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awesome update ..

beautiful update ritzy di and poonam bond made it just perfect
loved it
so maan has finally accepted her
loved the bond she shared with vicky that was really cute
continue asap di

This story is really awesome di !!!! I just love ur writing !!!! Must say...u hav portrayed maan n geet in a very practical way !!!!! I just love it !!! Continue soon !!

Hi Friends,

Thank you for your comments and feedback.

Two of my dear friends mentioned about Geet not working or getting bored in last update. Want to clarify something which was in my head but forgot to penn down. It was just a week into marriage. She had taken time off for wedding but with Maan going to office and not the honeymoon, she had nothing to do. But she is definitely going to work which suits her character. It was a miss from my side and thanks for pointing it out.

This part is dedicated to Cyberlifeonce again who requested me specifically for a Holi sequence. Sorry dear that it got little delayed as I needed a proper place to put it.

This part is almost three times the size of what I usually write. So all of you need to give me long comments.

Another important note is that I am going on vacation to India on March 24^th. It is my sister's wedding so there will be absolutely no time to update. I will be back in April so next update after coming week will be around April 21/22. I will try to give at least two more updates before I leave but no promises. Hope you will understand and remember this FF and wait for the updates.

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Chapter 16

(Chapter is in two posts. Please press like on the second post. Thanks)

Daadima smiled at seeing Geet's enthusiasm as she started helping Nakul in finishing off kanji (a Holi drink made out of water, mustard seeds, salt and either pakodis or carrots. It is tangy and strong as it is kept in sun for mustard seeds to ferment) and making gujiyas.

It was Holi next day. She sighed thinking how Maan will react because he hated crowds and colors after Poonam's death but seeing Geet's excitement, she could not stop her from throwing a Holi party to all neighbors, friends and her maiden family.

After all, it was her first Holi after marriage and that was traditionally also a very important event. Also, after marriage, Maan has to eventually stop brooding and partake in Geet's happiness. With this thought, Daadima also joined her bahus in the preparations and their discussions around bhang, thandayi and other things.

Next Day

Maan came down for puja and applied color to all the idols at home along with everyone in the family. He was dressed in white t-shirt and old faded jeans. Geet wore a beige color suit and participated with him in the puja. As it finished, everyone applied color to each other wishing 'Happy Holi" But all just did tika to Maan and refrained from splashing any color on his face.

Last was Geet who looked amusedly at everyone. With a glint in her eyes and mischievous smile, she filled both her hands with color and before anyone could react, caressed Maan's cheeks putting gulal on his entire face with drops on his clothes.

All looked at her in shock as she screamed "Happy Holi"

Maan glared at her in anger but controlled himself. He did not want to ruin everyone's mood and started to walk out. He felt a tug at his hands as Geet held him – "Kahan jaa rahe hain aap…mujhe toh wish kijiye"

[Where are you going….at least wish me]

"Happy Holi Geet but I don't like all these colors…samjhi tum"

Geet kept her hand in front of him and stopped him from moving – "Are wah, yeh kya baat hui. Aisa tha toh aapne bhagwan ko rang kyon lagaya. Unhe toh wish kiya aur mujhe nahi. Hum nahi maante."

[Come On…that's not fair. If that's true then why did you apply color to God? You wished them but not me. I won't agree]

Daadima also jumped in – "Haan yeh toh Geet thik keh rahi hai. Agar aap puja mein bhagwaan ko laga sakte hain toh humein kyon nahi"

[Yes, Geet is absolutely right. If you can apply color to God as part of prayer then why not us?]

Maan mentally cursed Geet – "Baatein banana toh koi is pagal ladki se seekhe"

[Everyone can learn how to make tall talks from this mad girl]

Maan smiled forcibly and applied color to all – "Ab sab khush…ab mein jaoon face wash karne"

[Now is everyone Happy….now can I go to wash my face]

Everyone giggled as Maan walked away.

Later, Daadima, Meera, Dev and Maan walked towards the lawn to inspect the arrangements as guests were due but they could not find Geet and Vicky anywhere.

Meera – "Dekha aapne Daadima…pata nahi dono kahan chale gaye hain…Geet toh na Vicky ke saath aur bhi bachi ban jaati hai"

[Did you see Daadima…where these two have gone….Geet becomes even more childish when she is with Vicky]

Meera had not even finished her sentence when they heard "SPLAT" "SPLAT" "SPLAT" "SPLAT" "SPLAT" "SPLAT" "SPLAT" "SPLAT"

Followed by shrieks of everyone, including Maan who had a big purple and blue splash on now soaking wet t-shirt. All four looked upwards and saw Vicky sitting on Geet's shoulder with water balloons in his both hands.

Geet was whistling with her fingers in the mouth as Vicky danced on her shoulders – "Holi hai bhai Holi hai….bura na mano Holi hai"

[Holi Hai…its Holi…Don't mind….it's Holi]

Daadima and Meera laughed while Dev shouted – "Abhi batata hoon tum dono ko"

[I'll teach you two a lesson]

Saying this Dev ran inside to catch hold of both the monsters.

Maan was going to shout at her but words died in his mouth as he saw beaming face of Vicky and his entire family. Everyone was enjoying themselves with complete abandon and it looked ages away when they have been so happy and free. He looked at the girl who was now scrambling along with Vicky with pichkaris to assault Dev as he reached the terrace. He looked on as both Geet and Vicky drenched Dev completely before Dev could get hold of Vicky and took his pichkari to color both Vicky and Geet back.

Daadima's heart felt contentment as she saw a small smile tugging at Maan's lips as he gazed his wife in reverence. He seemed completely enthralled and Daadima had to pat him on the shoulder to break out his reverie - "Jaayiye aap bhi khel lijiye"

[Go, you also play]

Maan shook his head in denial.

Daadima cupped his face – "Aap nahi jaante aaj hum kitna khush hain. Sach mein lagta hai humare ghar mein rangon ki bauchaar aa gayi hai. Waise bahut shararti hain aapki biwi, Dekhiye humein bhi nahi choda. Gubaare se rang dala humein bhi"

[You don't know how happy I am today. I truly feel that our house has been showered by colors. But you know that your wife is quite naughty. See she didn't even leave me. She has colored me also using water balloon]

Maan noticed the moisture in his Daadima's eyes and just hugged her lightly.

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Guests started arriving and finally Meera somehow got Geet, Vicky and Dev down after they had used all their balloons on unsuspecting guests.

Party was in full swing with Kaanji, Gujiya, Pakore, Bhang Thandayi and a Normal Thandayi flowing freely. Mohinder, Rano and Rahul came after sometime and wished everyone. Rahul and Geet played like kids with Vicky and other children as they completely filled each other with color.

Dev was in a naughty mood set by Geet and decided to play a prank. He asked Nakul to give a glass of bhang thandayi to Meera. As Meera was going to drink it, Geet took the glass from her as she was very thirsty. Dev looked on horrified as Meera took another glass and both girls gulped down their drink.

Bhang hit Geet slowly and things became worse when she took another glass of bhang as she really liked the taste. Now Dev was toasted and he knew he had to do something. He panicked and ran to Daadima – "Daadima…woh"

Daadima patted his cheek lightly – "Kya baat hai Dev aap pareshaan lag rahe hain"

[What's the matter Dev…you look troubled]

Maan also excused himself and came there as he could see that something was wrong from Dev's face.

"Woh, maine galti se Geet ko bhang de di …and she drank full two glasses"

[Woh, I by mistake gave bhang to Geet…and she drank full two glasses]

Maan almost shouted – "Kya…yeh ladki toh waise hi bomb hai pata nahi ab kya dhamaka karegi"

[What…this girl is normally also a bomb…God only knows what blast she will do now]

[Maan!!! You have also started talking like Geet]

They tried to search for her and saw her talking to Nakul.

They sighed in relief as she looked quite sober but suddenly they were shocked out of their lives as she climbed a table and started speaking

"Happy Holi everyone. But aapko nahi lagta yeh Holi party is thandayi ki tarah thandi ho gayi hai and it looks more of a business party now"

[Happy Holi everyone. But don't you all feel that this Holi party has become cold like this cold drink and it looks more of a business party now]

Dev - "Yeh kya kar rahi hai bro"

[What is she doing bro?]

Maan - "Tumne pilayi hai ab bhugto…kahin ka nahi chodegi aaj yeh mujhe"

[You made her drunk, now face the consequences…she won't leave me to show anybody my face today]

"So people, let's bring back the magic and enjoy holi before we break for lunch"

She looked at Nakul who gave her thumbs up sign

"Friends, I have a challenge for all handsome men to impress upon their ladies…after all holi rangon ke saath saath pyaar ka bhi tyohar hai

We have tied two matkis on top…not too high so it should not be very hard. Make two teams and which breaks the matki first will get a special prize from the darling girl in their life.

So come on guys, show that these muscles are not just for show off and tell me who wants to be the leader."

[Friends, I have a challenge for all handsome men to impress upon their ladies…after all along with love, Holi is also a festival of love

We have tied two earthen pots on top…not too high so it should not be very hard. Make two teams and which breaks the matki first will get a special prize from the darling girl in their life.

So come on guys, show that these muscles are not just for show off and tell me who wants to be the leader.]

All women started cheering and hooting as men looked at each other.

Rahul was the first one to come ahead – "I will be the leader of one team"

"Wah mere sher….RAGE…RAGE"

[Come on my lion….RAGE…RAGE]

Rahul smiled and winked at Geet as some men started joining Rahul.

Geet smiled looking at Dev and Maan "Mr. Khurana…kya hua….aap next team nahi banayenge"

[Mr. Khurana…what happened…you won't make the next team]

Dev - "Bro aaj aapki biwi humari bones tudwane wali hai"

[Bro, today your wife is going to make our bones break]

Maan glared at Dev – "I don't believe in this game"

"Kyon…kahin dar toh nahi gaye aap that you are not that young anymore….don't be scared…I vouch guys that these muscles are quite real and hard"

[Why…I hope you are not scared that you are not that young anymore…don't be scared… I vouch guys that these muscles are quite real and hard]

Daadima and Meera almost balked in shock hearing her words while Maan closed his eyes in frustration. Rano and Mohinder knew what a tease Geet can be and did not realize that she was giving shocks to everyone else.

Someone from the crowd cheered – "Come on Mr. Khurana…ab toh biwi ne bhi certificate de diya…you have to rise to the challenge"

[Come on Mr. Khurana…now even your wife has given the certificate… you have to rise to the challenge]

Maan knew there was no way to come out of it without bruising his ego and agreed to be leader for second team.

Both teams started making totem pole while Rahul and Maan tried to climb it. Many times they fell down due to lack of practice and bhang people had consumed. Also, all girls led by Geet were throwing water at them making it very slippery.

Both Rahul and Maan reached the top almost at the same time but Maan managed to break the matki few seconds before Rahul eliciting a huge amount of applause and cheer from crowd.

"Well to celebrate the valor of these brave men, let's proceed to lunch but not before we gift our love to the winners.

My small token of appreciation to my darling hubby is a kiss."

Crowd cheered as eyes popped out from Maan. He had no idea what Geet was going to do and by now even Rano got the inkling that her daughter was definitely intoxicated.

Geet reached Maan and scanned his face for a moment. And them amidst clapping held Maan hand and gave a peck on his fingers. "Awww", was the collective sigh as all the wives took a cue and kissed their husbands in a similar fashion. They all missed Geet winking at Maan except for the man himself as she teased him "What did you think?"

Maan colored slightly and held her hand. He nodded to Daadima before taking her inside.

But Geet was nowhere giving up "Chodo mera haath. Aap kahan leke jaa rahe ho mujhe. Dusht Daanav ho aap…mujhe holi bhi nahi khelne dete"

[Leave my hand. Where are you taking me? You are a Dusht Daanav…doesn't even let me play Holi]

Maan sighed as he looked at her pouting face and stubborn demeanor. He picked her up in his arms and started walking towards their room.

Geet stopped her blabbering and looked at her husband thru veiled eyelashes. She spoke very softly – "Aap mujhse naraaz ho. I know you don't love me…nahi nahi…you don't even like me. Lekin mein sach mein itni buri bhi nahi hoon. I am sorry but please aap mujhse naraaz mat ho"

[Are you are angry with me? I know you don't love me…no no…you don't even like me. But in reality I am not that bad. I am sorry but please you don't be angry with me.]

Her love filled pleading voice made his heart stop. A pain pierced him as he looked at her expecting eyes.

"I am not angry with you and I do like you. Tum bahut achi ho Geet. But you look so tired, isiliye mein tumhein le aaya. Tum bath leke thodi der so jao"

[I am not angry with you and I do like you. You are very nice Geet. But you look so tired, that is why I got you inside. You take bath and then sleep for some time]

Geet smiled widely hearing his words "Sachi…Oh you are so sweet"

She hugged his neck tight and pecked his shoulder in delight. Maan felt a jolt of electricity passing through his veins at her proximity. Thankfully they had reached room by then and he placed her down gently.

As he turned to take out fresh clothes for her, she held his hand "Aap neeche kya expect kar rahe the"

[What were you expecting downstairs?]

Maan frowned in confusion. "Kya matlab"

[What do you mean?]

Geet laughed pointing her finger at him "Haaw…aap kitne badmaash ho…aap ko laga mein sab ke samne aapko sachi muchi face pe kiss kar dungi hai na"

[Haaw…you are so wicked…you thought that I will give you a kiss on the face in front of everybody]

Maan tried to deny but Geet cut him "Jhoot mat bolo aap…but don't worry I will not cheat you"

[Don't lie Maan…but don't worry I will not cheat you]

Saying this she tiptoed and planted a small peck each on his both the cheeks.

She cupped his face - "Khush…ab smile"

[Happy…now smile]

Saying this she skipped to Bathroom leaving behind a dazed Maan with hand on his cheek "Did she just kiss me?"

He was broken out of his thought when Rano knocked "Beta…Geet thik toh hai"

[Son…Is Geet Ok?]

Maan - "Haan Mummyji..woh usne galti se bhang pi li hai…isliye main"

[Yes Mummyji…actually she drank bhang by mistake..that is why]

Rano – "Uski taraf se I am sorry"

[I am sorry from her side]

Maan stopped mummy from speaking anything more "Yeh aap kya keh rahi ho Mummyji…please. Waise bhi holi mein toh yeh sab chalta hai"

[What are you saying Mummyji…please. Moreover, all this is part and parcel of Holi]

Rano smiled. "I will take care of her…aap jaake apne guests ko dekho"

[I will take care of her…you look after your guests]

Maan went downstairs while Rano managed somehow to bathe her hyper daughter and put her to sleep.

After all the guests left, Maan finally entered his room for bath to find Geet sleeping in bed. He shook his head slightly noticing the slight smile on her face "Pagli"

Maan went to bathroom without noticing a trail of tear which came out of her eyes. "I am not that intoxicated Maan to not read your care for me. Aap bahut ache ho…bahut. Nashe ke bahane hi sahi, aaj meine apne liye kuch yadon ke sunhere pal kismet se cheen liye"

[I am not that intoxicated Maan to not read your care for me. You are very nice…very. Maybe it is at the expense of me being drunk, but today I have stolen some very beautiful moments for my memory from destiny for myself]

She turned burying her face in the pillow as she allowed sleep to finally take over her.

Precap – Khadoos…Kanjoos…Dusht Daanav

Thnks for the long update. Yay i am the first one. 😊

amazing update

loving the precap more.. waiting for it..