Hey ppl i have written a new fan fic plz read it and say whether i shld continue it or not..........
plz.........plz..........
Mansen and Siddhart goenka are brothers…….they love each other a lot……..mansen is the elder and siddhart the younger………They both had love marriages………Mansen to shaukuntala…….and siddhart to gunvanti,whose shakuntala's sister ……..❤️
And they thought life will all roses for them ………..but no it was full of thorns,……….💔
Why?? You will come to know soon………let me introduce other characters……..
Mansen has three sons………
Suraj
Arjun
Yuvraj
Siddhart has one daughter
Priti
Mansen and siddhart own one of the biggest business empire in India ==GOENKA INDUSTRIES……….so they are smart intelligent rich and………….hen pecked husband's………..😲
Exactly………now lets see what's going on in heritage house……..
Mansen and Siddhart arrive from office and as soon as they enter …they find shakunatal standing ………Mansen starts sweating seeing her😔 and his expression changes from happy to frightened one………….
M: (very sweetly) arre shaku!! Tum mera intezaar kar rahi thi ….mujhse aane mein zara der ho gayi isiliye………😊.
Shakuntala watches him with narrowed eyes and then😡
S: ham …theek smajha aapne main aapka hi intezaar kar rahi thi………..kaha the aap……..itni der laga di
M: who!! Darling main office main tha………bahut kaam tha naa (smiles) kyun siddhart(looking at sid)😊
S: achcha!! Par jab maine phone kiya tha………who bhi 4 baje office walon ne to kaha ki aap office se jaa chuke hai……….aur ab aap 9 baje ghar aa rahe hai….hmmm😡 😡
Now standing with her hand on her hip……..
S: itni der kaha samay barbad kar rahe the……….huh!!😡
M: who….uh……..(sweats fearing shakunatala)main……..(looking at sid)
Sidhhart comes to rescue:
Si: who bhabhi hum kisi meeting pe gaye the………..
S: achcha meeting pe gaye the………kaha……BLITZ restaurant main thi aapki meeting……😡
Mansen and sid are shocked😲……….they wonder how did she come to know abt their outing……….they went for outing because the day they come early to home they have to prepare the food and do other chores……..
S: ab bhut banker kyun khade ho……….mujhe jawab chahiye……..
M: darling.........
S: koi darling varling nahi………tum dono ki saza ye hai ki aaj raat ka khana tum banoge samjhe………aur haan jaldi hume bhuk lag rahi hai………😡
M: par
S:HMMM!!jao kitchen main jaldi khana banao………main aur gunvanti tab tak garden main baithe hai……….
As soon as she leaves ………..mansen and sid go to kuitcfhen to cook the food…..
M: (cutting onions) sid….baharwalon ke liye to hum bade industrialists hain……..par ghar main ……….ghar main hum humari biwiyon ke naukar……..hai(crying)😭😭
Well mansen was crying since he was cutting onions
Si: (cutting French beans) hmmmm……..main to soch raha hoon ki kya dekhkar aur kis muharaat par par humne in do bhootniyon se 27 saal pehle shaadi ki thi……….🤢😭
M: (turning to look at sid and literally dropping the knife) bas sid……bas ab aur nahi……main ye aur nahi she sakta……..27 saal se hum is ghar ke malik kum …………..naukar jyaada rahe hain………aur ye do maharaniyan......
In frustration……….lifts the knife up and holds up
M: jee karta hai……….dono bhootniyon ka khoon kar doon………😡😡
Si: jee bhaiyya ...........main bhi
Just then gunvanti appears on the kitchen……….seeing them both talk she gets annoyed……
Gu: ye kya baatein ho rahi hai……….😡
Seeing her mansen puts the knife down and smiles at her…..and sid turns to look back
Si: nahi……….nahi
Gu: ye nahi nahi kya kar rahe ho………yaha bhaisaab se baatein hi karte rahoge ya phir khana bhi jaldi banaoge.........
Si: bana hi tho raha hoon darling
Meanwhile mansen starts cutting onion with a double speed fearing that any moment his wife would also appear on the scene……….
Gu: khaak bana rahe ho bhaiyya se baatein chal rahi hai……….ab jaldi khana banao aur phir meri saariyan bhi to press karni hai naa……
Si: par uske liye to laundry aur gahnu kaka bhi to hai
Gu: saza yaad hai naa……ya phir bulaon didi ko bulaoon .........hmmmm
Hearing "didi" mansen turns around…..
M: arre nahi nahi………..apne didi ko mat bulao......(using his hands to say no plz)
M: (looking at sid) sidhart jaldi kaam karo warna aaj raat ka khana bhi hume naseeb nahi hoga………..plz….hum kaam kar rahe hai gunvanti ...........shakunata ko mat bulao(with feared expression in his face)
Gu: Good!! Khana banne ke baad humme bulana……..hum bhaiyya ke kamre main baithkar humari favorite film "fanna" ki dvd dekh rahe hain………..Usme aamir kya lag raha hai……isiliye hume bina reason disturb mat karna……..
Mansen and siddhart: JEE
M: hmm!! Fanaa………inhe dekh kar to lagta hai…..ki mujhe bhi aamir ki tarah inhe mar kar terrorist ban jaana chahiye……….waise bhi inhe maarkar desh ka bhala hi hoga………. 😡
M: (still crying) 😭Humme rasoiya banakar rakh diya(sings a song) humse ka bhool hui …..ke yeh saza humka mili………….(wiping his tears with back of his hands……….)
They prepare food………..
thats all...........plz respond.........on the basis of comments i will think whetehr to continue this or stop it here itself.............😊
thanks😊
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