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-JollyJabeen- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Seriously, Mya, A beautiful writer!👏

Literally, And this idea is absolutely so original and unique, Who would have thought of creating an SS with members of the forum inside aswell!👏

5 starts girl!⭐️

You just keep out doing yourself, How i la la OVE your writing, I loved the characters !😆

The dialogues were hillarious and awww Khushi is so upset! : (

Loved the recap!😍

Sure we'll see a possessive Arnav, Can't wait🥳

Update sooon pwease pwetty pwincess!😳

Would love to read more🤗
-aparna- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
mya
its sooo long reading this SS, so updt sooonnish


i want updt for thisss:D
hope u get my point;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys!! Here is the last update for this SS!!

I am happy you guys loved this so much! Thanks for all of the support to everyone! It all meant a lot!!

Hope i did justice and now here comes!!

Thanks to the ladies for being so sweet and letting me use their names!

Part 5

Recap: The girls made a plan so now they are going to carry it out.


"Harshu did you find anything yet?" Shuey called out as she searched the bed for anything that would

reveal the man's identity.


"No she didn't. Can't you tell?" Sanzz complained as she paced the room trying to think of something

that would help them.


"Will you guys hold up?! I think I almost found something here!" Harshu called out, hoping that it would

soothe her friends until she actually found something in the laptop.


"What did you find? What did you find?!" Shuey called out as she raced from the bed to Harshu who

was sitting on the couch.


"Give her space dude. Keep looking around the room. We will tell you when we are sure of what we

found,"Sanzz said as she gently nudged Shuey back towards the room.


"Slave drivers," Shuey muttered as she went back to the impossible task of finding clues in that huge

room.


"All right Hershi. Do you have the drink ready?" Aahana asked, making sure that the plan wouldn't fail.


"Ya Aahana. Don't be a prick! Off course I have it ready and before you even ask, I have the plan

memorized too!" Hershi responded, slightly offended by her friend's questions.


"I still think that this is not fair," Nadz pouted as she stood next to Aahana glaring at Hershi.


"Well it really doesn't matter who does it," Lyraa said, trying to maintain peace between the two

girls, "We just need to get this done."


"Well girls," Aahana said, "Let's do this," she continued as she looked to see that the target, the man,

was in position.


"Oh crap…," Harshu said softly as she looked deeper through the laptop, "Crap, crap, crap!" she cried

out as she saw the wedding photos.


"What?!" Sanzz asked as she quickly came to sit by Harshu. Her mouth hung open as she saw the photos herself, "Oh god."


"What is wrong with you two?!" Shuey demanded, happy to have an excuse for not looking around the

room anymore.


"Um… We have a problem…,|" Harshu whispered quietly as she shut down the computer and put it back into its previous position.


"What girl Jiji?!" Khushi questioned as she spun around to look at what her sister was pointing at. Her

mouth hung open in shock at what she saw. There was a girl who was walking, more like sauntering up to her husband with her hands half way in the air. It looked as if she was going to bump into him,

meaning she would drop all of her drink on him. What?! No! She is going to ruin his sherwaani! I bought that for me after such a long search!!! Khushi thought as she watched the girl walk up to him.


"Is that…?" Payal started only to be interrupted by a loud screech.


"Birdie!!" Sanju cried.


"Sanju?" Hershi asked, forgetting the glass in her hand to go see if her friend was okay.


All of the girls ran upstairs to see why Sanju was crying. Nobody else in the party had heard the call since

they had not been close enough to her and even if they had heard, they just assumed her to be crazy for

screaming something like that.


"What happened?!" Lyraa asked as she panted from running up the stairs.


"Omg. Thank god you guys stopped before you followed out throughout the plan," Shuey said.


"What are you guys talking about?" Aahana demanded, her temper rising when she found out that their

plan had been ruined on purpose.


"You guys..," Harshu started only to be interrupted by Payal who had now come to crush them into a big

hug.


"Devi Maiyya! I can't believe it! You guys are here!!" Payal cried as she hugged the closet person to her

which happened to be Ammie, "I knew it! The moment I saw that girl, I knew it was Hershi!"


Forgetting about their temporary problems, all of the girls talked and reminisced about their college life.

They all stood there laughing and smiling for what seemed like the longest time, completely forgetting

that there was a party going on downstairs where they all needed to be.


"Wait, it's really nice to meet you and all, but we want to meet Akash!!!" Ammie said, putting a halt on

the whole getting together ceremony.


"Oh! Off course! I completely forgot about that! Well come! He is right there!" Payal exclaimed and she dragged her friends downstairs.


"Here he is," Payal said as she came to a halt, "Akash meet my friends."


"Hey!" Akash said as he offered his hand for the ladies to shake but none of them were paying attention.


He followed their gaze and saw that they weren't even looking at him, they were looking at the person standing next to him, his brother.


"Oh! I guess you guys haven't met him yet," Akash said, "This is my older brother, Arnav."


"What?!" they all cried out in shock, indignation and many more emotions all just pouring out.


"What the?" Arnav asked in shock since he got distracted from his phone call, "Why are you yelling?"


"You.. What?!" they all said, turning to Payal for answers.


"Khushi! Khushi came over here!" Payal called out to her sister, "Guys this is Khushi! Remember? My sister who I told you about?"


"What?! She is your sister?!" they asked in shock as they remembered seething at how this girl had been openly staring at the amazing man in front of them.


"These are your friends?" Khushi asked in shock as she remembered all of they things they had said about her husband.


"Yes and yes!" Payal answered as she wondered why they were all glaring at each other.


"Khushi tumhara phone," Arnav said as he handed his phone over to her, not noticing anything wrong in the atmosphere in the room.


"Why is he giving his phone to her?" Hershi asked Payal quietly.


"Oh you guys don't know?! Arnav is Khushi's husband!" Payal exclaimed, watching as the expressions of all of her friends went from shock to horror.


"Darn it," Aahana muttered.


"I knew it you guys. He's too hot for us to handle," Lyraa commented.



Thanks to everyone for loving this SS and to Aparna for always telling me to update!!


Whew! One down few things more to go :P


Electric_BuBBle thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES

Yes! I'm first! *Woot Woot*

Hehe, they're whole plan backfired, lol. I'm laughed a lot.

Thanks for the scrap! Is this the end??? I hope not...




Edited by Electric_BuBBle - 13 years ago
AquaBluez17 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Electric_BuBBle

RES

Yes! I'm first! *Woot Woot*

Hehe, they're whole plan backfired, lol. I'm laughed a lot.

Thanks for the scrap! Is this the end??? I hope not...





yes it is the end!!

Thanks for the comment Meggy!!
-Araina- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
R!

🤣 *17234870654991384

Does that explain how much I loved it?

Seriously, great way to end the SS hun.
Loved how their plan back fired and all. The ending was cute how he handed her the phone seeing nothing wrong around him 😆

Lyraa's comment too hot to handle- hilarious!


First SS I read from you and wonderful. Can't wait for others! *ahem-ahem*
Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
AquaBluez17 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
-Araina- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Right?! Same!! Grrr, just got free... I'll read tomorrow. Come on gmail 😛
AquaBluez17 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Right?! Same!! Grrr, just got free... I'll read tomorrow. Come on gmail 😛


coming!
-JollyJabeen- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
There!😃

Just read the update and it was beautiful as usual Mya! : )

No Arshi in the update though😭 but i absolutely adored this SS! Totally cute and intriguing 😆

Keep them coming Mya, Love your writing👏

Stars for your SS:

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CONGOOO CONGRATTTSS : )

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