ManeetSS Life A Paradise With You!!!!pt4 pg22 27/3 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sakshi superb dear 👏,please update the 4th part soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy nt updated since dayz
pls update soon
dying for an update
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Posted: 13 years ago

dear..😛..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved his date n proposal...

precap is interesting...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy not fair
its almost a month since u updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey hi...
I really liked this story
could u plz pm me da future updates..
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the delay yaar...loved the update
Maan proposed and she said yes...wow
Precap is very interesting
u haven't updated in long...pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a ton for lovely responses people... i love reading them all... because of the network problem i am unable to like your comments but plz imagine for sure that i liked each and every word of yours... Although i was busy with my university work but accidentally i am at two whole days bed rest... so rather than wasting time in sleeping i thought to update if network supports me... so here i am guys with the current status as

Updating!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey longg tym no see
update ssoonn na
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Posted: 13 years ago

@all- thank you so much for the lovely responses...


Maan simply smiled and hugged her back allowing her to fill the void in his life…

They both left for the home that day waiting for the wonderful life coming ahead….



Part 4

As soon as he entered his room he found his sister waiting for him looking at the clock… he smiled looking at her cute gesture and slowly pounced on her yelling her name loud…

She screamed her larynx out in fear and when noticed her brother involved in this act. Started running behind him and he started running after from her… both were running in the whole house screaming and laughing and she was chasing him…

While running he reached his father's room and he was studying sitting on the couch… he went behind him and stood there when she came running and saw her father looking at both of them one by one….

Stuti came towards him screaming

Stuti:- bhaiya aaj aap nahi bachoge….

Maan:- haan haan to come on catch me…

Mr. Khurana:- one min both of you.. what happened???

Stuti:- papa bhaiya ne mujhe daraya aur who bhi kaan pe…

Maan:- nahi papa I was calling her name and she started beating me for no reason…. Papa ye aapki laadli jungli ho gayi hai…. She needs humanity classes…

Stuti:- papa look at you dear son… he is behaving all innocent and calling me jungli… papa mai jungli hoon…

Mr. khurana:- I saw you both fighting in the same way 15 years ago too… both of you haven't change a bit… who is going to say that the mr. serious type Maan Singh Khurana actually behaves as a kid with his ready to be married sister…

Stuti:- papa I am not ready to be married… I'll not go even a meter away from you both… I hope you get my point..

Maan:- why??? Aren't you planning to get married???

Stuti:- no I'll become a saint rather staying away from you both…

Maan:- but as long as I am here I'll let you go away asap.. we want humans in our home.. don't worry I'll make sure I get you married to a jungli as same as you.. you will not have to face adjustment problems…

Saying so he showed her his tongue and both father son started laughing…

Stuti:- hasiye hasiye… I hope aap log kaafi enjoy kar rahe honge… I am no more needed her… so I am leaving…

She left from there frowning….

Mr. khurana:- attitude to bilkul apne bhai jaisa hai… I don't know how is she going to cope her life with such anger….

Maan:- papa bachhi hai.. don't worry I know her… she is a diamond… I'll take care of her.. abhi she might have gone to terrace and might be sitting on swing muh fula ke… I'll see…

Mr. Khurana:- okay beta…. Only you can handle her….

Maan left from there smiling…

As expected she was sitting there looking at the moon when he patted her shoulder and she ignored…. He sat beside her and made her looking towards him….

Maan:- kya hua meri gudiya ko????

Stuti always melts in front of his loving gestures… she hugged him and said….

Stuti:- bhaiya pata nahi q mujhe darr lagta hai….

Maan looked at her all confused…

Stuti:- bhaiya aap mujhe chodke kahin jaaoge to nahi na…

Maan looked at her eyes full of tears… he simply smiled at her and hugged her saying

Maan:- my princess is my strength.. then why is my strength talking like weak types.. hmm???

Stuti looked at him and said….

Stuti:- bhaiya I am sacared to be away from you….

Maan laughed at her cuteness and said…

Maan:- don't worry princess … wherever your brother will be, he will always be with you… (he said imitating a kid) you are my sweet dolly polly lady don na…

Stuti smiled and hugged him and then she remembered for what she was waiting for him and she yelled

Stuti:- bhaiyaaa…. Nonsense talks apart first tell me how was the date???

The date reminded her of Geet and a sweet smile crept over his lips… seeing him smiling stuti guessed but pretended to be unaware kept on looking at him…

Maan:- which date??

Stuti:- don't act oversmart bhaiya… just tell me when should I start my hunger strike????

She said frowning…

Maan:- you don't need to do hunger strike princess because…..

Stuti looked at him with her eyes wide opened and demanding for more words and her mouth murmuring

Stuti:- because?????

Maan:- because she said yes…..

Stuti shouted in disbelief and started jumping with joy…

Stuti:- wow bhaiya you've done it…. I am proud of you… aapne meri naak bacha li… great… bhaiya I wanna talk to bhabhi…

Maan was laughing watching his little sister jumping In his happiness and adored her when her bhabhi word reminded him o f Geet…

Stuti:- hello mr romeo !!!! I said I wanna talk to bhabhi….

Maan:- abhi???

Stuti:- why not abhi????

Maan:- sure pagli…

Saying so he took out his phone and started dialing her number..

Surbhi:- hmm so how was it???

Asked surbhi to geet whowas still lost in the thoughts of her new status of being in a relationship with the most eligible bachelor of the city but for her he was Maan and he told her that on the way back home… her dreams with open eyes got interrupted and she looked at her bhabhi with questioning eyes…

Geet:- how was what bhabhi????

Surbhi:- your date !!!!

Geet:- amazing!!!!!

she said not paying attention to the situation and surroundings….

Surbhi smiled at her reaction and asked

Surbhi:- amazing huh !!! did he proposed you???

Geet who got now that her bhabhi is taking out all the secrets from her inner self got up and said..

Geet:- bhabhi I need to do an assignment…

Surbhi pulled her back and said….

Surbhi:- madam mujhe nahi bataegi to kisko bataegi??? Maan ko…. Haan bhai hum to paraye ho gaye ab to…

Geet smiled at her bhabhi's emotional blackmailing and said

Geet:-meri filmy bhabhi … bolo kya jaanna chahti ho???

Surbhi got excited and said

Surbhi:- sab kuchh


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Posted by: priya_21

7 years ago

Is life a Dream? S#2/pt 3/4/PG11/16/11 NOV

Hey all of you welcome all in Maaneet sweet world one more painful story i hear " Kitni girhein kholi hai maine" a nd feel this going perfect

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