MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

S-yeh ladki bhi na sabko bataane ki kya zaroorat hain
he sleeps beside her staring at her
in the afternoon she wakes up they go out for sometime
g-sam sorry kal tum tired te aur main samaj nahin paayi tumhein bahut pareshan kiya
s-jo ho gaya bas hogaya leave it main icecream laata hun
she was standing alone boy from back
boy-gunjan tum yehaan kaise ho kitne din baad dekh raha hun
g-angad tum what a suprise college ke baad toh gaayab ho gaye
sam comes there with icecream
s-hi angad kaise ho hamaare shaadhi pe kyun nahin aaye you missed it side hugging gunjan
a-tumhari shaadi ho gayi
g-woh angad
s-sweetheart this is not fair tumhein apne best friend ko bhulna nahin chahiye tha anyways angad jab tum mumbai aaoge hamaare ghar dinner pe zaroor aana waise iswaqt hum honeymoon pe aaye hain so we need privacy can you excuse us
je takes gunjan from there
s-tum usse kyun baat kar rahi thi you know i hate him
g-sam he is my friend how can i avoid him
s-avoid karna padega usne pure college ke saamne tumhein propose kiya tum use baat karo mujhe acha nahin lagega
g-maine sirf baat ki tumhine lunch pe invite kiya
s-maine invite nahin tease kiya tha
g-sam woh itna bura bhi nahin hain tumhine toh kuch der pehle kahaan tha jo ho gaya so ho gaya leave it tum bhi use chod do na
s-woh baat alag hain yeh baat alag hain koi tumhari taraf dekhe toh hi main bardaash nahin karoonga aur ise toh kabhi nahin tumne dubaara usse baat ki na toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga
g-usse kya tumse bhi baat nahin karoongi get lost
she leaves from there in anger
s-tumhara muh kholna mujhe ache se aata hain
in the hotel he notices her going towards room
suddenly a girl hits him she was about to fall he holds her
girl-thanks bachane ke liye you are so sweet
she kisses his cheek and leaves
gunjan was watching everything sam was enjoying
g-tumhein sharam nahin aati thodi der pehle toh lecture de rahe the abhi tumne jo kiya uska kya tumhare liye ek rule mere liye ek rule
she was shouting he suddenly kisses her lips shocking her
g-tumne aisa kyun kiya
s-woh main sorry keh raha tha
she hits him in his chest ang hugs him
s-woh maine tumhein sataane ke liye kiya main use nahin jaanta
g-jaanthi hun isiliye tum bach gaye warna
s-warna kya karthi
g-sar phodti
s-mera
g-nahin uska
s-jealousy
g-haan tumhein bhi toh angad se jealousy hain
s-yeh stupid topic chodkar ek dusre ke baare main baat karenge na
he takes her in arms and lies her on bed
he then kisses her forehead. Eyes lips
in the morning she was hugging him tight and sleeping
there happiness lies in their togetherness
precap-sajan return home

part 16d

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arzzo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

wao read all 3 parts in 1 go gud job the updates were fantastic mayu confess and nupur nakre was really gud and then nupru proposal was really romantic and cool and the date was gud as well and sajan was as usuall really cute the date of sajan was gud and the entire 3 updates was awesome great job

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tasnim.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Fabulous Update
Mayurrr were just superb...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

After that romantic night next day morning he was hugging her tight in sleep.when he opens his eyes she was looking like sleeping beauty suddenly he notices that her body was hot his smile turns to worry he pats her cheek to wake her up
n-mayank sone dona bahut tired lag raha hain
she snuggles getting more closer and sleeps
m-nupur tumhein bukaar hain main doctor ko call karta hun
she opens her eyes and finds him worried she gives a soft kiss on his cheek
n-itna panic hone ki zaroorat nahin hain main teek hun meri bukaar jyada der nahin rahegi i can manage
suddenly she feels vomiting sensation she runs inside washroom
she shouts his name from washroom he runs inside in worry
n-mujhe utake andar lejaona
m-chakkar aaraha hain
she nods yes.he lifts her in arms
m-abhi toh dialogue marr rahi thi main teek hun yeh woh bolke kitni tik ho pata chal raha hain
he makes her lie on bed
n-already sar dard se phat raha hain pareshan mat karo
he calls doctor doctor comes and checks her after he leaves
n-mayank mere paas baito na
m-tum aaraam karo main tumhare liye breakfast laata hun
n-main romantic nahin horahi yeha aaona mere baaju baito
he was confused but sits beside her she places head on his lap
n-tum hamesha mere hair main fingers move karte ho waise karona
he does it actually her headache was not allowing her to sleep so she asks him to do that she sleeps like that for five hours due to medicine dose he was busy staring at her right now she is the most complicated thing for him
she wakes up and smiles
n-ab thoda better hain main fresh hojaati hun tum mere liye breakfast banana
he was puzzled he dont know to cook
m-nupur main breakfast baahar se laonga
n-tumhein nahin pata bimaari main baahar ki cheezein nahin khate(smiling inside)
he puts hand on his head confused
n-tension mat lo main hi banaati hun
m-par tumhari tabiyet
n-agar ghir gayi toh tum hona sambhalne ke liye
he smiles
m-par phir bhi nahin toh tum instructions do main banaata hun
he was following her instructions and cooking
n-mayank i think mujhe yeh video nikaalke mom ko dikhaana chahiye mom kahegi mera mayu kitna zimmedaar hogaya
m-bukaar utar gayi jo meri taang keech rahi ho chalne ki toh taakat nahin hain par mujhe sataane ki taakat hain ek toh khana banao upar se comments
n-mujhe nahin khana tum hi khao
she leaves to her bedroom.he takes tiffin and goes up.she closed her eyes tears were flowing from her eyes he wipes her tears
m-bura laga
she turns away
m-sorry please gussa chodo
she doesnt reply he slowly makes her sit
m-sorry kahaana itni bhi kya naaraazgi
she hugs him with tears
m-tum bhi na kab naaraz hoti ho kab mazak karti ho pata nahin chalta
he takes the tiffin and tries to feed her but she was not eating
m-nupur please bacho ki tarah zid band karo i am really sorry phir kabhi gussa nahin karoonga thoda toh kalo warna chakkar aake girogi
n-tum hona pakadne ke liye
m-haan par iske liye mujhe bhi energy chahiye na tum nahin khaogi toh main bhi bhuka rahoonga
she puts a piece in his mouth he smiles and feeds her back both were doing breakfast
n-tumhein court nahin jaana
m-nahin tum ghar pe akeli kaisi rahogi
n-main teek hun
m-phir se tik hun kahana toh dekho
they complete breakfast after that she rests placing head over him.he hugs her closer and kisses her forehead.whole day she was busy teasing fighting and sleeping
in the nught she was busy blabbering
m-kitna bolti ho tum agar aise hi mera sar khaogi toh kal subah tak main bhi bimaar padoonga chup chap aaraam karo
she gets up and sleeps on pillow
m-phir se gussa oh God yeh ladki mujhe paagal kardegi nupur please subah se almost sau baar sorry bol chuka hun please tang karna band karo
she doesnt reply
m-tik hain tum akeli sojao main jaa raha hun
he stands in balcony expecting her to come she doesnt come for almost one hour he waits and goes inside to see what she was doing she was crying badly her eyes were red he lifts her and cups her face
m-tum ro kyun rahi ho
n-main buri hun isiliye koi mujhse pyar nahi karta sab mujse naaraz hote hain
m-ladai tumne shuru ki thi
n-tum mujpar gussa hote ho toh mujhe acha nahin lagta
m-aur tum mujhe tang karti ho uska kya
n-main tumse pyar karti hun isiliye
m-mera bhi same reason hain
n-tum pehle bhi mujhpe gussa hote te
m-haan par tab main sorry nahin kehta tha
n-phir bhi jab bhi tum mujhse naaraaz hoti ho mujhe darr lagta hain
m-tum mujhse pyar karti hona darr kis baat ki tumhein main koi villian dikh raha hun
n-nahin par tum bahut serious rehte ho
m-serious aur main isiliye toh mujhe bevakuf banaya phir bhi maine kuch kaha
n-ab nahin kehte par pehle bahut kuch kahaan mera peecha chudaane ke liye mere parents ne mujhe tumhare gale baanda aur bahut kuch
m-toh tum unbaaton ko ab tak nahin buli
she says no
m-mujhe lagta tha main hi budhu hun par tum mujhse badhkar ho tab mera dimaag kharaab tha isiliye aise kahaan ab keh raha hun tum meri sabse achi nupur ho main tumse bilkul naaraz nahin hun har baat pe tum aise rone lagogi toh mujhe acha nahin lagega

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Posted: 13 years ago

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She was silent
m-ab chup kyun ho
n-neend aarahi hain
m-maine bhi sone ke liye kahaan tha
he was about to shout controls his anger he sits beside her takes her hand
m-aaj ka drama khatam karo aur sojao ek toh bukaar upar se itna rona bukaar badega na
he makes her lie on his hand she moves closer and sleeps he hugs her and was brushing her hairs to make her sleep he smiles at her innocence he rubs her cheek and kisses it
in the morning when he wakes up doesnt find her
she was busy cooking in kitchen he hugs her from back
m-subah subah utke kaam karne ki kya zaroorat hain
n-soongi toh khana kaun banayega
m-main banaonga na
n-tum rehne do phir gussa karoge ek toh main kaam karta hun upar se comments aise baat karte ho jaise maine in kaamo ka contract liya hain
m-sorry kahaana us baat ke liye
he removes hair on her neck and kisses her neck
n-disturb mat karo jaake fresh hojao
he doesnt listen both together cut vegetables and cook food they have breakfast and leave to court
shilpa and shashank come home in evening
in car she rests head on his shoulder
m-kya hua
n-gabrahat ho rahi hain
m-takaan ki wajah se isiliye kaha ghar pe baitne ke liye par tum meri sunti kahaan ho
n-mayank please irritate mat karo
they reach home she was getting down
m-ek minute rukho
he takes her in arms
shilpa was shocked to see scene infront of her
mayur were suprised ro see them
nupur sighs mayu to leave her but he takes her up and makes her lie on bed
shilpa-aapne bhi wohi dekha jo maine dekha
shashank-haan par kaise
shilpa-jaise bhi ho dono saath hain wohi kaafi hain
n-tumne mujhe neeche kyun nahin utara
m-tum chup chap sojao questions baad main
he makes her sleep when she sleeps he goes down
m-mom aap log kab aaye pehle bata sakte the na
shilpa-badi jaldi yaad aagayi
m-sorry maa woh nupur bahut bimaar hain isiliye use sulaake aarahaan hun
shilpa-tujhe uski fikar kabse ho rahi hain
m-jo poochna hain seeda seeda poochiyena baat ko guma kyun rahi hain
shilpa-jab tujhe pata hain ki main kya pooch rahi hun toh batata kyun nahin
he hugs her leaving shilpa suprised
m-thanks mom mujhe meri life ki sabse badi khushi dene ke liye
shilpa and shashank smile at his words
shilpa-yeh sab hua kaise
he makes them sit on sofa mayu rests head on her lap
m-mujhe nahin pata ki pyar kya hain bas jab uske dekta hun toh lagta hain pyar uske jaise hota hain woh saari ladkiyon se bahut alag hain woh mera khayal aapke jaise rakhti hain jab main galti karta hun toh dad ki tarah gussa karti hain mere liye sabse ladti hain kabhi kabhi bacho ki tarah zid karti hain roti hain thodi paagal hain nahin puri paagal hain uske pyar main sirf pyar hain itni badi budhu hain ki mere liye kuch bhi karegi mujhe har pal yeh ehsaas dilaati hain ki main kitna special hun maine kabhi apni life partner ke baare main nahin socha par uske saath rehkar mujhe life partner ka matlab pata chala usse achi life partner mujhe kabhi nahin milegi uske jaisa koi nahin hain aur woh sirf meri hain sirf aapki wajah se aapne hamesha mujhe best cheezein di hain aap log sahi te main hi galat tha sorry aap sab ko tang karne ke liye maine aap sab ko bahut pareshan kiya
she was listening with smile when he looks at her she gives teasing smile
m-aap has kyun rahi hain
shilpa-soch rahi hun mera beta kitna acha dialogue writer ban gaya hain
m-maa
she moves hands in his hair
shilpa-main tere liye bahut khush hun atlast mera mayu sudhar gaya
shashank-sirf nupur ki wajah se warna yeh kabhi nahin sudarta
shilpa-hum bhi iske baaton main nupur ke baarein main bhul gaye
shashank checks nupur
n-main teek hun
shashank-chup viral fever hain bed se nahin utrogi pura din aaraam karogi
n-par court
shashank-no court do din tak shilpa tumhari responsibility hain ki yeh court nahin jaayegi
mayu was enjoyimg
m-ache se kaha tha ghar pe baitne ke liye par tumhein sunne ki aadat kahaan hain ab raho do din ghar pe
n-tum mujhe court pe miss nahin karoge
m-haan miss karoonga
n-toh mom ko convince karona mujhe bhejne ke liye
m-tum mujhe ullu bana rahi ho maa tumhari baat nahin sunegi isiliye mujhe beech main laa rahi ho par tumhare stupid tricks ka koi faida nahin hoga
n-mayank mujhe ghar pe mann nahin lagta mujhe busy rehna acha lagta hain main paagal hojaongi please mayu
m-tum already paagal ho specially kya banogi
n-mayu please satana band karo
she rest head on his lap
m-acha nahin sataonga chup chap aaraam karo
n-neend nahin aarahi
m-aankhe band karo apne aap aajayega
n-koi faida nahin hain
m-acha terrace pe baitenge thodi der
they sit on the swing for sometime she hugs him and rest head on his shoulder closing her eyes actually both were listening song on ipod she suddenly falls asleep
he takes her down makes her lie on bed covering her with blanket and kisses her forehead
he then turns off light and sleeps beside her she moves near him resting head over him he smiles and hugs her tighter they sleep peacefully in each others arms there happiness lies in there togetherness
precap
n-main jaa rahi hun tum raho akele

part 18

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parul_bansal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

awesum update

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

awesum updates...
loved it..specially mayank's word for nupur

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Sujata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

nice update.

love sajan scene.

love mayur scene a lot... specially mayank word for nupur.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

mayur main love start ho gaye per sajan ka bach jelousely start ho gii hai plzz misunderstanding na hoo pretty plz sajan ko seprate nahii karna

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

awww such a cuty update
in one word it was just wonderful...
ye mayur bhi na- they will never change.. humesha bacche jaise harkate karte hai...
i really loved the way maynk shared his happiness with his mom and thanked her...
GOSH sirf nupur he Mayank koand sirf maynk he nupur ko sambhal sakte hai...

they r really sooo sweet

beautiful update dear
awesomeee

keep it up

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