A short story(in hindi an eng) kya yahi pyar thal - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Usne chai banane ki jagah kisi coffee shop mein jana thik samjha. Wah bahar nikal kar jaise hi door lock kar ke mura kisi se takra gay.. Jab usne use dekha to wo surprised rah gaya. Ye to uski gopi thi.
gopi-kyun chai nahi pini hai mere flat par, it is tea time.
ahaem ke aakhon mein ,aasun the aur hothon pe halki si smile-kyun, tumhari train chut gayi, jo tum yahin ho.
gopi-nahi train nahi chuti, meri manjil ka pata chal gaya. Ahem, maine tumhara msg. Parha aur pata nahi kyun main chah kar bhi nahi ja payi. Actually,main tvmse kuch kahna chahti hun.
ahem-kya, yahi na ki main tumhari aadat ban chuka hun aur mere bina tum nahi rah sakti.
gopi-ihaan! Magar tum...,.
ahem-main bhi tumhare chai ke bina nahi rah sakta. Kya tum mujhe saari jindagi chai bana kar pilaogi. Mujhse shaadi karogi. Gopi ,i really love u very much. Tumhare bina nahi rah sakta. gopi ahem ki baahon mein sama gayi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlackSonic

bahut accha yaar.

Iska agla bhaag kab likh rahe ho ...?

thanks. Story has copleted.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I liked it . The best part is that it is in Hindi, so we can make a connection with the story and the serial quite easily.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: feviewer

I liked it . The best part is that it is in Hindi, so we can make a connection with the story and the serial quite easily.

thanks, but how can u connect my story to seriel, pls. Explain it ,even im not getting any connection of my story and the seriel!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritika-gohem

thanks, but how can u connect my story to seriel, pls. Explain it ,even im not getting any connection of my story and the seriel!!!!!


Connection with the characters in the serial. It sounds strange when Gopi talks in English in ff. Dialogues feel believable when told in Hindi...it is in the same way as we find Hollywood movies odd when they are dubbed in Hindi or any other regional languages
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello ritika-gohem...please type in english i am very bad in reading hindi...😔😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for writing in hindi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luckylucky1

hello ritika-gohem...please type in english i am very bad in reading hindi...😔😕

really ver sorry as i cant see ur request , i saw it just now and translating it for u. once again sorry.
today, as his habbit ahem reached to gopi's flat,but he found it locked. then he got remembered that today's gopi had to go back her home , so, perhas she had left her flat and she hads went to station. he was knowing from a long time that one day gopi had to return her home then y he is becoming so restless,y he is feeling that he is losing his most precious thing, as he had nothing in his life after going her..
suddenly he got a fb of that day when at 1st he met to gopi. ahem was new to this city. he had came here for his further study. from tomorrow his classes had to start, so, he wanted to arrange his flat just today.whole day had passed in all arrangements and he had totally tired. so he wanted to take a tea. but when he started to made tea, he found that he had not sugar. so he had to go out for bringing sugar, he became ready ,came out and lock the door.after locking the door, he took a turn, but he got a crash with some one. that was a girl who was holding some goods in her hand.which had felt down on ground. there was also a packet of sugar.after seeing sugar ahem had whispered-sugar!
girl- yes, sugar and y r u exclimig by seeing sugar.
ahem hads realised his fault and said-sorry, perhaps, bcoz of being crashed i became embarraced and this came out of my mouth.
girl-dont be embarrace. it happens.i had never saw u bfor .r u new here.
ahem- yes i am new here bcoz of my further study.
girl-nice to see u .i am also here bco9z of my study.and i am living here from 1 year. and my flat is just above of ur flat. and after completing my study i have to return back. as u r new to here ,if u need any help u can say me, i am always for that.
ahem- thanks. then at 1srt help me by telling that wher i can get sugar in nearest place.
girl- for getting sugar u have to go lil far away. bt y r u needing for sugar.. if it is urgent then u can take it from me.
ahem-actually i am very tired and just want to take some tea ,bt as u r saying it is a far away then i find better to take it from u, if u dont mind.
girl- oh,then,u have to take a tea. if u find better then u can came with me on my flat and take tea with me. i am inviting u.
ahem-ok, if u have not any problem.
girl-no, i, have not any problem.
on flat of gopi ahem comes to know that girl was gopi belonging to a middle class family whereas he was a rich and handsome guy.
it was the ahem's 1st meeting with gopi. bt after that a lots of such coincindence had taken place that ahem had to come to gopi for help. and gopi alltime offered him for tea.
gopi was fond of t3ea bt she never like to take te alone. soi oine day she had said from ahem- i relly do not like to take tea alone. if u can come daily then i got a companty for my tea.
ahem(by lil laughing) it is ok. i willn come daily.
and after that day ahem started to come there every evening.
and for what a time they livewd together they always made discussion on a lot of topics.
ahem got that gopiu is a very understanding and intelligent girl.
and in such way discussion with gopi and tea from her hand had became ahem's habbit.
but ahem couldnt know that when his hgabbit had became his life. in these twoi years,ahem and gopi both had treated each othrt just like other knowin person. even both had not dignified each other as friends. they had made a lot of discussions bt never try to know abt. each other. only one things they r knowing that they had to return back.
and today was the that day when gopi gad to go. but ahem was unable to accept that he couldnt make a discussion with gopi again in future and alsio he couldnt get the tea of gopi,s hand. perhaps he coukldnt see gopi again.
w\o seeing gopi his life will be not good,pergaps he couldnt live w\o gopi.
ahem was exclaimed on his thinking. that means there was love for gopi in any corner of his heart, so he wanted to to go to gopi daily as ge can meet with her.
y he couldnt understand such a lil thing that gopi had became his life.
now he had to stop gopi. ther was 45 ins. un lefting gopi,s train he started to call her bt couldnt het connected. he moved for station. in all way he was thinking abt. gopi. if she hadnt any feeling for him then wht.
in lost in his thoughts he reached to station.. train had gone some seconds bvfor. he had tears in his eyes.,
no9w. he was in his flat. it was the tea time with gopi. he was being very emotional, so9 he decided tro go out. he had locked the door and took a turn. but he found a crash with anyone .he looked thatr person . he remained suprised. it was gopi here.
gopi-(by lil smiling) have u not take tea with me oin my flat, it is tea time.
aHEM with teary eyes and lil smile-y u can,t catch ur train and so u r here.
gopi- no , i had not missed my train, i had got my destination, so i am here,. i read ur msg. nd i couldnt go . actually i want to say something.
ahem- i know what to u want to say just only that u cant live w\o me.
gopi-yes, bt how do u knoiw that.
ahem- bcoz i was also feeling the same. i also cant live w\o u and ur tea.(lil laughing), can u give me tea for whole life. wioll u marry me.gopi, i cant live w\o u
now, gopi was in hem's arm.
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