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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ana1411




I AM SO SORRY GUYS... I AM NOT ABLE TO UPDATE ANY OF THE FF AND SS... I WAS DOWN WITH FEVER AND WAS THEN BUSY WITH MY WORK... BUT WILL UPDATE IT SOON...

take good care of yours first sweetheart. hum sab to yahi hai... kahi nahi jaa rahe... we will wait...take your time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its ok dear get well soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww poor geet :(
nice part
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago




THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL RESPONSE...PLEASE PLEASE KEEP ON GIVING SUCH RESPONSE... IT REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME...






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THANK YOU SO MUCH KEEPING PATIENCE... I AM MUCH BETTER NOW...


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome..
upd.
loved all d 3 parts...
do cont.soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Savitri puts her hand on head and moves it to her hair: Geet till the time I am there…….. Nothing will happen to you….. Now onwards you will stay in this room………

Savitri hugs Geet tightly……..

After that day Geet never went into her own room…… She use to be in the room which Savitri had given to Geet………

Yash tried his level best to cheer Geet but everything was in vain………. Geet was still very scared to even face Maan……

On the other side Maan was just getting restless……… Whenever he use to come in the room he would feel Geet would be there but he would never find her………. He was getting angry on every small thing……..

Maan: Nakul…………. Why my coffee is still not there………

Nakul comes running: Sorry I did not see you coming……. I will get it now…..

Maan: What do you mean ha……….. Do you want to work here or not………

Hearing Maan screaming Yash comes running……….

Yash: What happen Bro??? Why are you screaming on Nakul……….

Maan: Tum logo ne sab ko bigaad diya hai………. (looking at nakul): What are still doing here……. Go and get my coffee now……

Yash: Bro relax……. Why are you so angry……..

Maan: Yash leave me alone……….

On the other side Geet was getting scared hearing Maan's scream…..

Geet just went on one side of the bed cuddling herself…….

Savitri came to call Geet for dinner……. But got worried seeing Geet……..

Savitri: Geet kya hua…….

Geet (looking sacred): just looks at her…….

At the same time Yash came to tell Savitri about how Maan is behaving…… but could not say anything seeing Geet……..

Savitri makes Geet sleep……….and comes out of the room……..

Yash: Mom we need to divert Geet's mind……..

Savitri: Yes you are right………. We have to do something to make her go out of this room……..

Yash: Mom, Geet wanted to study ahead…….. Why don't we convince her to pursue further studies

Savitri: Ya that way she will be busy and will not think about anything else……..

Yash: Ok then I will talk to her………..

Savitri just nods her head and goes…………

Yash goes to her room……….

Yash: Hey Hi Sweetheart……… What are you doing???

Geet: Hi Yash………. Nothing yaar……..

Yash: Bhabhi…….. I have a proposal for you……..

Geet: Please don't tell me Bhabhi…… You are my best friend…… And what proposal……….

Yash: Ok Geet……… I have bought a form for you of college………… You are doing MBA with me…………

Geet (supper happy): Really………… I always wanted to do MBA……….. Thank you thank you………… But………

Yash understood what she was trying to tell: Mom has given permission…… so not to worry…..

Geet: But Maan……….

Yash: Don't worry about him………..

Geet was very happy that day……….. The happiness was clearly seen on her face………….

Geet was back at her chirpiness…….. On the dinner table Maan was not there so Geet was having her best time…………

In the room Maan just not knowing what is happening to him……… Why he was craving to see Geet for once………….

Maan came out of the room and saw Geet laughing and enjoying with Savitri and Yash……. Maan just got lost in her……….

After sometime Geet went to her room and slept……. She was very happy today as she can start her studies again…….

Maan (self talk): I just want her to be mine…………

Maan was going towards the terrace where he had to pass from Geet's room……..

Geet had forgotten to lock the room in excitement………..

Maan entered the room and was stunned to see Geet sleeping peacefully…….. She was looking beautiful...

Maan started walking towards Geet's bed……….. Something happens to her whenever he sees Geet……… He wanted Geet to be in his arms………

Maan goes near Geet and touches her cheeks….. Geet shivers in her sleep…….. Geet can feel the touch……… She gets up from the sleep suddenly………. And start looking here and there but could not find anyone around………

Geet (self talk): No one is here…….. Then why did I felt he was touching me…..

Maan had walked away when he saw her shivering………..

Maan was looking from outside……..(self talk): Geet you will be mine very soon……

Yash was passing by and saw Maan standing there……….

Yash: Bro what are you doing here…………

Maan: Nothing…….. aap sab logo ne milkar Geet ko mujhse alag kiya hai……

Yash: Bro humne alag nahi kiya…….. Because of your attitude she is away from you……….

Maan gives an angry glare: What do you mean???? She is my wife and I have full right on her……….

Yash: Yes you have full right on her but not the way you are trying to get her……

Maan gives an angry glare to him and walks away……

Yash(self talk): I don't understand does Bro loves Geet or it is just a lust like he has for others…….. I really want my real Bro back and Geet and Bro can be a very good couple…………..

Maan goes into his Gym and starts working too hard……

Maan(self Talk): Why I am getting attracted to her so much……. What is this Unknown Desire which is developing……………

Precap: Geet joining the college

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
post nxt part soon
not so late plzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it


feelung bad for geet


when yash is here no to fear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its awesome dear...
Waiting for the next part...😍
Plz add me in ur pm list...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

now maan is having different emotion running in his mind

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