OS:Virmaan Cancer Truth is Out to The Vadheras

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Guess whose back!!!! 😊 Did y'all miss me...lol I know I deserve chappals and all tht kind of stuff..I have been active on this forum but not with my unique writing lol..well now tht m back..show me all your love and tell me how much you missed me lol..through commenting or this story..BTW..SORRY TO EVERYONE BECAUSE OF MY SUDDEN STOP ON WRITING FOR MY OS OR FFS I HAVEN'T WRITTEN ANG PART OF HEY M THERE FOR YOU BABE OR LOVE BLOSSOMS OR ANY SORRY GUYS I WAS JUST IN LOVE..lol with BARUN SOBTI AKA MERE WOH ARNAV JI..LMAOOO..alright enough of my crazy side..brklyn_gal well I changed my name from brklyn gal to Ksg luv but whatever yea so where was I oh yeah.:.KSG_Luv is BACK..with. A Bang. And slot of drama...


Beeji..chalein...manvi said teary eyed
Haan chal BG said.
Manvi tune apni cancer wali..medicines...BG stopped in her track a she saw Jeevika standing with Viren.
Medicines Jeevika asked..looking around.
Uh di...um WOH haan medicines WOH diii actually mujhe WOH dr.mannan ne na tablets di hain jisse main kam Kaun(eat) kyun k unko lagta hai main moti...Manvi tried to make a excuse.

Bas mannu..if you don't know how to lie don't lie with me..
But di..actually why should we tell you what we are talking about this is between the Choudhrys and you are a Vadhera so I'm sorry our secrets will stay to us..Manvi said sticking her tongue out begging in her mind For Jeevika to believe her. But all went to vain.

Manvi please..BG I have been watching you lately..BG..what kind of medicines..BG plz tell me Jeevika begged as she cried

Di PLEASEEE...Jiju..Manvi looked at Viren for help.
I'm sorry Manvi but I have been noticing the same thing..what's going on? He asked.

Nothing ok I don't have to answer anyone's questions..Manvi said at the same time as she said I'm sorry di and juju in her mind..

But Jeevika wasn't gonna get a no for an answer she followed Manvi out to the hall where every Vadhera was gathered to bid the Choudhrys goodbye.

They all saw the way, Jeevika ran upto Manvi and grabbed her wrist as the two sisters cried.

Maanvi please...Jeevika begged
Kia please di..Manvi said looking every where but at Jeevika.

Her hands flew upto Jeevikas head unknowingly. Jeevika was holding manvis hand on her head.

Manvi tujhe meri kasam..Jeevika said
Manvi tried to pull her hand away, but Jeevikas grip tightened.

Di please..Manvi begged
Nahi Manvi..Jeevika said
Di..
MANVI TUJHE BATA NA HI HOGA
DI KIA BATAU MANVI YELLED AS LOUD AS JEEVIKA
MANVI KAUNSI MEDICINES AUR CANCER KE BAARE MEIN KIA..
DI PLEASEEE
MANVI!!! Jeevika said
YOU WANT TO KNOW WELL HERE I HAVE CANCER HAPPY!!! Manvi yelled.

Manvis hand slipped from Jeevikas head as Jeevikas hold on it loosened.
Jeevika looked at her sister before collapsing.

Jeevika...bhabi!! Came the voices as Manvi just stood their staring.
I'm sorry di Manvi whispered
M really sorry..BG and Chachu followed Viren and the rest of Vadheras leaving Manvi behind.

Manvi was backing towards the door.
As she was about to run, she felt someone grab her wrist. She closed her eyes tight.
Jiju plea..Manvis sentence was left on track as she realized who had grabbed her wrist.

He looked as he would break down any moment.

Virat..Manvi whispered
Wont you go by your sisters side. He asked
She's your bhabi came the reply.
But she's your sister first..where's the sister love now Manvi..you can't leave your sister now. SHe won't be able to tolerate it. Virat said.

Manvi knew his sentence had a double meaning, he didn't only tell her to stay right now in Vadhera house for her sister but also inthe world for her sister.

Virat PLEASEEE Manvi begged.

Manvi challo..he said as he dragge her.

No virat..virat..VIRAT. STOP. Manvi yelled.

Virat ignored her protests, until he heard her say.

Virat please..she said in a sweet voice.
Virat looked at her and let go. He didn't know why. But he had to.but as she started to walk away again, he held her wrist.

Virat!! you said you don't want me in this house..so LET ME GO.
I SAID I DON'T WANT YOU IN THIS HOUSE I DIDN'T SAY I DONT WANT YOU IN THIS WORLD!! Yelled Virat.

So that's why he had been upset..thought Manvi.

Alright m evil. Now you guys can think wht happens after this on your own lol. Guys plz comment or I'll feel lonely and unliked..I missed you all so much..thank you..
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ChurriBurri thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please do continue...and pm when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Churri

please do continue...and pm when you update



Lol I'll think about it though m glad u liked it!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey im so glad ur finally back uff ur back wiv a massive bang...I did miss u and ur writing nw im happy ur back...
Loved it especially when maanvi shouted that ive gt cancer happy? So sad...
I literally loved virat in the last part when he sed...
"I SAID I DON'T WANT YOU IN THIS HOUSE I DIDN'T SAY I DONT WANT YOU IN THIS WORLD!!"
Please continue this would be so amazing and when u do please pm me...thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hs7071

Hey im so glad ur finally back uff ur back wiv a massive bang...I did miss u and ur writing nw im happy ur back...
Loved it especially when maanvi shouted that ive gt cancer happy? So sad...
I literally loved virat in the last part when he sed...
"I SAID I DON'T WANT YOU IN THIS HOUSE I DIDN'T SAY I DONT WANT YOU IN THIS WORLD!!"
Please continue this would be so amazing and when u do please pm me...thanks



Aww thank you firstly did I ever tell you tht you ROCK!!!lol... Love YOUUU for such a lovely comment.. You so damn sweet.. Aww well m back lol... Yup these two were my fav parts too!! Actually I was decidin wether to say "in my life" instead of world but I wanted it to seem realistic..lol. Aww I sure will..think about it lol...nah m kidding I dunno..I honestly don't know how to continue lol.. 😊 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear...luvd it...short yt heart touchin...spcl the last line by virat...👏
plss do cont ...
n do add me as ur buddy n pm me wen u update...wud luv 2 read more frm u .. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alicemath

hey dear...luvd it...short yt heart touchin...spcl the last line by virat...👏

plss do cont ...

ndo add me as ur buddy n pm me wen u update...wud luv 2 read more frm u .. 😊



Hey hey..lol..aww thank youuu!! 😊 aww m glad u liked it!! Yeah thts my fav line too.. I'll try..lol aww thank youuu..alright I'll add you but id warn u about Pm thingy cz m on a pm strike lol..no pms until a select all button is made..lol cz sending bout 200+ pms indiviiduall through my phone..my poor baby fingers will die lol.. 😆 Aww thank youuu honey.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey this was really good . I really loved the whole idea.
Seems quite interesting. And loved this line to the core "I SAID I DONT WANT U IN THUSHOUSE NOT I DONT WANT U IN THIS WORLD" and update son
And ADD ME IN YOUR PM LIST
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well it gud to see u back dear n yes it was. a huge bang.swet n touchng part miss u n yr writng 2.:-):-):-)
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hey plz... cont. and pm me plz...

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