a love poem!check it out

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Posted: 20 years ago
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here is a poem i wrote today!check it out!
Loving him

My boyfriend was the best guy there ever was,
Our relationship was so open,there were no laws,
He used to wait for me everyday after school,
Not caring weather this was cool or uncool

He told me I looked beautiful in whatever I wore,
He truly loved me, I was so sure
I could talk to him about anything at all,
Between the two of us,there were no walls.

Once,during vacations,he said he was going to Hawaii
Oh,but his plane crashed n I was so shattered,
I couldn't even cry.
He was the only person who could truly
Understand me,
And now he was no more and I became lonely

People who were missing could not be found,
For a month, my mouth didn't make a single sound.
Then something happened which changed my life,
After listening to it, my heart suddenly became alive

It was a phone call from him
He said "sweetheart! Is something wrong? is it my fault?"
I replied "I am ever so glad u r alive and u called!"
He said "my baby! u thought I was dead?
Well, then let me tell u I went on another plane instead"
I said "oh! Well ,let's forget what happened.
Should we make plans for the weekend?"

So we did and went for a movie,
A romantic comedy, since he knew I was choosy.
The plane crash was a big misunderstanding,
I tell u, my boyfriend needs handling

So we were back to the old days,
And our love shone like sunrays.
I love him and he loves me,
And my love for him is like the endless sea

I know he will be true,
He said he would stick to me like permanent glue.
My love story is going on well.
I hope what almost happened to me,
Will never happen to u all
But,if it does try to think tall!


i hope u all like it! 😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Geet,

Amazing poem sweetie---very well thought and sounded very nice👏. It was really wonderful since I could feel it while reading it👏. Keep posting such beautiful poems!

-Love4ever!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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yes very good poem.....and very beautiful......

~sweta~
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey geet it was really very nice.........thanx
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Posted: 20 years ago
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very sweet...thnx 4 sharin....😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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