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Chapter Ten

For Maan his son s every thing..For him life means Rehaan.On the way back to KC Maan buzzed Addi to arrange best cook for Rehaan's every day needs from his breakfast to dinner.He wanted to giv really best for his son this s true but was he also wanted to show this world that money can do any thing especially to Daddi to prove her that his decision not to get married was rite.

Maan had taken Rehaan with him to office and from Rehaan's birth Maan also arranged every thing for him at his office.A totally separate room.From cloths to every thing a child needs. Maan was going for an urgent meeting so he asked Addi to b with Rehaan after changing

Maan: Addi take care of him..I ll b back with in two hours..I hav ordered what he wants.Kal subha tak cook aa jaa-ega today hav to manage.(checking time Maan said)

Addi: Ji Sir but Rehaan ka home work.

Maan: Let him play.I ll take care of that at nite.But don't leave him alone.(looking at Rehaan with his i pad he said)

Addi: Ji Sir

Rehaan who was over hearing this came to him.

Rehaan:Papa I know u hav urgent work.But Papa I wanted to play outside .aur aap Rehaan ko akela nahi jaane dogay (he has sadness all ver his face)

Maan: Mera Bach..its matter of lil time fir hum ghar chal-egay..(he takes him up )

Rehaan was too much sad.Both Rehaan n Mannat they were lik any other kid of their age.They were stubborn.But never crossed that limit which could hurt their parents.So Rehaan let Maan go.He knew his father has other commitments too


Rehaan n Mannat super intelligent kids but mature too due to their differnt life than other kids...different life style than other kids.Both understand there is only one person who can take care of them.Lik Mannat never asks any question which hurtz her mother.Rehaan never protested his father to b with him when he wanted to play..Mannat she was luck in this condition to hav her mother for every need

Maan left in hurry.Rehaan had his favorite pizza n milk shake But he jst took it to fill his stomach .Addi noticed it so to divert his mind he started to hav a talk.

Addi: To Rehaan how was ur day ?


Rehaan: It was okey?(opening his book he said)


Addi: kya kya kia apne beta whole day ?

Rehaan: Jo main play school main karta tha (he gav him no attention)

Addi: Per yahan to aap books bhi le jatte ho play school main aise nahi tha...what ur teacher taught u ? (placing his hand over his head Addi said)


Rehaan: Aap Rehaan ka beg check kar lo Addi Uncle u ll find every thing in this


Addi: Ok let it go ek baat to aap jaroor batayo-gay..apke class mates kaise hai ..I mean apne koi friend banaya


Rehaan remained silent for some time n then throws his book.He has sudden smile on his face.


Rehaan: Rehaan ne Mannat ko apna friend bhi bana liya..Addi uncle first day hum dost ban gaye (sad Rehaan became super exiceted to tell about his friend)


Addi: Thats great Rehaan... waise aap itne pyare ho koi bhi apka frind ban sakta hai..aap to ho he aise no one let u go U r special (he pets his check )

Rehaan: No Addi Uncle she is so special wo bhi sirf special kid ko firnd banati hai .



Addi: Ya great special ko special he milna cha-hea (he cradles Rehaan)


Rehaan: Aur humne apna lunch bhi share kiya..nahi to Rehaan ko taste less lunch karna pad-ta..for me she had my tasteless lunch

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Rehaan felt sorry for Mannat.

Addi: She is really special Rehaan.

Rehaan: Aur Mannat ki Mommi mere liye lunch dengi every day.She promised me

Addi: But beta Papa has arranged cook for u..he ll giv u special what ever u want.

Rehaan: Nani mujhe nahi cook ka lunch khaana...Papa usko pay kare-gay but jo pay letay hai wo Rehaan ko pyar nahi karte. (he gets up n yelled )

Addi was surprised why he said so .

Addi : But beta cook to khana ba-naega..wo apse pyar kare na kare iska kya matlab.Ur Papa pay for work n he ll cook what ever u want.(confused Addi said taking him in his lap)

Rehaan: Addi uncle Daddi Maa Rehaan se kitna lov karti hai.. she do every thing for me per wo bimaar hai...Dev Chachu bhi Rehaan se kitna pyar karte hai ..Papa bhi becoz wo pay nahi lete.(he was in tears)

Addi understood what he wanna say.Rehaan was not that much big that he could make understand or could understand the meaning of relations...Why those people lov him.Becoz they were his own.People his father hires they jst do their job.He only observes n creates his own logic to differentiate relations n people hired.

Addi: But beta papa humko bhi pay karte hai ..hum to apse pyar karte hai na

Rehaan: Aap Papa ka office main job karte ho..aap wo nahi ho jinko Papa Rehaan ki look after k liye job per rakhte hai..aur aap tp Papa k friend ho..Daddi Maa kehti hai aap ko bhi wo Papa aur Chachu k jitna pyar karti hai..to aap to hamare hai...aap to humse pyar karo-gay he..aap to kissi aur office main bhi job karogay to bhi hum sabh se utna he pyar karogay na (his this logic made Addi's eyes to flow )

Addi: Ha beta hum apse utna he pyar kare-gay always karte rahegay (he hugged him more tightly n kissed him)

At nite Maan discussed each n every topic Rehaan wanna discuss from his school..teacher..study to Mannat.He helped Rehaan in his home work.Next day cook was there in morning For Rehaan that cook was same as other servants at home.But when it comes to food. He had his breakfast as usual.What he gonna do with his lunch he had decided in his mind.He was sure Mannat gonna bring lunch for him
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Really Mannat brought lunch for him.Geet not told Mannat that this is for her or other is for Rehaan.She jst gav to lunch boxes saying its food for both share it as u both wants.Mannat was much excited to tell Rehaan .But what was there they had to wait.

At lunch break

Rehaan: Mannat Mere Papa ne mere liye cook appoint kiya hai..aur mujhe special lunch bhi diya hai us cook ne.But main nahi khaa-unga (he put his box on table)


Mannat: okey tum mat khaana..hum dono roj wahi lunch kare-gay jo hamari Momi degi

Rehaan: Hamari momi but Mannat wo to tumhari momi hai..unko hamari momi tabh hai kehte jab main tumhara brother hota...jaise Dev Cahchu aur Papa ki DaddI Maa ek hai coz both r brothers.

He has logic created by his own mind.Mannat has her own way to use words she pronounce herself not hers but ours.But for Rehaan these two words hav gap in between from own relations to any one other he has no relation)

Mannat: Hamari momi ka matlab hai Mannat ki momi...(she clears)

Rehaan: Tum kaho Meri Momi..main tumhari momi ko momi kaise kahuga..tumhari momi ka naam aur hoga aur meri momi ka aur.

Mannat: Hamari Momi ..hamara matlab Mannat ki momi ka naam Geet hai...to kya Mannat ko momi ko Meri Momi Geet kehna hoga...

Rehaan: Ha Mannat...jaise mere Papa ka naam tumhare Papa ka naam nahi hai na...unka naam Maan hai..Mere Papa Maan hue wo

That boy who was threatened by Mannat his cousin was also in same class..lil bit lik Mannat bully n ready to mess.She knew what Mannat did with her brother

Riya : Tumhare Papa nahi hai Mannat lekin Mere Papa to hai Mere Papa Kunal Sharma hai wo police man hai...tumne mere bhai k sath fight ki thi..mere Papa ne aur mere chachu (that boy's father) ne kaha k agar kissi ne mere bhai k sath fight ki to wo tumhari complaint kare-gay.(she yelled coming near to her chair)

Mannat: Mannat ki momi tumko beat karegi if u mess with me (she put her hands on waist)

Riya : Momi se jayada Papa strong hotay hai Mere Papa tumhar Momi ko bhaga den-gay (she taunted)

Mannat became silent n tears rolled down her eyes.Rehaan noticed it.

Rehaan: Jayo jayo le aayo apne Papa ko Mere Papa Maan sabse powerful hai aur wo Mannat k liye bhi fight kare-gay Mannat ki Momi meri care karti hai to Rehaan k Papa bhi tumhare Papa ko dekh lengay..bhago yahan se (he jerked her shoulder n pushed her back )

Before more drama would b there class teacher came n asked all to sit keep quite.Rehaan wiped her tears.

Mannat: Rehaan sabke pass Papa hai..sabhi aise kehte hai Mere Papa per Mannat k pass to Papa nahi hai...to Mannat kya kare..Hamare pass to Momi hai..matlan Meri Momi Geet.(she sobbed )

Rehaan: Mannat to kya hua tum ro-o mat main Papa se ka-huga tumhare liye wo fight kare-gay agar kisi ne kush kaha jasie tumhari Momi mere liye lunch bhejti hai.Tumko pata hai Mere Papa kitne strong hai (he praised his father )

Mannat: Per wo to hamare papa nahi hai.

Rehaan: Mere Papa aise bolo

Mannat: Ha mere Papa...wo Mere Papa Maan nahi hai kyoki hum dono bro sister nahi hai..aur wo tumse pyear karte hai .(she made pitty face)

Rehaan: to kya hua tum mere papa ko apne papa keh liya karo wo mujhe se bahut pyar karte hai..meri khyal rakhte hai..home work kara-tey hai aur bahar bhi le kar jaate hai..raat ko bhi jab wo free hotay hai. unke pass bahut kaam hai fir bhi wo Rehaan k sath rehte hai (really great suggestion )

Mannat: tumhare papa Mannat k papa..hamare matlan Mannat k Mere Papa Maan..tumhare Papa tumhare liye sabh karte hai Mannat k liye kare to he wo Mere Papa hue

Rehaan: Ha Mannat jaise Addi uncle papa k friend hai aur wo unki Daddi Maa nahi firr bhi unko Daddi Maa kehte hai tum mer friend ho tum bhi mere papa ko papa kaho..wo tumse bhi pyar karegay (he waved his hand in air to made her understand)

Mannat: okey tum bhi Mannat ki momi ko meri momi Geet kaho-gay na...wo tumse pyar kare-gi..per tumhare Papa bahut attitude dikhate hai hum unko Mere Papa tab he kahe-gay jab wo humse bhi waise he deal kare-gay jaise tumse.

Rehaan: theek hai aab paka tumhari momi meri momi Geet aur mere papa tumse pyar kare-gay dekhna to hue wo tumhare Papa Maan

Mannat: aur Rehaan k Mere Papa Maan ..Mannat k Mere Papa Maan theek hai

Rehaan: Mannat aise nahi Rehaan k aur Mannat k Papa aab ek hai hai to tum aise kyo kehti ho Rehaan k Mere papa Maan aur Mannat k Mere Papa Maan..aab wo hamare papa Maan Sngh Khuraana ho gaye.

Mannat: Per Rehaan hum Mannat Handa hai aur tumhare papa k naam hamare naam mai nahi ..tumne kaha islye hum tumhare real Papa ko Papa kehe-gay u r my friend na islye wo hamare (thinks for a moment ) hamara matlaab Mannat aur Rehaan k papa nahi...Rehaan k real mere Papa Maan hai aur Mannat ko tumne Rehaan k Mere Papa Maan banaya diya..Per kya wo sach main Mannat k 'Real Mere Papa Maan nahi ban sakte'..Papa to wahi hotay hai jo real main lov karte hai...Sachi main Rehaan k Mere Papa Maan 'Mannat k 'Mere Papa Maan' nahi ho sakte Rehaan (she started to cry)

Rehaan: Pata nahi Mannat.Per tum ro-o mat dekhna tumko bhi tumhare Papa mil jaa-agay

Mannat: Rehaan Mannat ki momi Rehaan ki 'mer momi geet ban jaa-agi ' sachi main dekhna fir tumhari Momi bhi milegi agar hamare Papa nahi mere Papa bhi mil gaye to (she said with hop filled eyes)

What to say to what extent a child can think no one knows. Mere Papa Maan .Meri Momi Geet.both hav diffetn opinion to use words But 'Mine' n 'Our' are playing biggest role in their lives
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Jst in two days both kids had covered a long distance emptiness in their lives or some other reason attracted them.No one could understand.But they had started to create their own complete world filing empty space in their lives.

Both kids shared lunch which Geet gav.Mannat clever girl she stuffed her lunch with Rehaan's food so that Maan couldn't find out truth that Rehaan hadn't that lunch which he took from home.
Mannat planned to throw it in bin at her home.

Both Rehaan n Mannat they kept quite about what they decided front of Maan n Geet.Becoz Maan had to leave city for three days due to official work.So Daddi came to pick him up.No Mannat n Maan clash even Rehaan got no chance to meet Geet

After three days

Geet decided to start office for few hours.So after dropping Mannat at school .Both father daughter left for office.When Maan returned back this information form school that what Rehaan n Mannat do with their lunch shocked Maan n he was very angry .

Maan: Rehaan why u do this? jab apko sabse acha tiffin milta hai to (Maan was fuming but he not showed it to Rehaan..this was not due to his son.But due to his failure to provide best for his son)

Rehaan: But Papa wo Momi k hath se bana sabse acha hota hai..

Maan: Momi k hath se..u mean Mannat Handa ki Momi k hath se.(he caught what he wanna say)

Rehaan:Geet momi..meri bhi momi hai Mannat ne kaha..Papa maine pehle momi k hath se bana lunch kiya tha...next day cook ka breakfast kiya..Momi is best Papa...

Maan: To aap ko Mannat ki momi k hath ka khana acha lagta hai..(He smiled )

Rehaan: Papa mujhe momi k hath ka he acha lagta hai

Maan: To wo apki momi bhi ban gayi..u miss ur momi son (he was in tears but hided)

Rehaan: Papa where is my momi ?

Maan: I don know beta..but apko mom k hath ka khana jaroor milega.(he hugged him more tightly )

Rehaan: Sachi

Maan: Sachi .

What was Maan upto.He phoned Addi n told him some thing. Next day Addi reached Geet's office.As he came to meet her.

Geet: To aap Mr Aditiya hai Mr Khuraana k sabse khaas

Addi: Ji Madam

Geet: Hav a seat..kahiye apko hamara project discuss karna hai

Addi: No Madam (he stammers )

Geet: Fir 😲

Addi: Madam wo Maan Sir ne yeh check beja hai.

Geet: check...for what

Addi: wo madam aap Rehaan k liye roj lunch bhejti ha na to Maan Sir ne kaha hai aap yeh routine jaari rakhe...this is advance

Geet: What ? (she got up )

Addi: Wo Geet ji aise kabhi ho sakta hai k Mannat school na aaye due to any reason to wo Rehaan k lye lunch nahi laa-egi..but if there is a contract that is better.Even plz keep this on holiday.Delivery chrges n any cost u wanna add we ll pay (so he disclosed Maan's new stunt )

Geet: What..apke Sir pagal to nahi

Addi: No wo to yeh bhi keh rahe thay for whole day apke sath contract kare-gay hamare yahan se roz koi aadmi delivery le jaa-ega.

Geet:Jaa-ea aap yahan se...apke sir pagal khane se aaye hai

But before she could say more Inder came,He was surprised to find Addi.As he was going to meet MSK for official work.But Addi had not excuse why he was there.

Inder: Apko koi kaam tha

Geet: Wo Papa Mannat ki book reh gayi thi Rehaan k pass wo denne aaye thay..ghar nahi pata inko hamara.Aap ja rahe hai to main bhi chalti hu apke sath

Inder: Sure

Geet: maine socha Mr Khuraana jaise business man se bhi mil lu after all jab office shuru kar he diya hai.Kyo Mr Addi rite na (her meaning was dual)

She took check n left with Inder keeping it in her beg



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rehaan is sensitive about relationship
soon he will want to have a mother

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