After Holi: Ahem makes up with Gopi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi,
A short OS on how I would like to see Ahem make up with gopi in the coming track..
Hope u all njoy !

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Ahem finished his dinner & was above to leave... Koki who was in a bad mood after hearing GoShi's conversation came near Ahem to remind him abt the important task she had given him earlier that day.

Ahem was surprised at his mom's question first, but then he confided to her that he'nt sure what happend to him, he seems to have slept all afternnon today & also he doesnt remember clearly abt the incidents that happend in the noon...

Gopi who was cleaning the table, overheard this.. in a shock dropped the glass she had in her hand..

Koki: Gopi vahu, whats this ? what happned, why did u drop it?

Ahem looks at Gopi, Gopi's face was full of sorrow.. her eyes had 101 questions to him... he felt something tugging his heart... those questioning eyes had some mystery to his noon he thought.. coz, he was witness to happy smiles & love from the same eyes of Gopi 2 mins ago, before he mentioned abt the noon to his mom... he was thinking hard..

Gopi: Maaji, forgive me.. it slipped off my hand.. she had tears in her eyes by now..
Ahem ( who understood her tears was related to him) : Gopi, dont be so upset.. sab teek ho jaayega... he gave a reassuring look at her...

Koki was little perplexed, but assumed Gopi's behaviour was related to rashi's words.. and said , Gopi vau, teek che, itna udaasi mat ho.. krishn bagawan sab kuch teek kar dega.. un par vishwas rako.. saying so, she left from there..

These words from her maaji was soothing to gopi's hears.. she observed that Ahem's complete attention was on her & she realised he was also upset.. Ahem observed Gopi wiping those tears at the corner of her eyes..

He waited there until she cleaned the table. Ahem was sure she would skip her dinner..hence was waiting there for her..
Gopi who came out from kitchen saw ahem at the dining table.. asked him if he needed anything..

Ahem: haan gopi, i want something.. i want u to get ur dinner to the table now..

Gopi: Ahemji, im not hungry now, will have it later..

Ahem: Gopi, ye sab bahaana chodo, just go now & get ur dinner..

Ahem's headache hadnt subsided yet, coupled with that he was feeling guilty , thou he was not sure why he was feeling so.. but he had mixed emotions & he was sure it had to do with Gopi..

When Gopi was thru with her dinner, he asked Gopi for some home made remedies for his headache.
He asked her to get it to their room soon, as his head was splitting..

Gopi was sad abt Ahem's headache.. she prepared some variation of Kada, whcih she presumed would give him some relief..


In their room: Ahem was sitting on the couch with the laptop, trying to catch up with the next days work... but his mind & heart wasnt co-operating.. Gopis questioning eyes kept coming back to him to disturb him..

All he cud remember was he was hoping to make this Holi spl for Gopi.. he wanted to apply colors to her..
He also gathered that when he woke up he was in his vests.. he noticed color on the bed, also, a couple of broken pieces of Gopi's bangles..
Ahem realised what must have happend, but felt sad that he cudnt recall everything..
He reassured to himself that he will not make Gopi realise anything.. he knew what effects the bhang had.. temporary memory loss only & that he wud recall everything the next day... so, he was confident in his actions now..


Gopi slowly entered the room with the kada.. with mixed emotions on her face.. slightly concerned for Ahem .. her face didnt have that magical smile which he saw before the dinner..

Gopi: Ahemji, aapki kada.. saying so she handed the kada glass to him
Ahem brushed her fingers when picking the glass from her & noticed the sudden spark in her eyes.. Ahem was now sure what he thought was right...

Gopi was feeling perplexed..

Ahem: Gopi, wow mera sar ab bhi bahut baari hai.. can u massage my head?
Gopi was surprised, but was happy too.. she said she would get the nilgiri tel for the massage, as that would relieve his headache & heaviness faster...
Ahem nodded,.. all he wanted was to hide his temporary amnesia to Gopi ..

Gopi was back with her medicines...

Ahem locked the door & led her to the bed..
He made her sit on the bed & he said down on the floor to make it comfortable for the massage..
Gopi was happy with Ahems behavior... she started to massage his head with ease..
Ahem could sense the ease in her fingers.. his heart sobbed that he cudnt remember.. but left it aside & started to njoy her fingers on his head.. it was magical..
he was njoying the massage & was happy with the magic his wife was weaving on his mind & soul...

After a while, Gopi asked him: Ji, ab kaise lag raha hai?

Ahem: Gopi, bahut achha lag raha hai.. thanks, ur hands have magic in them..
Gopi started to blush.He quickly grabbed her hand & placed a kiss on them..

Gopi had tears of joy again, this time she was happy that Ahem didnt forget/ regret what happened in the noon..

That night Ahem had a sound sleep, must have been due to the massage & the kada..Early in the morning he woke up to find himself on the bed, with gopi beside him & his hand over Gopi's waist..He saw the peaceful face of Gopi.. gave himself a pat on the back for not messing up with her again ..


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a very nice OS. hope to see the same in screen. the shot pacified me. thanks a lot
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👏Beautiful !! ⭐️ Praying it happens this way !!! 👍🏼
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Nice os. He should not mess up again.
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Lovely OS.
Ahem was so sensitive and caring making sure that Gopi was not upset with him.
It will be great if it pans out in the show like this.
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Very awesome OS...👏

this is how Ahem is ... his heart pains to see gopi's pain
and he is a smart man to get things back to normal👏⭐️


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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a beautiful OS...it was so beautiful to know that Ahem realized not to hurt Gopi again. I hope our Ahem does the same thing on the show. Thank you for this OS, as it is something to dream about and hope for on manoday.

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Awesome Os Loved it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swasthi

Lovely OS.

Ahem was so sensitive and caring making sure that Gopi was not upset with him.
It will be great if it pans out in the show like this.


Thanks swasthi. I feel Ahem is a sensitive person.. Wud be nice to see this way on the show.

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