OS- I can feel your heartbeats (OS on Arshi/Arhi)

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uamaz

@uamaz

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

That was good, what did Khushi do with him?hmm... 😳

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Neha

@Khushi4Arnav

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Hey... Well YOU made a PERFECT OS.. just don't leave it Unfinished..

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

You write soo well.. please continue with the intensity and Amusement you've build through your perfect words n expressions. Thank you so much for Penning down all the details. I am glad you have shown the Potential this Situation had but CVs seemed to rush it over...

Loved your writing to bits

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

I loved it, please continue.

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ashu

@white.band

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

dis is a gud one...great...continue😃

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Heya Shwetz..🤗

okie i hv 2 admit b4 watchin da holi epi i imagined dis whole scene which u've written mre r less da same..n i soo wanted it 2 happen..bt sadly it didnt..😒

while readin dis i relived all da holi moments n i could only sigh..😍

it was sooo beautifully written..❤️

thnks 4 da pm sweets n dnt 4gt 2 pm me wen u update nxt..😃

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

great OS...very nicely written!!
love this abt ASR...always successful in turning the tables in his favour..here too khushi ended being questioned !! plz continue it!!