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Posted: 13 years ago
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BqOnkNpJvA[/YOUTUBE]

AK Excerpt *Ijazat*

This one was random. The title and the song has nothing to do with the whole thing :| but I was out of ideas :/. I know I sound crazy :S It's bad...so please go ahead at your own risk(like I always say :| ) It's an excerpt so it is supposed to be short! (incase you guys were planning to pour over with those 'it's too short' comments! ;) )

I looked deeply into those frightened eyes. She never uttered a word, but those eyes never failed to express her inner feelings. They always spoke volumes. A glance at them would be just enough for me to know what was going inside her.

Shyam had done this to her. Only because Khushi kept silent, he kept doing whatever he liked. My absence caused her this pain. Shyam only needed an opportunity to inflict a scar on Khushi's mind that would never be erased. She breathed heavily and wept.

I couldn't believe I could let this happen. Shyam finally got that chance that he awaited. I hated myself for not understanding his ulterior motives behind his sudden changed behaviour.

He tried forcing Khushi, which left her devastated. I know she'd never say a word to me, but her terror and bruises were speaking the incident to me. Her unheard cries were only heard by me. It hurt me, deep inside. Her tears were expressing grief, which penetrated my heart.

I took Khushi into a tight embrace, trying to calm her restless heart. I know it was of no use trying to console her, but at this point she needed my utmost care and support. Taking her out of this crucial phase would be no easy job but I would have to do it. Khushi was shivering with fear and I wrapped her into my arms.

I had had enough. I had given Shyam enough opportunities to turn over a new leaf. This was it.

He had no right to come near my wife, and it was high time I made him realize that.

Link to blog - Ijazat
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great...plz do continuee yaarrr tht alothough i have already read alot on this topic but this one was zara hat ke...the way u expressed it was wonderfull...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww! twixy wonderful writing yar! luved them! the way u expressed it! beautiful! =D thnx a ton for d pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome, Twixy! But is there going to be a continuation?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*comes with a ruler in hand* 😈
It was damn beautiful par nalayak 🤬 isko continue karna nahi to anjaam will be bad.. very bad 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very good one .pls continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -RAiNA-

brilliant one twixy...

do continue



Thanks Rai di
But where r you these days?
Don't see u much on the CC
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you better continue this 🤣 too good!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Murphy369-

you better continue this 🤣 too good!



If my mind gets more ideas, I will😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much!😳

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