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in the morning when he opened his eyes he remember the past night which gave him all the shades in life how it started with a fear and ended as the memorable moment when he comes to his senses he realises she was not there with him he turns and finds her on pillow sleeping peacefully he moves forward to give her morning kiss
n-mayank kya kar rahe ho
she was standing at door she goes near him
n-pillow main mujhe imagine kar rahe ho
she takes his hand and puts on her cheeks moving near
n-ab teek hain
he smiles and moves closer to kiss her forehead
m-goodmorning
n-ab jaake fresh hojao mujhe kaam hain
she gives a tight hug and leaves
m-tum na world ki best wife ho
n-tum mere budhu mayu
m-tum mujhe budhu kyun kehti ho
n-kyunki mujhe sar pe chadate ho meri har baat maante ho mere liye kuch bhi karte ho aur sabse jyada tumhara yeh sweet sa chehra uska expressions bilkul budhu lagte ho
m-sabke saamne bhi aise hi bulaogi
n-mera mayu mere liye budhu hain par sab ke saath compare karoon toh he is the best
m-really
n-sach main tumhein nahin pata
m-aise kya qualities hain best kehne ke liye
n-pehle toh he is succesful lawyer family aur sabka respect karta hain apne parents aur family se bahut pyar karta hain unke liye kuch bhi karta hain aur sabse important he is the sweetest husband any girl can dream for
moving hand in his hairs he smiles and takes coffee
m-tum kapde kyun nikal rahi ho
n-mom ke paas jaane ke liye
he splits coffee in his mouth
m-par kaise mera matlab hain kyun tum abhi bhi mujhse naaraz ho
n-kaunse book main likha hain jab wife and husband ki ladai hoti hain tabhi wife apne mom ke paas jaati hain
m-par tum jaa kyun rahi ho
n-mom ne raat ko hi aane ke liye kahaan par tumhari wajah se mana kiya ab tum normal ho toh main jaa rahi hun
m-main normal nahin hoon
she gives questioned look
m-mera matlab main normal tabhi rahoonga jab tym yeha rahogi warna mujhe har jagah tumhari booth dikhai degi main kisi kaam main concentrate nahin kar paomga main akele bore hojaonga
n-tum akele kyun ho sab hain na main nahin hun toh kya hun
n-sabki baat alag hain tumhari baat alag hain tumhare alawa koi mujhe 24 hours bare nahin kar sakta
n-oh shaadhi se pehle bhi tum akele hote the na ab bhi waise hi do din raha
m-tabki baat ala hain abki baat alag
n-kaise alag hain
m-hain toh hain reason nahin bata sakta
n-proper reason bolo sochungi warna bye
m-tum kahin nahin jaogi kal raat tumne kya kahaan tha meri marzi ke bina kuch nahin karogi ab main nahin chahta ki tum jao
n-woh baatein maine emotion main aake keh diya tumne use seriously leliya main wohi karoongi jo mujhe pasand hain
m-nupur please mat jao na
n-ek second main voice change kiya great par tum jaise bhi kaho main nahin rukhne waali
m-jo karna hain karo
in anger he leaves to washroom
she smiles
n-subah subah ladai ab mayank normal lag raha hain
he comes out she was at the mirror getting ready he gives a bach hug
n-mayank tumne mera dress kharab kar diya ab mujhe dubara change karna padega
m-itna gussa kyun karti ho agar tumhein bura laga toh i will leave you
n-ab jab mera dress kharab kar hi diya toh chahe do minute pakdo ya dus gante baat toh ek hi hain na
he removes hair on her neck and kisses she turns towards him and hugs
he cups her face caressing her cheek she shivers he smiles lovingly moving forward places his lips on hers
m-thodi masti kare
n-sab hamaara wait kar rahe hain
stepping backward
m-karne do
moving front
n-court ke liye late hoga
m-hone do
n-mayank woh
she falls on bed
he bends and kisses her
n-mayank please chodona tum jaate waqt mujhe drop karna bhi hain na late hojaoge
he stops kidding and puts hand on her cheek
m-sach main jaa rahi ho
she nods yes
he sits on bed
m-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni hamesha ke liye jao
sits beside him
n-good idea par gharwaale nahin maanene tum help karoge toh ho sakta hain
m-nupur please mat jao na main tumhare bina do pal nahin reh sakta itne din mujhse nahin hoga tum chaho toh daily aate waqt do gante tumhare mom ke paas chalenge par do din please nahin
only tears were balance in his face
n-acha teek nahin jaongi par meri ek shart hain
m-jo kahogi woh karoonga mere jaan ki kasam putting hand on her head
n-meri problem tum ho tumhari family meri di ke saath tum sab logone mujhe patient banakar zabardasti ghar pe bitaya karele juice medicines kya kya nahin ghar pe hoti toh wohi karti jo mera mann karta hain par yehaan respect ke chakkar main meri band baj raha hain
m-tumhari balai ke liye toh keh rahe tum bimaar hona
n-oh really tumhein romantic hote waqt yaad nahin aata main bimaar hun
m-nupur
n-tumhare paas sirf do options hain ya toh tum mujhe court lejaoge nahin toh ghar soch lo agar tum court lejaoge
m-court hi better hain tum pura din mere paas rahogi waise bhi wahaan main rahongana tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye warna kya pata kya karogi
n-thats like my mayank ab chalo sabko convince karo
m-mainkyun
n-kyunki tum mere pati ho aur yeh decision tumhara hain
m-ab chale
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In the morning gunjan wakes up lazily
g-pata nahin kaisi musibat hain ghar pe hoti toh itni jaldi kabhi nahin utti thi par yehaan itne din chutiyon ki wajah se aur bhi lazy ho gayi hun ab kya karun
she goes get fresh and comes down
shilpa-gudmorning beta itni jaldi kyun uti thodi der aaraam karna tha
nupur gives funny smile she knows same thing was going in gunjans mind
g-mom i am fine
shilpa-tum dono bhi na kitni baar kahaan hain mere saath utne ki zaroorat nahih hain par baat nahin sunti
n-nahin utenge toh maa call karke barsegi
gunjan gives one on nupurs head to shut her mouth
shilpa-tera chehra kyun ud gaya hain lagta hain bukaar ab bhi utra nahin
n-mom main teek hun
shilpa-chehra dekha hain apni chup kar
she goes in kitchen nupur hits her head
n-tum -go ko samaj kyun nahin aata ki main tik hun
g-mujhe kyun bata rahi hain mom ko samja na
n-wohi toh nahin kar sakti aap samjaiyena kya badi behan choti ki itni help nahin karegi
g-karti thi agar tu normal hoti par tere chehre se saaf jalak horaha hain
n-di ab aapko kaise samjao kal raat kya hua
she narrates whole story
n-raat bhar koi nahin soyega toh chehra aise hi hoga na
g-aadi raat beech how romantic kaash sam mujhe le jaata aaj kal sam bahut boring ho gaya hain
n-woh meri aur mayank ki choti ladayi hui isiliye mujhe lekhe gaya mere force pe
g-ladai kis baat pe isiliye kal raat dono pareshan lag rahe the sach sach bata hua kya
n-nahin bolungi hum dono ke aapas ka problem hain
g-main teri di hun
n-phir bhi nahin
g-main meri aur sam ki har baat batati hun aur tu
n-maine aapse nahin pucha batane ke liye aur waise bhi mujhe nahin mom se kehti hain
g-toh tu nahin kahegi
n-nahin
g-tik hain main teri help nahin karungi
n-mat karna
both were silent
after sometime
n-di sorry agar baat sirf meri hoti toh main zaroor batati par yeh mayank ke baare main hain agar aap mayank ko misunderstand karenge toh mujhe acha nahin lagega please samajiyena main aapko nahin bata sakti
g-acha teek hain teri marzi
shilpa comes out
shilpa-dono kya kusur pusur kar rahe hain
g-woh hum soch rahe the agar hum dono kuch din mom ke paas jayenge
nupur looks in confusion gunjan winks her
shilpa-par kyun
g-bahut din hogaye na maa ke paas jaake maa humein bahut miss kar rahi thi
shilpa-par kal hi shoba tum dono se mili thi na
n-haan par maa kaafi udaas thi woh chahti thi hum dono kuch din unke saath rahe isiliye mom mujhe kal raat ghar bula rahi thi
shilpa-phir tune tab mana kyun kiya yaad aaya mayank ab kaisa hain woh itna pareshan kyun tha kal raat
nupur was confused how to escape from shilpa she doesnt want to reveal yesterdays matter
g-mom aap bhi na kaise question pooch rahe hain yeh dono normal hain toh problem hain ladai toh common hain stupid baaton par phirse koi case main dono ek dusre ke against honge
nupur was confused gunjan gives her not to worry look she will manage
shilpa-tum dono bhi na ladne ke bahaane dundte rehte ho tum dono ko sudarna namumkin hain ab ladai khatam hui ya nahin
n-hogayi
shilpa-acha hi hain
she recieves acall goes inside
n-thanks di aapne mujhe bachaliya
g-tune sahi kahaan hamaare problem ko humse better koi nahin samajta
n-di waise idea acha hain ek hafte mom ke paas jaongi toh koi sar dard nahin rahega par aap kyun aana chahti hain
g-subah subah utne ke darr se tu jaanti hain na main kitni lazy hun upar se ye trip ne mujhe aur lazy banaya hain isiliye kuch din mom ke paas jaake aadat sudaroongi
n-aur lazy banogi
g-haan par phir bhi mann kar raha hain mom ke saath rehne ka
n-mujhe bhi
shilpa-toh rokha kisne jao
both look in shock
shilpa-kya hua tum dono ne jooth kahana
n-aapko pata chal gaya
shilpa-haan agar tum dono mom ko itna miss kar rahi ho toh jao kyun shobha pe saara inzaam dal rahe ho
both give thank god look to each other
unjan goes to her room with coffee
she brushes sams hair to wake him up
s-goodmorning
she smiles and gives him coffee
g-jaldi se tayyar hojao chitiya khatam kaam shuru
s-oh god phir se daily routine how boring
g-dad ke saamne kaho
s-main hospital ko nahin daily routine ko keh raha hun
she was removing her dresses from wardrobe
s-itne dresses kyun nikal rahi ho select karne liye kuch bhi pehenlo tum har dress main sundar lagti ho
g-thanks for the compliment par main dresses select karne ke liye nahin pack karne ke liye nikal rahi hun
s-phir se honeymoon
g-shut upkabhi ache se baat nahin kar sakte main mom ke paas jaa rahi hun
same reaction splitting coffee
s-par kyun jaa rahi ho
g-tumse bore hogayi hun isliye
s-gunjan
g-mom ki yaad aarahi hain isiliye jaa rahi ho
s-kal hi toh mili thi kya zaroorat hain jaane ki
g-zarurat main apne mom ke paas jaa rahi hun dost ke paas nahin tumhara kya hain aaraam se apne maa ke paas ho par hum ladkiyon ko tum ladko ki wajah se mom ko chod kar aana padta hain
s-emotional dialogue tha par itni reaction kisliye
g-mujhe jaana hain
s-kyun yehaan kya problem hain kisine tumse kuch kahaan
g-nahin par mera mom se milne ka bada mann kar raha hain
s-tik hain ab tumhein choddunga sham ko pick karloonga ok
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G-tum mujh par ehsaan kar rahe ho
s-ismain ehsaan waali baat kahaan se aayi
g-nahin toh kya mujhe tumne samaj kya rakha hain ab lejaonga sham ko lekar aaonga tum decide karoge main kab jaongi kab aaongi
s-tumse baat karna bekaar hain go to hell
he leaves to washroom
she was sitting crying
g-meri koi value hi nahin hain
he comes from washroom and finds her crying
he hugs from back
s-sorry
g-kya sorry mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni leave me
s-kahaana sorry
she doesnt listen he cups her face
s-gunjan tumhein pata hain na mujhe tumhari aadat hogayi hain tumhare bina do pal bhi paagal hojaonga please maan jao na
g-main hamesha ke liye todhi jaa rahi hun sirf kuch dino ke liye na mom ki badi yaad aarahi hain
s-main samajta hun tum chaho toh daily sham ko chalenge par itne din mat jao na
g-sam
s-please please jitni baar chaho toh utne please bolunga
g-tik hain nahin jaongi
s-yeh hui na baat
he hugs her in happiness
g-ab tum ready ho jao
s-do minute
she was getting ready he removes hair on her neck and kisses
g-kya kar rahe ho
he turns her towards his side
s-tum bahut cute lag rahi ho
she blushes
he carrases her cheek kisses her forehead nose eyes cheeks lips
both have a hug
s-tum kabhi mujhe chod kar jaane ke baare main sochna bhi mat main tumhare bina ek pal bhi soch nahin sakta
g-main tumhein chod kar kyun jaongi
s-love you
g-love you too ab chale
they reach dining table
shilpa-aagaya tu kal raat itna pareshan kyun tha isne kuch kiya kya
s-mom aap bhi na mayu hamesha aise hi rehta hain kyun bewajah nupur ko dosh de rahi hain
m-haan maa woh case ke silsile main pareshan tha nupur ki koi galti nahin hain
she has tears she just wanted to go from there sam notices it
s-saaliji aap kyun ro rahi hain
n-kuch nahin
m-nupur sorry galti meri thi
shilpa goes to her and wipes her tears
n-maine kuch nahin kiya
shashank-shilpa tumhara beta koi bola nahin hain jo tum us bechari par baras rahi ho
s-actually maa aapko nupur ko thanks kehna chahiye aapke laadle ko bare karne ke liye
m-sab tumhare side main hi hain ab toh rona band karo
shilpa-agar rona band nahin kiya na toh maaroongi
she smiles with tears
shilpa-yeh better hain
she kisses nupurs forehead
shilpa-bag packing karli
she nods no
shilpa-kyun
she was looking at mayu
shilpa-isne kuch kiya
m-maa use jaana nahin hain sirf court jaane ke liye wahaan jaana chahti hain use ghar pe bore ho raha hain
shilpa-tu chup
she cups nupurs face
shilpa-tujhe mom ke paas jaana hain ya nahin
she was looking at mayu mayu was sighing to say no
shilpa-use kya dekh rahi hain bol jaana hain ya nahin
n-hain par mayank nahin chahta ki main jao
shilpa-woh kya chahta hain woh chod tujhe jaana hain na ja
s-mom aap force kyun kar rahi hain
shilpa-tu beech main kyun aaraha hain ek minute gunjan tune bhi packing nahin kiya kya
same questioning look at sam
shilpa-dono bhai ek jaise hain kyun indono ko jabardasti rok rahe ho
m-mom unko jaana hi nahin hain aapse bachne ke bahaane hain
g-bahaane tumhein apne mom se teen mahine dur rahoge toh pata chalega
m-aise keh rahe ho jaise kabhi mili hi nahin kal raat ko mile the na
g-kya milna itne din baad milkar bhi tik se baat nahin ki kyunki tab bhi aap ko manana tha jab se shaadi hui hain 24 gante tumhare baare main sochne main uski life jaa rahi hain
m-nupur tumhein problem hain toh directly keh sakti hona kyun bhabhi ka use kar rahi ho
g-tum use bolne ka mauka doge toh kahegi na emotional blackmail karke uska muh band kar diya
m-aapko kaise pata
g-personal experience se
looking at sam
s-tum mujhe beech main kyun laa rahi ho ek minute mayu ka use karke indirectly mujh par baras rahi ho
g-main tumhein kuch kaise keh sakti hun
keeping innocent face
m-nupur tumhari wajah se meri class le rahe hain aaram se bait ke dekh rahi ho
n-main kya karun
keeping same innocent face
shashank and shilpa were enjoying there tom and jerry fight
s-rehne de mayu dono ke dono chaalak hain
g-tum
shilpa-bas karo charo dining table ko yudh maidan bana diya hain
seeing at gunur
shilpa-tum dono ko jaana hain ya nahin
m-mom
shilpa-mayu chup tum dono batao ha ya na
both nod yes
gunur-haan par
shilpa-dono jaake bag packing karo indono ko main sambhaloongi
they go up
s-mom aapne aisa kyun kiya
m-hamesha ki tarah hamaari koi value nahin hain
shilpa-shashank samjao indono ko
mujhse nahin hota
shashank-tum dono ko hostel main rakhna tha tab unki problem samaj aata tha
s-dad itna bhi dur nahin hain
m-upar se daily lejaane ki promise bhi kiya phir bhi kya problem hain
shashank-wohi kaam tum dono kyun nahin karte daily sham ko milkar aao par ab unhein jaane do waise bhi subah se sham tak office main milengi na aur hamesha ke liye todhi jaa rahe hain sirf ek hafte ke liye hi
m-ek hafte main 7 days hain
s-168 hours
shilpa-minute bhul gaye kya chup karo dono kya unke peeche pade ho unke khudke kuch problems hote hain sab humse nahin keh sakti subah dekha nahin itni si baat pe ro padi humein sab bata nahin sakte jaane do unko
sayank were forced to leave gunur
precap-sayank missing gunur
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awesome update!
plzzz update the next part soon
nd thanx for the pm 😊
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Guys is baar bhi pms late honge a big sorry for the delay
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part a awesomesttt
loved it
hayyeee meri romantic nupur...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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part b nic update...
awww nupur is going to her mom's house...
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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18 part c n part d
beautiful update
so finally gunur r going to their mom's house
aww shilpa aunty helped them...
now wat will sayank do???
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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wao great update sahi hua joa nupur nai mayu koa tapar lagaya idiot adi nah kuch bhi kah woa sun ta gaya aur believe bhi kar liya bt thank god ab usaha akal ah gayi aur sudar gayi great post
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woa part 18 was too gud awesome it was really fun to read each and every dialogur the table fight was fantastic enjoy it alot

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