LARD GOVERNOR AUR USKA PAGAL KUSHI

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shabriya

@shabriya

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

hi guysss,,,,,welll dz z my first creation,,,dzz are only tots of arnav and kushi,,plzz tell me wedr u guys like my writing style so dat i can wind my story,,,,,,,plzz coment

kushi:

He comes in my dreams
my laard governoe.
Intimidating brown eyes
high cheek bones
thick eyebrows
set jaw with no smile
a stare that would
melt any womens heart
But why do i feel,
that stare belongs only to me?
What wont i give
to lean on those broad shoulders
rest my head beneath his chest
put my arms around his neck
hold on tight to him
experience his warmth
I will never let you go
MY arnav ji...
not even if you want to.
standing by the window
I reach out to touch you
"what the"your lips pronounced
I came out of my dreams
afterall it was ASR standing there..

ASR:

when i see the petals of a rose flower
i remember the texture of her skin
i look at the stars at night
i remember her dazzling nose stud
the silver moon reminds me of her
beautiful symetrical face
the inky blackness of the sky around
and the sweet smell of the night flowers
means nothing to me
except her flowing dark and lustrous hair
i close my eyes to take in her beauty
i hear the jingles
of her anklets and her glass bangles
her milky white teeth covered with lips
lucious red lips
big round eyes sheltered by long lashes
her hands with beautiful long fingers
resting on her slim waist
rabbave..has she been created with
all these wonders of nature??????
or is it because of her
that i appreciate all these wonders?
she is my symphony
music which runs through my veins
tune with a name
kushi kumari gupta,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

so guys z my admiration good atleast up to an extent?????shal i build my storyyy??????guys after readin plzz dooo coment and read the story as well,,for wich da links are given below,,chapter one is in this page itself,,,guyss dnt stp with like plzz do coment f u like my FF and need me to update

Part 1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi

Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=2

Part 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=4

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=6

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55492275

Part 6: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912756&TPN=12�

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=16

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=23

Part 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=29

part 10:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56425742

part 11::https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56516215

part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=52

part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=61

Part 14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57576742

part 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi

part 16:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi

Part 17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59793163

Edited by shabriya - 13 years ago

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merrydock

@merrydock

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

honestly!!!!! it was beautiful, an ode to each other. lovely. and i loved it . i loved the simplicity of the words. good joy keep it up👏👏👏👏

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MARYAM

@barun_lover

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

ur writing style is different but nice ... u shoul build a story and update soon ...thanx 4 the pm

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Saima

@Diaphanous

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

It was beautiful. Plz continue!

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khirat_ali

@khirat_ali

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

u should start building story now and whenever u post it plz pm me 😊

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

wowh shabi!!

mast hei yr..

tu tho mere soch ke bahar nikli,,

next tym kahani likhi tho do p.m me,.

by the way , i am farah ..

ab yeh mat kehna kon farah..the buddu farah 😉

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shabriya

@shabriya

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

KUSHI

it was night time,,kushi was standing at the balcony in shanthiwan,,it was a beautiful starry sky,,and it was cold.kushi stood looking at the sky,her duppatta wrapped around herself to keep warm.it was the last night that she is going to spend their,it was the last night of their agreement.she will be free from tomorrow,not kushi sing raizada but just kushi,
she could not say whether she felt happy or sad.she did not know the reason for arnav's action six months back until today and neither will she come to know in future,she was depressed,she had loved the man,,deeply,but she was not able to understand what went through him,at times he comes so close to her,,and makes her happy,but sometimes he goes faraway,treating her as if she was something bad even to touch.he was unpredictable almost like the weather.
she had been thinking what should be done.and finally she has decided.she would go.she could not bear to look at the hatred in arnav's eyes.she would go to that place.and never turn back.

ARNAV

he was lying on his bed,hands beneath the back of his head."is kushi aware what day it is tomorrow?"he had it in his mind from the morning,he wanted to remind her,but whenever he goes to her somehow his tongue seems to be tied.secretly,he did not want to let her go."its a deal.should i tell her?where would she go?and what if i loose her?well..what bothers me,,it doesn't make any difference,if she is here or not.she is a cheat.or is she?does her eyes not portray innocence?"he was battling between his mind and heart.not knowing what he exactly felt for the girl.
"Anyway shyam seems to have gotten rid of his attraction to kushi.he looks after di well.maybe the feeling of being a father has gotten the better of him.so what about kushi?i have not crossed my limits with kushi within this short period.i have not even given any thoughts to such things as that.she can take her decision.the deal is over.its upto her and i dont care,Arnav Sing Raizada never lets feelings to rule over his deals."

how can arnav be so sure??that he has not crossed his limits???is shyam what he seems to be???o is he different from inside?where will kushi go??

well what do u think of it???im doin it juz for fun,,but if its soo boring to read do tell me,,il stop torturin u guys.all ur negativ coments are very kindly aceptd.if u need me to update do coment,and if u need pm's fr my updates den buddy me

dz z chapter 2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2912756/lard-governor-aur-uska-pagal-kushi?pn=2

Edited by shabriya - 13 years ago

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

WOW

so beautifully written loved it😉

thanx for the pm

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PRI

@ambishika

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

awww it was really nice one

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

heya interesting start...

loved the first part..

will look forward to seeing how you shape up the story...

continue soon..

and thanks for the pm..: ]

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