both are in love thats why i don't tell you about this .But you both always claim that we r just friends .So i decided to tell you then later to angel . so that you can help me to propose her .Aapko toh khush hona chaiye first apko apni geetu kae liye soulmate dekhna ki need nhi hai and woh hamesha aapke saath hi rehagi ise ghar mein like you both want .Most important i have no problem with your and her friendship ..

Vicky please leave me alone .

What

Maan glare him

Ok bro thanks once again .Good night and sweet dreams

Good night ..

Clean Bold .Vikarant Singh Khurana U r Best , Maan Singh khurana ko out kar diya ...Bus Angel kae babaji in dono ko ek kar do .

Vicky sahi toh kaha rhe mujhe khush hona chaiye , do din sae yehi baat mujhe disturb kar rhi thi aur ab jab mujhe iske solution mile gaye tu mein khush kyo nhi ho .Aur jab usne kahe like love between me and geet i feel heavenly not once i tired to refuse him thats unusual to me .Mein Pagal ho jaoge.May be i tensed bcoz of Vicky flirt nature but i am sure on my little brother never cheat and hurt geetu ..Ufff Hey Dude please help me ...while looking upwards

Whole night sleep not near to Maan ..

Next day

Maan ...jaldi utta mujhe idea mile gaye kaise mein London nhi ja sakti ..Jaldi utto na ..( Geet ji abhi toh jakar bechare ko neend ayi thi ..Poor Mera Maan , Mujhe bhi bahut neend a rhi hai )

Geetu kya hua ...to thik hai na ...

Ha baba ..Phele mein clear kar do mein tujhse naraz ho .Par baat isliye kar rhi kyunki mujhe idea milgaye

Par tera connection toh Vodafone ka hai na ..

Maan

Acha Baat meri geetu kya socha ..Dekh mein visa interview clear nhi karogi .Na visa Na ticket to London what say ..

Geetu tera sae nhi hoga ,mein hi kuch sochte ho.Waise puri raat mein tujhe yehi idea dimag mein aye .

Nhii abhi abhi idea click kiya .puri raat toh ..Geet see smirked on Maan face .

Geet turn away her face , Mein tujhse naraz ho aur ab double naraz ho samaja . Aur maine kuch toh soche, Par tune socha bhi nhi hoga ( Jaggy wonders ab geet ko kaun samajeya bechare ne puri raat kise soch mein katti ) mein chali jaogi, tujhe toh khushi hogi na .Koi tera sir khaane wala nh hoga aur na hi tang karne wala ..

Geet tu pagal hai kya and hug her .Mein tera bin maar hi jaoge ..Geet hug him tightly after listen that ..

Phir sae kabhi maat kahiyo , abhi 2 months hai humare pass mein soch loga tu tension mat le

Hmm

Hmmm Kya , Ja jaldi sae tyaar ho college ke liye phir mujhe office bhi jana hai

Aur raat Yash kae ghar party hai

Ha baba

Maanu

Hmmm

Apne face mirror mein dekh ... start laughing

Geet ki bachi

Geet ki bachi nhi geet you duffer ...

Kya karo mein ise ladki aaj phir sae mera face par ink lag di ...

Kuch nhi Kar sakte you donkey , Monkey

Teri toh

Both start running , geet is about to slip from stairs but before she is .Maan caught her from waist..Geet closed eyes in fear but when she feel strong hands around her, she opened the eyes Maan is in trance as geet of fearful innonce face Background music Maahi Maahi. Both see some different emotions in their eyes ie more than friendship and care .. Maan comes out from trance and rub his rough face with her soft face ..This make some different feeling in their body ..Geet runs from his hold as her heartbeat which beats more rapidly then normal.

Whole day Both are in confusion what is that feeling bcoz its not first time they come near to each other like this .Both tried not come infront of each in fear if other recognise the difference in them

(Jaggy wonders really will they recoginse it ..ha ha ha joke of the weak ..Both are impossible)

After college Maan left for office as usual, Geet and Annie helps Meera to look good for party bcoz this day turn to special for her ..Vicky and Arjun helps yash for surprise .

After meeting maan comes to yash place , only thing left to increase his restless is that hug of Vicky and geet .The way she talked to him with smile on face and wacked her when he tease is increase his restless .He just want to hold geet in his embrace safe and distract from whole world .His thoughts break by arjun who is calling him to help in some arrangement as meera and annie is about to reach their .He left from their .As Meera reached yash place , annie excused from her for call .

All hide behind the curtains and lights are off ..

Meera : Is any one their ? Yash ..Geet hello koi hai kya

Spotlight reflect on Meera ...

Hello ...Hello please guys majak maat karo kahe ho tum sab ...

Flowers shower on her ...Yash come sit on knees infront with ring and said I love you ..

Meera first shocked and surprised to say something

meera jaldi say kuch bolo yaar meri legs gayi ...

(Geet behind curtains sab kachare kar diya kitna dreamy tha .Ise idiot ka kuch nhi ho sakte .maan tu abhi sae training leni start kar deVicky sae, warne ase kuch kar betage ..Asae kyo dekh rahe, Vicky in sab me best hai ,wohi tera crush ko tera samane propose karega bhag le jayega aur dekta rahio ..Maan only register words crush bhag le jayega .where as Vicky is shocked .Annie whisper in arjun is geet also with us in DM 's plan ) even jaggy wonders too Annie ..😆

All come out of their world

When meera finally says yes and hug him ...

All comes out of behind and congrats to them ...

After cutting cake and dinner all sit in living room ..

Vicky :Chalo lets celebrate na kyun ek song ho jae whats says guys about friendship and love ..

All agree with him , but maan is still in his thoughts Vicky and geet words and nearness creates Jealosuy and restless in his ...

Bro , aap kahe khoya hua ...lets start

Hmmm ..

Ufff Bro u r impossible ...

But before any one say something to maan

Maan start playing violin

Music...Music

Maan Put hand on shoulder of geet and stop playing the violin, both hold each other hands .
Maan :dosti karate nahi dosti ho jaati haiVicky :dosti badh jaa_e to aashiqi ban jaati haiGeet :aashiqi badh jaa_e to bandagi ban jaati hai
Maan :dosti karate nahi dosti ho jaati haiVicky :dosti badh jaa_e to aashiqi ban jaati haiGeet :aashiqi badh jaa_e to bandagi ban jaati hai 
Music...Music

Yash – Meera , Annie-Arjun start dancing and humming Dosti karte nhi ho jati hai and and Geet hold one hand of Vicky and Maan do few steps ..

Yash :hotho ke upar rukati nahi Meera:palako ke pichhe chhupati nahiMaan :lagati nahi ye dil ki lagi lag jaa_e to phir bujhati nahiVicky and Geet start doing couple dance like others only Maan left alone . Vicky :kaisaa nashaa hai is pyaar kaa dil jisase madahosh ho jaate haiMaan :kuchh log gaate hai jhumake kuchh log khaamosh ho jaate haiGeet: ye khaamoshi ik din shaayari ban jaati hai
Maan :dosti karate nahi dosti ho jaati haiVicky :dosti badh jaa_e to aashiqi ban jaati haiGeet :aashiqi badh jaa_e to bandagi ban jaati hai
Vicky :chalate hai jaadu yu pyaar ke sab log hairaan ho jaate haiMaan :jo pyaar karate hai kahate nahi chupake se qurbaa ho jaate haiMeera :dil me kisi ki rahati hai yaad hotho pe rahataa hai ko_i naamqurbaan jaa_e is pyaar me is pyaar ko ham sabakaa salaampyaar ki pahali nazar aakhari ban jaati hai
Maan :dosti karate nahi dosti ho jaati haiVicky :dosti badh jaa_e to aashiqi ban jaati haiGeet :aashiqi badh jaa_e to bandagi ban jaati hai
Vicky and Geet still dance together as other couples .Maan :pyaar ki ye maut bhi zindagi ban jaati haiwhile singing this line Maan left the yash place in shock to others specially Geet ..Precap : Leave me alone and go with your friend Vicky ..Leave me alone geet Leave me ..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
awesome update...

kab samjhenga yeh dono apne apne dil ki baat...babaji madat karo...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

really loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
very cute story..Vicky's fake story of love is making Maan realize his love slowly,,..I wonder what will make Geet realize her feelings!..continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Loved the part..
aww..!maan s really jealous and insecure..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
maan is not liking this,,,😆

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
awesome n superb update
loved it
next part we'll see jealous maan 😉
update soon dear

thanks for the pm

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