MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69

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tasnim.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Fantastic update
loved it so much
very beautifully written
Plz do cont. it

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read all the parts..

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Nice update...
Thank you and continue soon 😊

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#254

This update was really awesome !! Loved it <3

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#255

awesome update

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arzzo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

wao great update both parts were awesome really enjoy reading it so a nw entry in sajan lyf angad and sam does not like him kahi yahi inka alg huna ka reason nah hu really sajan part was really sweet and cute mayur were also great and the precap its a lil confusing so update soon

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unknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 17 a

After mayu leaves nupur was sitting dull in her room shilpa comes to give her karela juice
she drinks with great difficulty
shilpa-kya hua chehra kyun ud gaya
n-kuch nahin
she sits beside her
shilpa-jab tak tu nahin batayegi main yehi baitoongi
n-maa ke paas jaana hain
shilpa-ismain udaas hone waali kya baat hain tu jab chahe jaa sakti hain
n-abhi jaon
shilpa-nahin
n-kyun
shilpa-teri tabiyet kharab hain aise haal main nahin jayegi
n-main teek hun
shilpa-mujhe pata hain tu kitna teek hain chup chap aaraam kar
she sleeps making puppy face
sajan return in afternoon
g-ab teri tabiyet kaisi hain
n-main teek hun tum sab logone mujhe jabardasti patient banaya
g-doctor tu hain ki hum tere chehre se pata chal raha hain kitni tik hain
s-kyun use dara rahi ho woh keh rahi hain na woh teek hain
n-aap please insab ko samjaiye na main teek hun
g-acha supporter chuna hain waise mayank kahaan hain dekha do din main tumhare bhai ne meri behan ka kya haal banaya iska khayal rakhna bhi nahin aata
n-yeh aap keh rahi hain aapne bhi toh usdin darr ke mujhe call kiya bhul gayi agar main tablets nahin rakti toh pata chalta
s-badi taras aarahi hain mayu par
n-taras nahin jeeju jab koi galti nahin kare uspar gussa karna galat hain na aapko nahin pata mayank do din se meri liye kitna pareshan hain koi bhi perfect nahin hota iska matlab yeh nahin ki sab bure hain
just then someone comes inside
n-maa
she runs to her and hugs her with tears
shilpa-teri beti toh aise ro rahi hain jaise main yehaan use bahut tang kar rahi hun
shashank-kyu use aur rula rahi ho
g-dad aapko iske baare main nahin pata aap sabke saamne aise roti hain par ghar pe hoti toh pura ghar sar pe uta leti hain
shobha-tujhe kabse meri itni yaad aarahi hain
g-maa aap bhi na kaise sawaal poochti hain yehaan pe uske nakre nahin chalenge isiliye ghar aake aapko tang karna chahti hain
they all assemble in the hall and chat
mayu was passing through corridor adhi sees him
a-hi mayank kaise ho
m-tumhein isse kya matlab
a-main toh bas aise hi pooch raha tha
m-jaise bhi hun bahut khush hun
a-tum khush kyun nahin rahoge tum toh problem creator ho tumhein problem kyun hogi
m-mind your tongue
a-bura laga par sach ko koi badal nahin sakta tumhari wajah se meri life spoil hui hain aur mujhse jyada nupur ki
m-uska naam bhi liya toh i wont leave you
a-tumhein dumki dene ke alawa kya aata hain tumhare paas toh dil hi nahin hain tumhare aur uske parents ne milkar usko maar daala hain tumhare haato main use rakhkar waise unki insab main koi galti nahin hain unhein kya pata tum kitne bade sadist ho college ke time main use kitna torture kiya kyunki woh mujhe apna acha dost samajti thi jo tumse dekha nahin gaya har pal apne baato se use hurt kiya uski zindagi narak bana di woh hamesha roti thi tumhari wajah se kya kuch nahin kahaan tumne use aur ab usi ladki par phir se apna haq jata rahe ho tumhein ek baar bhi nahin laga tum galat ho uske life ke har aasun ki wajah tum ho aur aaj apne khushi ke liye use apnaya tum bahut selfish ho you dont deserve nupur nupur tumhein mili hain toh tumhare dad ki reputation ki wajah se warna nupur kya koi bhi ladki tumhari taraf aankh uta ke nahin dekti tumhari khud ki koi wajood hi nahin hain you are a big looser agar tumhare dil main nupur ke liye zara bhi pyar hain toh use in sab se azaad kardo woh tumhare saath kabhi khush nahin rahegi tumne use haasil kiya hain you dont deserve her kisi bhi ladki ko paane ke liye uska dil jeetna zaroori hain nupur tumse pyar nahin karti woh bas apne rishtey ko nibha rahi hain kyunki she respects marriage and her parents nupur jaisi ladkiyan bahut boli hain woh khud se jyada sab ke baare main sochti hain agar tum main zara bhi insaaniyat naam ki cheez hain toh use chod do uski khushi kabhi tumse jud nahin sakti just leave her free for her happiness sacha pyar use kehte hain jismein hum khud jal kar bhi hamaare pyar ko roshni dete hain
adhi leaves from there leaving broken mayu
mayu falls on his knees with tears he felt adhi is right he doesnt deserve nupur
he remembers how he tortured her with his words in college just becoz of his insecurity of loosing her yes he loved her since many days but he always showed it in the form of anger becoz his mind never allowed him to realise his love for her he also many times complained about her to shashi and shobha making them hurt her with there words she used to hate him becoz her parents believed him more than her adhi loved her sincerely but she never accepted his love for her parents she married mayu only for their parents happiness all these words were ringing in his mind making him feel restless he decides something to solve all this
he reaches home and goes directly to room shilpa asks nupur to call mayu she goes up
seeing her face his fear increased he hugged her with tears in pain he felt this might be the last time he will be getting her comfort he is gonna loose her forever

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parul_bansal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

nic update...

may god bless u

update soon

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unknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

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N-mayank kya hua achanak itna pyar ek din nahin aayi toh itna miss kiya
he gains all his courage to speak
m-nupur woh sab yehi hai
n-haan aur tumhein neeche bula rahe hain chalo
catching his shoulder
his eyes fill seeing her near
he takes off her hand from his shoulder
n-jyada feel hone ki zaroorat nahin hain koi nahin hain isiliye pakda tha
m-nupur mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain
n-ji kahiye
in full nautanki
m-i think we should seperate
n-joke acha tha par hasi nahin aayi
m-main sach keh raha hun mujhe pata hain i dont deserve you tumhare life ki har musibat ki wajah main hun main tumhara khayal bhi nahin rak sakta main sirf khud ke baare main sochta hun tumhein kabhi khush nahin rak sakta tum mere saath jabardasti reh rahi ho tum sirf mujhe bare kar rahi ho tum bahut achi ho you deserve someone better than me
he turns to her before he realises gets a tight slap from her
n-ek aur word kahaana mujhse bura koi nahin hoga chup chap jaake fresh ho jao dus minute main tum neeche nahin aaye na toh dekho main kya karti hun
at dinner everyone noticed mayur were not fine
shilpa-tum dono ne phirse ladai ki
n-nahin mom main toh aapke saath hi thi ladoongi kaise
shobha-humne tujhe chillate hue suna hain
n-woh mayank bina khaye hi sone ki zid kar raha tha isiliye chillana pada
shilpa-mayu nupur sach keh rahi hain
he doesnt reply he leaves from there in silence
shobha-nupur tu mere saath ghar chal kal waapas aajaana
n-main nahin aaongi
g-ab tak toh jaane ke liye ro rahi thi phir ab kya hua
n-bas mera mann nahin hain
shilpa-nupur sach sach bata hua kya
n-kuch bhi toh nahin
shilpa-muje gussa mat dila aakri baar pooch rahi hun hua kya
n-mom choti si ladai hain main sambhal loongi
shilpa-choti si ladai pehli baar mayu ko itna pareshan dekh rahi hun
shashank-shilpa woh keh rahi hain na woh sambhal legi kyun use pareshan kar rahi ho
she was getting irritated with there enquiries
after dinner she bids bye to her parents runs to her room and locks the door he was lying on the bed she knew he was not sleeping she sits beside him placing his head on her lap
n-tumne teek kahaan hum dono saath kabhi nahin reh sakte we should seperate
tears flow from his eyes
n-yeh aasun kisliye yeh idea tumhara tha na
he just kisses her hand holding it tight
n-tumhein andaaza bhi hain tum kya soch rahe the tumhein achanak yeh thought aaya kaise
he says what happened in court
n-ek tappad tumhare liye bahut kam tha jee toh kar raha hain do char aur marun tum dono ko koi kaam nahin hain kya jo dono milkar mere future ke peeche pade us idiot ne kahaan is idiot ne maan liya mayank you are such a fool tumne socha bhi kaise koi baharwaala mujhe mere family se jyada jaanega koi kuch bhi kahe tum chup chap sunoge tumhein palat kar jawaab dena nahin aata mujhse toh itna ladte ho wahaan kya hua maine apni puri life tumhare haato main diya hain mere life main kuch bhi tumhare marzi ke khilaaf nahin hota hain aur tum khud ko sambhal nahin paa rahe mera khayal kya rakhoge agar tumhare jagah main hoti toh uska gala daba deti
m-usne sach kaha isiliye chup tha tum mujhse pyar isliye karti ho kyunki main tumhara pati hun agar nahin hota toh
n-ek baat batao tumhare parents koi aur hote toh
m-yeh kaisa sawaal hain
n-tumhare stupid sawaal jaisa hamare life ka har rishta upar wala tay karta hain unhone hum dono ko ek dusre ke liye banaya isiliye hum saath hain rahi baat pyar ki woh hamaare soch pe depend karta hain yeh ek normal feeling hain kisiki wajah se tumhein khushi hui toh hamesha uske saath rehne ka mann karta hain in cheezon ke baare main jitna kam sochoge utna hi acha hain just be happy for what you have tumne dubara aisi baato se mujhe tang kiya na toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga i think humein sona chahiye
he suddenly hugs her
m-you are the best thing happened in my life
n-kuch der pehle chodne ki baat karrahe te kaise rehte akele mayu main tumhari hun aur tumhari hi rahongi hamesha ab bak bak jyada ho gaya sojao
both were lying on bed he locks her in his arms she snuggles
n-mayank chodo
m-mujhse nahin hoga
she pinches him to get out of his grip and runs to balcony
n-mayank yeha aaona
she drags him to balcony
m-tum mujhe yehaan kyun laayi tumhein toh neend aarahi thi na
n-haan par ab nahin aarahi
they stand for sometime suddenly she leaves inside
m-kya hua chali kyun aayi
she doesnt reply turns her face other side
he puts hand on her
n-mayank haath nikalo
m-nahin kya karogi
she getsup and sleeps on sofa
m-nupur kya hua tum abhi bhi mujhse naaraz ho i am sorry please dont leave me
his eyes fill
n-tum idiot ho aur idiot hi rahoge meri naarazgi ki wajah kuch aur hain
m-maine aisa kya kiya
n-kuch bhi nahin kiya ek baar baahar dekho
m-kya hain baahar
n-mera sar tumhein full moon light dikhai nahin de rah
m-haan toh
n-mujhe khud par taras aaraha hain tumhein romantic hone ke liye baahar leke gayi aur tum kitne unromantic
m-toh yeh problem hain sorry
n-its ok tum wahan sojao main yehan sojati hun goodnight budhu
she lies on sofa covering her face with blanket in anger
part 17c

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

She covers blanket on her face he slowly moves goes to her removes blanket on face she turns other side
m-nupur kahaana sorry
n-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni gudnight
m-nupur maine jaanbuz kar nahin kiya kuch der pehle hi tum mujhse naraaz thi main darr gaya tha ki kahin tum phirse naaraz na hojao
n-mayank tum kuch din tum mujhe yehaan se dur lejaoge
m-kyun kya hua
n-mujhe jaane kyun hum itna paas hoke bhi bahut bada faasla dikh raha hain
m-main samja nahin ek kaam karo pehle tum ready hojao uske baad baat karenge
n-par kyun
m-yeh red saaree pehno tumhein suit karega
n-saree raat ke 12 baje
m-please
n-tik hain pehanti hun
she gets ready
m-ab chale
n-kahaan
m-chalogi ya nahin making puppy face
n-main tumhein mana kyun karoongi
he takes her in arms she smiles and kisses his cheek
he takes her to beech
n-hum yehaan kyun aaye
m-tumhein fullmoon pasand hain na isiliye aapko yehaan lekar aaya
she gives a tight hug
he smiles and hugs her back
they sit in sand she rests headon his chest hugging him
n-mayank jaane kyun aisa lag raha hain hum dono paas hoke bhi dur hain
m-mujhe bhi wohi lag raha hain
n-jab hum ladte te tabh bhi hum saath te lekin ab tumhara insecurity mujhe bahut pareshan kar raha hain tumhein pata hain main tumse kitna pyar karti hun mujhe yeh sab batana pasand nahin par sirf tumhari darr ki wajah se keh rahi hun main tumhare liye itni paagal hun chahe toh apni jaan bhi dungi tumhare bina ek pal bhi soch nahin sakti meri identity sirf tumse hain aisa lagta hain jaise meri duniya tum ho tumhare bina kuch nahin hain main pehle ghar sabko tang karti thi par ab tumhein tang karna acha lagta hain tumhare saath bitaya hua har pal mere liye important hain agar tum mujh par apna haq jataoge toh mujhe khushi hogi par agar tum is tarah darrke khud ko mujhse dur karoge tumse jyada main akeli padoongi hamaare beech kya hota hain naahin kisise kahaan hain naahin kisise kahoongi jab tum mujhe takleef dete ho sirf tumhare bahhon main apne aasun bahadungi warna andar hi andar gutan se marjaongi please mayank yeh tum aur main ko hum banao mujhe tumhare gusse se jyada tumhari dard takleef deti hain main tumhare khushi ke liye kuch bhi karoongi par apne aap ko takleef meri wajah se doge toh mujhe bahut takleef hogi main mayank sharma ka better half hun aur mujhe woh half banna hi pasand hain jis din meri shaadhi hui hain maine nupur bhushan ko maar daala ab main hun toh nupur mayank sharma sirf nupur mayank sharma mujhe isse jyada ache se samjaana nahin aata hope tum mere dil ko samjo
she hugs him and cries badly this was first time she cried so much but it had only her sincere love for him
m-i am sorry nupur main shayad hamaare rishtey ko samaj nahin paaya sirf tumne jo mujhe diya tha usse khush tha par yeh kabhi nahin socha jis tarah main tumse kuch expect karta hun tum bhi kuch expect karogi main apne darr se tumko dur kiya par ek baar bhi nahin samaj paaya ki mera darr bewaja hain i promise you aaj ke baad tumhein mujhse koi takleef nahin hogi main tumhare expectations pure karne ki puri koshish karoonga aur meri darr ki wajah mujhe khud ke kismat par yakeen nahin horaha tha koi mujhe itna pyar karega mujhe itna special banayega tumne mujhe life jeena sikhaya hain aaj main jo bhi hun tumhare pyar ki wajah se tum jitni meri taakat ho usse jyada meri kamzori ho tumse judi koi bhi baat mere dil tak pahuncti hain shayad hamaara past hamaare aaj ke beech aaraha hain but i wont repeat this i will be with you now and forever main mere darr ko hamesha hamesha ke liye mitadoonga i promise you for that
he kisses her forehead giving his assurance he knows very well she doesnt need any assurance she trusts him blindly even if he hurts her she will never complain

part 18

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