Originally posted by: ...Maham...
Hey Sana,
Watched your VM yesterday but didn't get any time to post feedback.. Watching it again now. Note of caution: I'm trying to watch TVD, Na Bole Tum Na Maine Kuch Kaha and your VM all at the same time so please excuse me if the comment is a little all over the place. 😆
Firstly overall a really good job done, the song is not one of my favorites but I still really liked this VM. You have worked really hard on this one, I always find the idea of making a VM on 2 or 3 couples a little tough especially when I'm not familiar with all of their scenes.. so you're better than me in that department. 😆
Agree to that, at many points i was switching to my old pc and watching old episodes or fastforwardly going to vms made by others.. Ibetter in this, i still doubt that😳
Okay coming to the VMs.. I really liked the starting.. All those smiles.. they were so rare with PriDa, makes them even more special for me. 😍 I LOVED the one where Prithvi is wearing that purple shirt. That was very well manipulated to look like a smile from a man in love. 👍🏼 I'm so going to use that now. :P :P Moving on, okay I admit I have no idea when the scene where they fool around with that football happens.. but I loved the rise in the music when the ball actually hits Pri. That's one more bit you aced at: The synchronization of the scenes against the music.. very well done. I always love when the lifts in the music are captured by actual things happening in the scene and random motions getting emphasized on due to the changes in music rather than the use of effects. Anyhow, I did recognize atleast one of the bits in the scene where Prithvi is in green and white as the point where he talks about how he'd like his wife to be. He looks so rugged and rough.. his attire is definitely one that would be worn by a man who worked with horses. He became a little more groomed once he came to Mumbai. 😆 Thank God for that, I like realism and all but I like guys wearing something decent a little more. :P That description about said wife-to-be BTW! Look at what he got! 🤣Such a git he is, marriage for him was so material in a way. He wanted a girl who'd just live in the same house as he, not really live with him. She'd live by his ways and she would never ever dare cross her limits or trying to change him. Change was such an impossible concept for PriDa while Control was everything to them. It's amusing really that when they fell in love, they changed in ways they couldn't have thought plausible and they let go of that need of control and order in their lives and simply gave in to each other, mind, heart, body and soul. Letting go was never more beautiful. 😍
Loved reading these lines 😊😊
Err okay that was out of nowhere, coming back to your VM.. where were we? 🤔 Oh yes, PriDa share that adorable handshake where holding onto Damini's hand is so natural to Prithvi that he forgets the fact that the world and its ways demand of him to let go. Beautiful moment that. The scene shifts to Prithvi letting the rain soak him through, that is the 2nd thing that I loved in your VM, the scenes you show between the siblings really give the VM a nice touch, there is the concept of the word Family inherent throughout the VM and it reminds me tremendously of the show giving off a familiar vibe so thumbs to that as well. It's natural really, to fall in love and talk to your sisters and brothers about it. I should be positively ashamed of always being so single mindedly focused on PriDa that I forget the other things I loved about the show. *thoroughly embarrassed*
Coming to SaVni's introduction in the VM: Brilliantly done again where the music and scene synchronization is concerned. Sameer's dream of Avni was perfect against the music and of course how the music changes when he wakes up. The humming by the female set against Avni's err twirling was really nice to watch.
Okay going back to PriDa :P :P
I loved the scenes you picked for the lyrics,
Jo bhi kehna na tha, woh bhi kehne lage,
Jo bhi sunna na tha, woh bhi sunne lage
That was really well done, the silent communication in their eyes in the first scene about the sheer want within them and the utter complete silence that surrounded them in the second so that there was nothing to hear except the sound of their own heartbeats and the sounds of their thoughts, and that mad, crazy attraction that they felt as they stood so close to each other.
that was aptly described😊, couldnt have said that betterComing to SaVni, I liked the scene where Avni is standing by the window and laughing and smiling as she reminisncenes about Sameer. Sameer looks like one pakka suitor in all their scenes btw, all the smiles he's giving to her and the reasons he manages to procure out of thin air to merely touch her in some way definitely create that image of him. Then there is the scene where Roshni is err either going on about her dream guy or Varun.. Loved Damini in this one. The sheer amusement in her eyes gives such a clear hint of skeptic within her when it comes to matters of love. Can totally relate to that. 😆 Loved the start to Varun and Rosh's story as well.. The scene was once again very much in sync with the music. Seriously it's great that you utilized the music well, most people just add filler scenes or stretch the scene that was being played against the lyrics.
And we are back to PriDa, nicely done.. Damini's smile was beautiful while Prithvi's.. *sigh* definitely had underlying sadness to it. Love the look they exchange in the beginning though when she initially places his arm on her shoulder. That scene has such a mills n boonish setting to it.. She's even in her nightgown. :P 🤣 But ofcourse PriDa were always about propriety. *coughs* Well err almost always anyway. :P :P Okay coming to rest of the VM.. I loved that scene where Rosh throws the umbrella away and dances and Varun watches on. As for the Sameer Prithvi scene..Which one is this? Is it the time where Sameer tells Prithvi that Ela wants a background check done of him? I loved how Prithvi moved away and Sameer stumbled.. 😆 Lemme know if you remember the date to this one if you have time.
thats 8th October, but i dont have link to that😳
Anyway the end was really nice, definitely gave a culmination of sorts to all three love stories. Overall the story was nicely told and my ramble should give you a very good idea about how much I liked the VM. 😆
thanks Maham... length of your response, said it all😊.. but i was still searching for the slight criticism on it, i did expected that😛
Looking forward to more from you!!
Maham.
You liked my vm, that makes me glad and responding with detailed feedback, i am double glad to that.. Thanks for your time, Maham.. take care😊