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Posted: 13 years ago
i just read parts 9-14 nw as i had gone out of station so sry 4 the late comments n also 4 not commenting on the part 9-13 b4 ... any way coming to my views on th e parts they were exceptional as usual😊 it was a treat reading them n i loved it all bt to emphasise on a few it wld be :
1. the call frm the kids at the ashram (u love playing pranks dont u ??)
2.anjali's idea of sending payal to gupta house n arnav's dailouge on tht
3.thedailouge frm arnav of rules r meant to b broken something tht looked very cute on him n was very unexpected frm him as well
4.hw arnav gets out of his window
5. wt akashn arnav do wid bhuaji 🤣
6 last but not the least the hot air balloon part the convo as well as the scenario
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahah...
woah so amzaing..
plss pm me the next part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
PLZ UPDATE CHAPTER 15 SOON DEAR...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhipoddar

i just read parts 9-14 nw as i had gone out of station so sry 4 the late comments n also 4 not commenting on the part 9-13 b4 ... any way coming to my views on th e parts they were exceptional as usual😊 it was a treat reading them n i loved it all bt to emphasise on a few it wld be :
1. the call frm the kids at the ashram (u love playing pranks dont u ??)
2.anjali's idea of sending payal to gupta house n arnav's dailouge on tht
3.thedailouge frm arnav of rules r meant to b broken something tht looked very cute on him n was very unexpected frm him as well
4.hw arnav gets out of his window
5. wt akashn arnav do wid bhuaji 🤣
6 last but not the least the hot air balloon part the convo as well as the scenario
👍🏼
👍🏼👏👏


ya I would have to agree with you... I just love playing pranks... And I am very glad that you enjoyed the chapters... Thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
blushing princess meeting the charming besharam prince soon
wat is that three blank clues for surprises and the precap is making me crazy
reveal it soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

NOTE:

Sorry guys. i was on a vacation and wasn't able to update sooner as i was completely busy haing fun after my exams. anywho i hope you guys like this chapter. again a special sorry to indy12 and all those who missed my writing. this is for you. hope you guys like it.

CHAPTER 15: HAI REY NAND KISHORE

Khushi was finally getting ready. She opened the door and had let payal in. payal had brought the suitcase that arnav had dropped with her yesterday. When she opened it khushi found jewels and her marriage clothes with a note that read,

Tomato,

I have designed this especially for you. I kept thinking about you and this is the dress that came to my mind. I hope you like it. And forgive me if it is not upto your expectations.

Yours truly,

Raakshas…

Khushi then opened her saree and wore it. As soon as she wore it her and payal's mouth dropped. There was only one word to describe the sight "beautiful". She looked like an angel from heaven. Khushi herself couldn't believe that she could look this beautiful in the saree that arnav had designed for her. She had tears in her eyes. This dress showed how much arnav loved her. It showed how he sae her, the respect in his eyes. Khushi was totally taken aback. Then payal asked her to calm down as she was ruining the little make up that she had put on. She then reapplied her makeup and got ready. She was going to make it upto arnav tonight.

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akash and arnav were still not getting ready and Anjali was furious with them.

Anjali: why don't you both get ready quickly?

Arnav: di whats the hurry.

Anjali: you'll be late and then nani will kill you. She is already stressed out so much.

Arnav: di, don't worry. We aren't girls to take such a long time to get dressed and stuff. We don't need to wear layers upon layers of jewels. All I need to do is get dressed and wear my watch. That is all. Its so simple. And you girls take 2 to 3 hours to get ready. Chi. What a waste of time.

Anjali then pulled his ear to make him stop.

Anjali: I don't care. Just get ready.if the mahurat goes by its you who will be the looser.

Arnav: fine di we'll get ready. Stop lecturing us this much already. And can you leave so that we can change?

Anjali: fine I am going.

Saying so Anjali left.

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naniji was in the mean time talking with the gupta family. She just wanted to make sure that even the gupta family members were equally happy with all the preparations and decorations of the family. The gupta's on the other hand couldn't help but appreciate the beauty of the decorations and arrangements that the raizada's had done in such a small time.

Buaji: you have all done a fabulous job with the decorations. Even though time was less for the preparations you have outdone yourself.

Naniji: areh. We had to do it you know. Its not everyday that arnav is in love and that too with a gem of a girl like khushi bitiya.

Buaji: god bless both of them. Who would have guessed that both of them will fall in love with each other. They always used to fight like 5 year old kids, pulling each other's hair and stuff.

Anjali smiled as she joined the conversation,

Anjali: as they say buaji, Opposites Attract. They kept fighting and after fighting they would calm each other done and fight again. All that just made them realize that they cannot live life without each other.

Garima, buaji and Anjali, all wiped their tears off silently thinking about all that had happened in that year to finally bring arnav to realize his better side and discover his true self.

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buaji: Anjali bitiya, where is akash? Haven't seen him yet?

Anjali: oh akash, he is in arnav's room. He and arnav are getting changed for the wedding. They will be here shortly. Don't worry.

Buaji(thinking): what? Arnav and akash changing in the same room. Chi. Hai rey nand Kishore. What dream did you put me in last night. Because of which I a doubting my arnav bitwa's character like this. But this feeling is so strage. Chi. I hate that dream. Haven't gone more than two seonds until their images come to my mind again and again. I'll just clear my dubt. I'll go and see them. Once I see them normally I think I can relax. Atleast I'll forget that useless memory of my dream.

Saying so she headed to arnav's room.

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arnav and akash had finally decided to get ready. Arnav was still in two minds about wearing a sherwani to his wedding. Though he really wanted to surprise khushi, he really hated the clothing style. Even though he designed many sherwani and all but he was never comfortable wearing them.

Akash: remember bhai. You said that you designed both the sherwani and bhabhi's saree so that you'll look perfect tonight. You cant back off now.

Buaji entered the room silently as no one had answered her knocks at the door. She saw that arnav and akash were standing in the pool side, talking about something. She hid herself to listen to their conversation.

Akash: come on bhai. Let this be for khushi bhabhi.

Arnav: ya you are right. I better do this. Anyway akash, how is your married life going? Are you happy.

Akash was silent he didn't know as to what prompted arnav to ask him that.

Buaji: hai rey nand Kishore I still am not able to listen to what they are talking. I think I should go closer.now then. I think I can hear them now. Yes this is perfect.

Buaji was now able to listen to the conversation.

Akash:it was all thanks to you that I recognized and achieved my love bhai.i cannot say enough thanks to show my gratitude. All I can say is I love you bhai.

Saying so he went and hugged arnav. And arnav hugged him back.

When they broke free,

Akash: now lets get rid of the formals that you are wearing and make you look absolutely stunning.

Arnav then began unbuttoning his shirt to wear his sherwani.

But what they didn't know was that buaji was stunned watching akash profess his love for his brother and arnav starting to undress.

Buaji's eyes widened and she moved forward to confront arnav and akash.

Buaji: NNNOOO ARNAV BABUA… THIS CANT BE HAPPENINING… MOVE AWAY THE PAIR OF YOU…

Arnav and akash looked at buaji and were looking confused. They didn't know what she was saying.

Akash:buaji what happened? Why are you shouting like this?

Buaji: HOW DARE YOU? HAVE YOU BOTH NO SHAME. YOU ARE PLAYING WITH THE LIVES OF TWO INNOCENT GIRLS AND YOU HAVE THE NERVE TO ASK ME AS TO WHAT IS WRONG?

Arnav: but buaji tell us what happened. Why are you lashing out at us?

Buaji: DON'T PRETEND. I KNOW THAT YOU BOTH ARE GAY.

Akash and Arnav in unison: WHAAATTT???

BUAJI: YES I SAW EVERYTHING. I was hiding and I heard akash telling you that he loves you and also that he asked you to remove your clothes and you arnav? Shameless fellow. Undressing for akash? Chi.

Arnav caught buaji as she turned to leave and he shook her to calm her down.

Arnav: buaji akash was helpin me wear my sherwani as it is very heavy. I wasn't stripping for him for god's sake.

Akash: and I said 'I love you' to bhai and thanked him because he and khushiji were the main people responsible for mine and payal's marriage. That is why I told him I love him buaji. I even tell my mom that. dont take it in THAT sense.

Buaji started to see reason. As soon as she realized she looked away clearly embarrassed, while arnav and akash started to laugh out loud. They couldn't help but laugh.

Buaji: sorry babua, I got confused because of a nasty nightmare I had last night. Please don't think bad of me because of this incident.

Saying so buaji ran out of the room as she was feeling quite foolish while arnav and akash continued to laugh seeing as to what their last night's stunt had resulted in.

It seemed like they had laughed for hours as neither could stop. They had caused so much fear in buaji that she had started to question reality. when they were finally able to talk, arnav told akash,

Arnav: akash, its INCEPTION…

and started laughing again

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So how was it? hope you guys like it. definitely shud make a saturday a bit more exciting without the actual ipkknd. again plz leave your comments to let me know if you liked it. thanks for your previous likes and comments too...

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Posted: 13 years ago
tooo funnt i laugh out load and my family was like what happen?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. It was awesome. Buaji was fantastic and hilarious.🤣ROFLROFL
Arnav and Akash messed with her head so badly that she is totally wacked now.
Can't wait to read more.
Continue soon. Thanks.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME!!
Poor Buaji!! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update that was so funny they scared khushi aunty for life loved it can't wait for the wedding thanks for the pm

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