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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry guys my pc ditched me...
now i am typing again... 😭
just one more hour... i am so sorry...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

sorry guys my pc ditched me...
now i am typing again... 😭
just one more hour... i am so sorry...



it's ok dear...
take your time...
one news is here and that is i am also writing epilogue..reached to it's end almost...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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it's ok dear...
take your time...
one news is here and that is i am also writing epilogue..reached to it's end almost...


oh wow... really will u update today... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


oh wow... really will u update today... 😊



will try dear... now i am going... bye tc..
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Originally posted by: neha5058



will try dear... now i am going... bye tc..



bye..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 6:


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Nt saw the photo in the wallet n was shocked to see that.

There is a gropu photo of priya, maan n geet. Maan is in the middle n hugging both geet n priya.

Geet photo maan ki wallet mein??? thought confused nt.

By the way where is maan??

She went to maan's cabin but he is not there in his cabin. When she was about to go from there, maan came with a file to his cabin.

Hey nt, u here?? asked maan.

Hii maan, umm nothing came here to give ur wallet which u forgot in the caf told nt.

Maan took the wallet immediately n told thanku nt.

What are u hiding maan?? asked nt.

What are u asking?

Dont act maan, why u are acting that u hate geet, n again keeping her pic in ur wallet asked nt.

Maan looked at her shocked n toldnot now nt I have work. We will talk later.

Maan I never saw u running away from someone or something. But this is first time n I am finding it strange told nt.

Kabhi kabhi bhaag jaana hi acha hain told maan.

Aisa kya hua maan asked nt.

Maan smiled sadly n told when ur friend ur life hurts u very much then how it will be??

matlab?? asked nt.

U dont understand nt told maan.

Ok maan, I dont know what happened between u n geet, but one thing hatred is not the slotion for all told nt.

But in our case we didnt choose anything it just happened.

You created the situation like that maan.

No nt all it happened in its own way.

Maan can I ask u something?

Yes..

Do u love geet??

Maan smiled sadly n told I have work nt. Bye.

Saying so maan left from there.

Nt (st): Some thing is there which u r hiding, but I cant do anything. I have talk with priya aakhir hua kya hain.


Here all of them working under their respective boss. Maan n geet are in same group n assigned some work. But they divided into modules n started doing their work so that they dont face each other.

But here maan is doing his work but geet is not at all able to concentrate on her work. She is thinking about the morning incident n maan's rude behaviour.


Always she will be rude to him but for the first time when maan behaved rudely with her she felt bad. Now she came to know that how maan felt these years. But what can she do when she is at guilt. She cant do anything neither she apologise him nor stay away from him. Because for what she did apology will be very small. She is all this because so that she can stay with him either by fighting.


But once a person is hurt very deeply by his best friend, that too without his mistake then how can that person will be normal. But here maan thought that one day the truth will be out n she will understand that there is no mistake of him. But how will she know the truth ? Will the misunderstanding between them be cleared.


Hey geet wished pari who entered her cabin.

Geet came out of her thoughts n smiled at her.

Hey pari, tum yaha? Asked geet.

Ahh kuch nahi geet, I need ur help in this design yaar. I didnt understand asked pari.

Arey give me I will explain u told geet n took the file from her.

Geet going through the file but not able to concentrate fully. Pari is observing her, eventhough she may be quite excited for small things n act crazy at times but when it comes to geet she will not fail to understand her afterall they are friends from childhood.


What are u thinking geet ?asked pari.

hu.. uh.. nothing pari, just checking the file told geet nervously.

Kyun jhoot bol rahi ho geet tum? Asked pari.

Why will I lie pari asked geet.

See geet, why u r suffering urself ek baar maan se baat karo. Sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Kuch bhi thik nahi hoga pari, I crossed my all limits n hurted him badly. I dont know truth at that time, I thought maan is responsible for what happened at that time.

Geet its just a small misunderstanding, u can clear it now.

Geet got up from there n told how can I pari, I lost my best friend years back due to my foolishness.

Aisa nahi hain geet.

Main uske baare mein aur baat nahi karna chata hu told geet seriously.

Ek baat bolo geet, can I know why u will be always fighting with maan?

Geet smiled sadly n told so that I can be close to him n always be in his mind even though it might be hate.

Tum pagal ho geet told pari sadly n left from there.


Here sam n rahul are talking with each other cracking jokes.

Yaar today its just a miracle told sam.

Why what happened? Asked rahul.

Just then dev came there n told arey rahul tum itne bhudhu ho yaar, aaj our tom n jerry didnt fight with each other told dev n hi-fied with each other.

Sach mein yaar, I wonder why they will fight all the time told rahul.

Pata nahi, but we r seeng them from day 1 of our college told sam.


Sam, rahul, dev, adi they all of friends of maneet only from master's college but pari, maan, geet are friends from childhood. So they all think that maneet always fight.

Pari who just came there listened to them n got irritated.

Guys dont u have any work, just go from here told pari angrily.

All are literally shocked to see her angry n shouting too. She never gets angry n always doing some crazy things. But today...

pari tum thik hona asked rahul.

Yes rahul I am fine told pari faking a smile.

Hey pari, its another miracle of the day yaar u n shouting told dev.

Miracle? Asked pari.

Ha yaar, see aaj maan n geet didnt have fight till now told sam laughing out loud.

Stop it sam, always its not good to crack jokes. Try to understand others, do u know why they fight with each other no na, then be quite told pari angrily n left from there.

All are shocked by her sudden ouburst.

Rahul followed pari, but pari bumped with maan who listened her shouting.

Maan wiped her tears n told relax pari, dont get hyper.

Yeh kya ho raha hain maan, I just cant see u both like this. I want my old friends back told pari.

Maan smiled sadly n told dont worry pari, every thing will be fine.

When that day will come maan asked pari.

Leave all these.. ek good news hain told maan.

What?? asked pari.

He is coming back told maan n smiled.

Pari's eyes widened in shock.

Is it true maan?? asked pari.

Yes pari, after 3 long years he is coming told maan.

Wow maan I am so happy, armaan is coming back. When??

Next week he is coming told maan.

Maan did u had talk with him in these years asked pari.

Just once or twice not much.

Ok maan, tomorrow is saturday are you going to orphanage asked pari.

How can I miss that told maan.

Ok I too wanna come told pari.

Ok sure.

Ok have some work, bye maan.

Bye pari.


Saying so maan n pari left for their respective cabins leaving a confused rahul behind.

What they are talking ab yeh armaan kaun hain though rahul.


Later in the evening all of them finished their work. Some how geet too completed her work with great difficulty.

Today she is not feeling like going home early n she called up her bro yash.

Hello gudiya.

Hello veerji, I have some work so I am going to pari's place.

Ok.. but come soon, agar late hua tho mujhe call karna I will come. Ok??

ok veerji sure told geet n cut the call.


Geet didnt go to pari's house even she went to nearby park n sad on the bench looking lost.


Here maan came out of the office n was about to go to parking lot dev came to him.

Hey dude.

Maan smiled at him n wished him too.

Whats up man asked maan.

Ahh nothing dude, wo kya hain na I didnt find ur friend today asked dev.

My friend who? Nt asked maan.

Yes dude, mujhe na usse baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mila told dev n winked at him.

Oh shut up dev, she is not ur type, so back off.

Arey just friends yaar.

Mujhe pata hain tumara 'just friends' ka matlab kya hain told maan.

This is cheating dude, ok I have my own ways to talk to her.

Ha ha carry on I will just call her brother here. Then u can have ur own ways to talk with him told maan n smirked.

Yaar, dhokebaaz tum mera friend ho ya dushman.

Hmm what ever u think told maan n left from there smiling.


Here maan took out his bike n headed to towards his home but he too didnt want to go to his house n went to the same park which geet gone.

Maan parked his bike n sat opposite to geet, facing his back to her. Both of them didnt see each other.

2 hours passed n its 8 pm in the night n its became very dark n cold.

Slowly slowly the atmosphere became very cold n geet is shivering in the cold. She is silently crying n tightly hugged her knees.

Maan who heard some one crying got up n went towards geet. But her dont know that girl is geet.


Maan went there n stood infront of her. Slowly in the moon light he saw her face with is full of tears. He was shocked to see geet there.

Maan (st): geet, what is she doing here in this cold. Why she is crying, do yash bhai know where she is? He must be worried by now. Yeh ladki bhi na bilkul pagal hain.


Geet called maan.

Geet suddenly looked at maan n wiped her tears.

Geet, what are u doing here in this cold. Chalo go home told maan.

No I dont want to go home told geet stubbornly.

Geet, just stop these childish acts n get up told maan irritatingly.

Tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha, I told I dont want to go home. Waise tumko kya farak padta hain told geet.

Maan held her by her shoulders n made her stand.

Chodo mujhe told geet.

Just shut up n come with me told maan.

First leave me n second who r u to tell me told geet.

Maan held geet tightly by her shoulders, his eyes are spiltting fire.


Kya kaha tumne who am I? Right?? I am nothing to u now. Why u didnt ask me all these questions before when I use to care for u. when I use to pamper u n get u what ever u asked. Why u didnt ask at that time when I scolded u for not studying well,

why didnt u ask me when we went late to home after attending parties. Why u didnt ask me when I use to annoy u n made u cry n wipe ur tears. Why u didnt ask me when I use to tell lie n we both go for outings. why u didnt ask me when I use to manofy u when u r angry on me for no reasons. when u spent me each n every moment of ur life with me, when u shared each n every small thing with me. Ha geet bolo. Why u didnt ask me all these questions at that time. Because I WAS your friend once but now u hate me. Hain na geet?? bolo ab kyun chup hogayi ho tum. BOLO DAMMIT.

Tears welled up in geet's eyes.

Aisa nahi hain maan.

Dont cry geet, one thing I cant bear is ur tears that day n today too.

Why maan why do u care for me so much asked geet.

Maan held her shoulder even tightly, eventhough geet is feeling pain she didnt tell anything.

I care for u because I LOVE YOU DAMMIT shouted maan.


Precap: geet's reaction..

armaan entry n past...



hello friends so here is part 6. hope u liked it. I know this part is a bit confusing but in nest update all will be cleared.

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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
what happened in the past
i m curious to know
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di jus loved it...
maan confessed...
me sooo happpie..."
wanna know more!!!!!!!!!
who s tis armaan...
di too much of suspense!!!!!!
ufff...
me waiting for more updates😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
just loved it😊
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SURPRISE BUNDLE !!!! I have no words !!!! I feel like am standing lost in the mid of a jungle after reading this update !!! I feel like am in RAHUL's position...not understanding anything going around !!! LOLS 🤣 All i can say is it was just awesome n i loved it a lot !!!!!!

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