OS: shower ki pani ya mohabbat ki chingari

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok madhu (moonkmh) was asking me to write an OS. I cant write new one right now, so posting the scene I wrote for shibz's 'bathroom thread'. fun post tha. this scene is the one where arjun is in kumud's room and arohi has come to steal or keep the credit card back. tab arjun use pakad leta hai. but singu ke room mein agar attached bath hoti toh unhe aise scene bahut baar mil sakte the na😆. aise majak mein likha hai.
so bathroom is really there in singu's room. and kumud ke room mein jo scene hua woh yaha par hua, haan kumud ko sabak sikhane arohi credit card singu ke bathroom mein chipane aayi thi aur last sec mein arjun entered leaving her shocked to wits and she had no choice but to hide


jab bahar nikalna chahi tab arjun ne pakad liya aur u know woh scene jo already dikhaya woh hua. waha se continue karenge.
arohi - 'jaane do'

arjun - 'sach'

arohi - 'please'

arjun - 'nai jaane diya toh'

arohi trying to make some deal. looks at the horrible pink bathrugs and strikes a deal with him.

arohi -'main woh bathrugs nikaal dungi agar chod diya toh'

arjun - 'rehne do mujhe ab aadat ho gayi woh color'

arohi thinks again, she is not even bothered now about the condition they are in, she only wants to make a deal

arohi - 'main woh saare towels nikaal dungi waha se'

arjun - 'woh bhi rehne do'

arohi - 'uss rack mein tumhe jyada space dungi'
arjun - 'nai chahiye'
arohi - 'yeh wall paper nikalva dungi, red and pink combinatio bahut ganda hai, pehle jaisa karvadungi'
arjun - 'humare room se match karta hai rehne do'
arohi - 'room ka bhi color change karavungi , phele jaise'
arjun tempted to take this offer, he was fed up with his room. but from what will he gain more? this is so much better compared to tolerating the pink.
arjun - 'tumhare sath rehne ke liye uski bhi aadat daal diya hai, rehne do'
arohi - 'phir kya loge'
arjun looks at her lips and returns to her eyes. she knows what he asked. even with so much water around, her throat is dry.

arohi now was not sure if she wanted to leave or stay. she too keeps staring at him

arjun - 'tumhe jaana nai?'

arohi - 'kahan'

water still hitting them both as while talking they moved again.

no bua to disturb coz when she came daadi took her to back yard to show the garden. kumud apne room aa bhi gayi, toh yeh dono apne room mein hai na ab, kyunki arjun ki own bathroom hai, so it doesnot matter even if kumud is back in her own room.

arjun - 'kahi nai, isiliye toh pakda hai'

arohi - 'kya'

arjun '- kya nahi, kise'

badi mushkil se sharafat dikhayi. kya ka bhi jawab de sakta tha.

arohi - 'oh'

she is now not even trying to make any deal.


arjun - 'u know, ek deal kar sakte hai. hum yeh jo jhagda karte rehte hai sirf ek dusre ko bhadkane ke liye, yeh sahi nai lagta mujhe'


now they are out of water, because it is disrupting them to see properly.

arjun has now left her to grab a towel. arohi is still under the impression that she is not free and holding on to his shoulder.


use pata bhi nai chala arjun phir se kab use pakda.

arohi - 'mujhe bhi nahi karni hai'

arjun - 'phir hum dono fighing karna chod de?'

arohi - 'main chod sakti hoon par tumhe sorry bolna hoga'

arjun - 'sorry kyun, mujhe aphsos nahi hai ki maine tumhe yaha rok liya'

creasing her cheeks and her lips that are wet.

he makes them more wet by shaking the head. (kitchen ke paas jaisa kiya tha).

arohi - 'aaj ke liye nahi, uss din ke liye jab dhoke se shaadi kiya tha'

arjun - 'tumhe sach mein bura laga ki maine shaadi ki, main toh uss kabootar se bachaya tumhe'

giving her back a light stroke. the purple wet tee made it not so smooth. but the effect was the same to both.

arohi - 'nai, bura nai laga'

use question samajh mein aaya but jhagda karne se accha yeh scene better laga.

arjun - 'phir hum jhagda kyun karenge'

arohi - 'nahi karenge'

arjun - 'deal?'

arohi - 'deal'

arjun - 'sorry'

arohi - '?'

arjun - 'tumhe bhigone ke liye, bura maan gayi?'

(in mind thinks, sorry tumhe dhoka deke shaadi karne ke liye aur woh magic se nikli huyi jungle track wali pics sabko dikhane ke liye)

arohi shakes her head no. (in mind thinks 'thanks last minute mien aake tumne shaadi karli varna daily tumhare gam mein chiku shake banake kabootar ke sar pe daalte rehna padta').

itna cute lagi ki isne kiss de diya. dete dete phir se shower ke neeche chale gaye. jo chingari pyaar ki nafrat ke neeche dabi huyi thi woh aag banke bahar aagayi. kiss se jyada pyaar ki nazarien jyada pyari lagi. ek dusre ko dekhte rahe ankhon mein ankhe daal ke. phir se kiss kiya, iss baar vaise ke jaise agar nafrat se nahi mohabbat se shaadi ki hoti. and that kiss melted the remaining little nafrat completely.


episode khatam hone wala hai. so they had to cut short the scene.


arohi recovers so does arjun, but they cannot forget what just happened. like in a trance they come out. daadi and bua ki awaaz aayi neeche se itna zor se ki bathroom mein sunayi diya. stylish yet dheeli construction thi, jaldi jaldi banwaya tha bathroom.


singu was never so proud of his decisions, how thoughtful of him to get his own bathroom in his own chota sa bedroom. kitna fayda hua. arohi se hug kiss and makeup ho gayi, no fighting deal ban gayi, and sorry bhi bol diya. from then on they were head over heals in love again.

kitne fayda hai apne kudhka bathroom hone se. dekho kmh2 ke purane CVs.

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cherry227 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome kavya!

i relived the entire kmh2 magic in this one scene! arohi was such a goner in that scene too 😆

arjun - 'tumhe jaana nai?'

arohi - 'kahan'

arjun - 'kahi nai, isiliye toh pakda hai'
arohi - 'kya'

arjun '- kya nahi, kise'

badi mushkil se sharafat dikhayi. kya ka bhi jawab de sakta tha. 😳 😆

super cute! you should really write more of such scenes which the CV's messed up or didnt use to its potential in the serial 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆 at title sooo Cute and steaming Hot 😉
Hahaha Arohi is damn hilarious bechari lost her senses common anyone would infront of singhu 😳
LOVED it Kavya di once again u created kmh magic 😃
Yaar sachi kitna faida hota agar bathroom Arjun ke kamray mein hi hotah humein aur bhi hot hot scenes miltay! 😆 But I don't think many ppl realized washroom blooper toh koi nahi. Yes Kavya di plzz write more cute scenes can nvr get enough of Arjuhi ❤️

- Meera
Edited by KaranKittu4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Absolutely awesome title di :)

Lol.. I love this OS.. kitna fayda hua jus bcos they had a bathroom lol..
this was also very cute.. dialogues were really amazing..
do write more os' like this.. they are such a pleasure to read
nd they bring back so many memories..

Thanks for the pm nd do write more x
Edited by MsSweetheart96 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lolx . . .cutest os !

seriously ye post Cvs ko dkna chahey. .unhe bhi pta chle washroom k kitne fayde hen. .

haha . . amazng dailouges

u shud write more . .realy enjoy it.

i also had write a scene of washroom in seducing. . if u time,hv a luk.

thnkx 4 da pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVELY OS
JUST WHAT WE WANTED IN THE SHOW
LOVED HIS WORDS

BATHROOM KA FAYDA HO GAYA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res...wat a title!!!luvd it...will read and cmmnt soon😊
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome kavya
i wish u were one of the CVs of kmh2
mysticlover thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haan yaar there is lot of profits in having one's own bathroom!!

and you rock in writing such scenes.. give us more of such scenes..

if the CV's had written such scenes then how beautiful the serial may have been..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Di,cheatng. I want new one. Bt stl i cn read it 100tyms anyway. I jst picturizng d whole scene,haha i love singhu's stylish yet dheeli cnstructn. Is case pe ullu wale jeet gaye,unka cnstructn acha hi tha,nt dheela one. Nxt d kiss,oho pyar ki dabi hui chingari shower ke undr ake full power main jal utha hai. Agar aise chala hota to mere amanpreet dadi ke goad main khel rahe hote...

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