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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


On what did you get angry

I forgot but all i remember early in morning i was yaping like a dog! šŸ˜†šŸ˜† Me not talking to anyone yet šŸ˜† apart from schoolšŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 23

G:Meer you trust me na

Mohinder:GEET STOP THIS DRAMA AND GET OUT OF MY HOUSE.AND NEVER COMING BACK

Meera; Come Geet let's go

G;But meer

M:Chal Geet.

Meera and Sheen dragged a crying Geet with her. They went to Meera's house. Geet kept crying bitterly.

Meer and Sheen:Geet we now you didn't do anything we trust you. We now you from childhood. Maan doesn't

Geet: and dad

Meer:Geet the pictures and dvd

Geet:Hmm

Sheen: I am sure Evelien mom is behind it. We'il prove you innoncent.

Geet: hmm

Meera's mother came in.

Aunty:Geet you should go

M:but mom she doesn't have a place to stay

A:Well why doesn't she go to the guy, who she cheated maan with

M; mom pleas

A:Meer en sheen go to meer's room now.

geet stood up to leave.

S: I am going with geet

A:No your mother told me that your staying here your mother doesn't want you to be friends with such a caracterless girl.Now go to your room

Sheen and Meera were helpless they went to Meera's room. While geet left. She kept walking. She went to rano's graveyard. She kept crying there.

G:He didn't believe me mom and so didn't dad. But I know he will believe one day and get me back. He will na mom. He will be so sorry right mom.But I will forgive him cause I now he loves me and only me right mom.And dad he didn't mean either what he was saying everything will be alright right mom. And neither did maan they both love me

Geet cried hystercially. After a while she stood up. She kept walking. She took all her jeweliers off accept the bracelet. And sold them. With that money she decided to go to a land far away.


Geet's monologue

I am now leaving. I am going far away from you guys because I know I can't face you guys now. I don't have that strenght to see you looking at me like I am some filth. But I know dad, Maan will search ,me and bring me back to you.

Geet left to California. She rented a house. .It had been two years since that horrible day.She felt so lifeless She was walking down the street at night. When she heard a baby crying. He was lying alone on the street. She picked him up he was so cute. That's when her bracelet shined in the darkness and Geet's eyes fell the name Maneet. Geet smiled Maan our baby Maneet. She picked him up and called him Maneet.

End of diary

Maneet started crying hysterically. Geet ran into the room.

G:Maneet whats wrong baby.

She saw the maths book in his hand.She grabbed the book.

G:Baby aren't you getting some questions. That doesn't mean you cry. Mama will help you.

She looked into the Maths book and she coudn't believe what she saw. Her diary pages.

G:But how you were supposed to read no how did you I

M:You found me on the street I am not your

G:Ssh come her. Geet had tears in her eyes.

G:Did you ever got the feeling your not my kid huh

M:No

G:Then why are you talking like that your the best thing that ever happened to me.

M:why did my parents dump me on the street wasn't I good enough for them. Am I a trouble for you.

G:No Maneet. I don't now which unlucky person put your there. But you only spelled luck in our life. And how could you say your parents put you there neither me or Maan would ever do that get it.

Oops accidently out of Geet's mouth slipped you luck in our life. And how could you say your parents put you there neither me or Maan would ever do that get it.Geet con fastly to hid her slipm of tongue.

G:You were the luck of my life you gave me a reason to live again when I lost all hope.You are My and only my child Maneet

Maneet wiped his tears away.

M:Wrong mommy

G:Maneet

geet said with pain in her voice.Maneet wiped away Geet's tears.

M:Mommy I am also Maan's child.

Geet took Maneet in her lap.

G:No maneet that's what I used to think. I used to believe it that badly, that I thought he would regonize you directly or atleast the name. That he would now that your are son. But he didn't.

M:Then we will make him regonize

G:No Maneet. Maan is married he has a own family now and we are not part of that family.

M:Mom everything will be okay we just need to figure out with whom he is married and if he is really married

G:Maneet it's over

M:Hmm

G:And by my diary papers, with you. ???I burned my diary how did you get it??

M:Wo I saw you crying and Maneet told his mom the entire story.

Except he didn't tell her that he listen to her convo with his teddy and that he has another plan on his sleeves. What he was a agent he coudn't tell her everything.

M:Mom can you read the rest of the story pretty pleas.

Geet knew Maneet was still hurt and acting all strong so she decided to give in to his demand.


Dairy
She picked him up he was so cute. That's when her bracelet shined in the darkness and Geet's eyes fell the name Maneet. Geet smiled Maan our baby Maneet. She picked him up and called him Maneet.

Geet's monologue
Oh Maan look at our baby he reminds so much of you. When you will release that I didn't do anything wrong. You will be so happy to now that your son and I are waiting for you. And daddy you have become a grandfather.

Geet took care of Maneet in very way. She loved it. After a long while she was feeling a smile on her was. Her life was doing better and better. She started designing and booking results in now time before she new it. She was about to open her own company. She was so happy she went home and hugged Maneet. He was 2 years old now. Ow it's all thx to my baby she thought. Maan and dad will be so proud of me.One day when she was going to register the company's name she saw a magazine. On the front of the Magazine was Maan's face.
The title of the Magazine was: World's most successful and youngest business man. Th underline stated. MSK the owner of Khurana constructions.

Geet's monolgue
OMG Maan you did it. I knew it you would succeed. My richie rich I am so proud of you. She called up Maan immediately.

Maan:Hello
G:
M:Hello what the hell do you want Geet. How dare you call me.

Geet didn't had it in her to say anything. So she hung up. No she didn't want to ruin his special day and apparently he still didn't now the truth. But she would congratulate him. She went to a jeweler and ordered a silver watch with May you get all the happenis in the world. She send him that with flowers and a congrats letter, which she didn't type but let the flower write it. She didn't had it in her to write it herself. She was to scared of his reaction. Even if he was in another place of the world.

She went to the register office.

worker:Madam the name of your company.

Geet thought for a while. She thought about the way he talked to her. Your still a Dust danav, but also my dd.you still regonise my number. You still love me I just now that.

G:D&G

She came home and twirled Maneet around.

G:Ow Maneet look how great your daddy is doing. Your not only the luck of your mother but also the luck of your father.

Geet went to her office. She put the picture of Maneet on her table. My boy luck she thought ans she put the picture of Mohinder and rano in one drawer. Miss you daddy and that of Maan in the other drawer. Mera dd. She thought.
They way years kept fading away and she heard nothing of Maan her optimistic attitude started changing. She knew somewhere she would never have her happy family and Maan would never get her. No he never loved her enough. Somewhere she started feeling deceived by Maan. Because without trust there's no love she reminded herself. And Maan never loved her. The feeling of being deceived grew bigger and bigger by day. And she promised herself to forget Maan. Love stared fading and making place for anger and hate.


precap: Let the games begin šŸ˜‰
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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😭😭😭😭 ----------edited---------------
I knew it, there was no sense how could Maaneet be Geet's son? right nah? I did the maths calculations and it was obvious! I love you Maaneet, no matter what?
Geet saw him on the streets and poor baby...I wanna cuddle him in my arms right now and kissed his cheek and says "You're awesome" šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
Geet kept Maan and his dad in her heart and kept for herself; all the pain,
and considered Maaneet to be their son...
she even cared for that heartless brute, no-brain, silly, insane, 200% yucky, dag Maan 😔I hate you more Maan for everything
Now Maaneet, he has a brain, he's everything combined together
Let's the game begin and I want Maan and Mohinder to suffer like hell! Yes, please atleast don't put Geet all alone for all these years, it's terrible!!! 🤢😭
Brilliant Update Mel
Love you!
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

I forgot but all i remember early in morning i was yaping like a dog! šŸ˜†šŸ˜† Me not talking to anyone yet šŸ˜† apart from schoolšŸ˜†


well learn to control your anger female MSKšŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420


well learn to control your anger female MSKšŸ˜†

shut up šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† commented check!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mel, tomorrow I'm coming for another update you want the thread to reach 150, then okay
but I do want an update
with my list of curses for Maan of course *smirk*
see ya got english h.w to do!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

res😭 ----------edited---------------

I knew it, there was no sense how could Maaneet be Geet's son? right nah? I did the maths calculations and it was obvious! I love you Maaneet, no matter what?
Geet saw him on the streets and poor baby...I wanna cuddle him in my arms right now and kissed his cheek and says "You're awesome" šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
Geet kept Maan and his dad in her heart and kept for herself; all the pain,
and considered Maaneet to be their son...
she even cared for that heartless brute, no-brain, silly, insane, 200% yucky, dag Maan 😔I hate you more Maan for everything
Now Maaneet, he has a brain, he's everything combined together
Let's the game begin and I want Maan and Mohinder to suffer like hell! Yes, please atleast don't put Geet all alone for all these years, it's terrible!!! 🤢😭
Brilliant Update Mel
Love you!


yep you get a ten for your maths homeworkšŸ˜‰ I told you not to hate my maanšŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW AWESOME UPDATE
SHE FOUND MANEET IN STREET
LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

Mel, tomorrow I'm coming for another update you want the thread to reach 150, then okay

but I do want an update
with my list of curses for Maan of course *smirk*
see ya got english h.w to do!


I am fine with 145 tošŸ˜†I might might update tonight
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Posted: 13 years ago
maaneet came to know the truth...

hope maan also comes to know soon...


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