Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 4 pt 55 pg117 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Awww superb update Mishty
Loved it so much
both are in Pain :(
i hope evrything will be fine btw Maaneet soon
waiting for next...cont.soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
ooommmggg
itna pain kyu de re ho maaneet ko
plzzz kuch karo na inke lie

i cant see maan lyk dis he is prfct as his angry luks
nt lyk dis
plzz do sumthin yaar
n uttara
hm she is also rt bt idiot puri baat to jaan le na
plzz kuch kari inn dono k lie dat too soon plzzz

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome...uttara i knw u r right bt dont do dis to him...geet and maan needs each other...pls let dem talk...

i knw geet wont accept him bt still she will b happy dat he loves her...pls let her b happy for once...

suziel u r a darling...

dadi pls help
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I don't understand one thing Mishty...

why others are deciding what is good for Geet and what not...
why don't Uttara let Maan talk to Geet himself and then let her decide what she wants...

what is the meaning of chance...either u love someone or not...there is nothing like middle way

is it some railway reservation...that one person reservation got cancelled and next in line gets that seat...this is the matter of heart...

I agree Maan has given pain to Geet but that is unintentional...he went to England to fulfill his father's dream...that time he don't know that his father is planning something else...it was not his fault that Brij and his parents killed Geet's parents and then Brij tried to rape her...why everybody trying to make him feel guilty for no fault of his...

The question is that if Geet still loves him or not...if yes then she should not marry Sameer...and when Maan clears everything that he is not in love with Suzeil and he now realizes his love towards Geet then it is just Geet's decision whether to accept or not...it is nothing to do with Uttara...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update

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Part 49



"but u dnt deserve her..." snapped uttara frustarted at d odd situation...

now he realised it..dat he loves geet..or does he even realise or not..he is saying he loves geet..and vil land up calling her BEST FRND..d very nest moment..no maan..u cnt let u hurt geet anymore..im sorry for being rude..plzz dnt do dis to geet..u r late maan..plzz...aftr so much pain..finally she hav decided to give 1 chance to sameer..and u want to ruin it as well...no maan plz...

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"but u dnt deserve her..."

dat rang in maan's ears like sum1 poured hot lava into his ears..his heart cried in fear of dying without his geet...uttara is right..he doesn't deserve his geet..he left her to die here..he didn't care of her security..he never cared of her dreams..he let his love feel ashame..he find another girl..when he could never see geet wid sum1 else...did geet also had felt d same pain as im feeling now watching her wid sameer...did i hav also hurt her upto dis extent..like d pain im feeling now..how she beared it all alone...how she fought wid dat cruel family all alone..her studies..her life..her innocence..how she managed it all alone..he never cared about anything...

his heart shuddered in fear...

he is not worth of getting his love..he dnt deserve his geet..she is an angel..where he is a heartless human...or say inhuman..he betrayed his love to geet..he looked at another girl dan geet..how could he...

n now he is showing his right on geet..when geet is liking sameer..how more selfish he could be...

is he human or inhuman..to think geet is his...

no she was..

i lost her...

i lost my every right on her..

i lost GEET..

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yash snapped from his sit n stood at d window frustarted...

grhh..maan ruined it all..why d hell maan had to do sumthing dat suzeil didn't like..dere must be sumthing..suzeil seemed broken..if leo (suzeil's father) vil cum to know about dis..he vil definitely not be happy...god..maan was has u gone n done..i shouldn't hav let maan go alone...and dat gal in india...wat was her name...geet..she must hav ruined it ...why d hell maan has to keep any contact to dat low class gal...why maa (savitri devi) gave in to dat's girl...dnt know..who d hell is she exactly..wats her motive tordws maan n maa...i hav to do sumthing b4 dat gal again ruins my family...

he fished his cell out n called instantly...

"hello dev..."

dev looked at d cell annoyed n replied, "yes dad...wats d sudden call..i was in sumthng important.." while kissing d cheek of d gal who was accompaning him..

yash stated, "u r going to INDIA.."

WATT

flabbergasted, dev asked, "u got to be kidding me dad...how many shots u had ??.."

yash snapped angrily, "dev be in ur limits and listen to wat i say..u r going to india soon as possible...nothing is right dere...sum problem has occured between maan n suzeil...u need to fix it.."

dev rolled his eyes, "dad..i hav told u dnt send bro back to india..u didn't listen to me.."

yash sighed, "i should hav listened to u..nwz..u book d tickets and fix everything dere..i want matters in hand at any cost.."

wid dat yash cut d call..and dev took d gals lips into his for d enjoyable kiss...

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"do u even know..wat hav she gone through..."

maan cleared d lump of pain from his throat n mumbled, "no u r right..i dnt deserve her..."

"u dnt know anything maan..u know nothing.." uttara just wanted to let out all frustration on him so dat she could tell him just how much geet needed him..and sumwhere still need him..but he is too late...sameer has sumwhere taken his place...

maan collected his dead bosy n stood up, "i dnt deserve geet.."

uttara cried in frustration, "she needed u so much..she needed u every damn second..but u didn't even care to call her once...cuming back was for damn impossible..."

maan cried in guilt n pain, "i dnt deserve her.."

uttara held d railing of d bed to control her painfull heart, "she cried for u..she died for u..but u never came back..."

maan's heart was dying each passing second...d pain seemed damn unbearable...how could he..

"jo brij ne geet ke sath...(uttara couldn't even utter d sentense..) hospital me yski lifeless body dekh kar hum dar gaye the..dat we vil loose geet forever..."

maan shuddered wid d thought, "he didn't even of all dis..he was so damn busy in his life..he didn't even know his geetu was in hospital..fighting for her life.."

d fear of breaking down consumed his entire being..

"geet ne apni padhay tak puri nahi ki...malini chachi ne usse jaan se.." uttara's eyes widened in fear once again remembering dat dreaded past..

maan's beat caught in his throat as 1 more fear passed through his heart...

dey tried to...

NO...

dey tried to kill my geet...

he felt so ashamed of calling geet his...he indeed knew nothing...just nothing...

wat might hav geet gone through..how she managed dis all by herself...

why he was not dere for her...

n now he wants claim geet as his...

wat right he has on her... just no right...he should not mean anything to her..

he dnt deserve it...

he should rather burn in dis hell ...

he deserve dis punishment...

uttara who was still looking away from maan..finally cried out...

"tumhe to ye bhi nahi pata..dat SHE LOVED U.."

cried uttara n turned to look at his wid accusing eyes...

dere was no sign of maan...

sighing..she break on her knees and cried her heart out for her dear frnd...her geet didn't deserve any pain...but all she got was pain n just pain..

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it was almost midnight...

when geet walked into her room..she had no idea wat just happened to her..she had made up her mind to bear dis all wid full strength..geet handa never falls weak...but d geet within her..dat small geet still got affect by her maan..why...just why di heart still feel d pain watching maan n suzeil together..dey love each other..and dey deserve each other..

den why dis damn pain is hell bent on weakening me... why cnt i just turn my heart into heartless stone..damn dis heart..cursed geet her heart n walked into her room..

it was dark like alwz..she loved dark...she kind of felt irritation wid d light now-a-days...she felt familiar wid d darkness dat hides all d pain within...

sighing..she walked near bed n switched on d lamp...

only to find maan sleeping on her bed..hugging her pillow...

she alwz knew..dis habit of maan when he wud want her..he wud simply sleep on her bed..hugging her pillow...but she was confused today..why he needed her 2day..when all was fine between suzeil and him..

she sat beside him and put d duvet over him...

"geet.." maan kind of mumbled or cried in his sleep...like he felt her touch...

stratled wid his broken voice, geet instantly carrased his hairs soothing aftr moving closer...

maan turned restlessly..feeling her touch and held her hand tight...

dis was so unusual behaviour of maan..she couldn't comprehend to...

"maan.." called geet gently...

instead, maan pulled her hand in a jerk and geet landed right on him wid sudden pull...

she instantly tried to get up but maan's string arms snaked around her waist and she couldn't even move..

her touch made maan's heart feel d peace..he was searching madly..her touch just calmed his bleeding heart and he pulled her closer..never wanting to let go of her..

he didn't even know..if it was dream or reality..all he knew was he felt his geet...and no way he could leave her...

he hold was so damn tight dat it felt impossible for geet to move away untill he wakes up..

"maan..utho maan.." tried geet calling him once again...

1st d tight hold..2nd she was almost layghing on him..and 3rd d realization dat she was so close to her maan..just inches away..she couldn't ignore d heart which had started to beat fastly wid deir proximity...

heart heart joyyed in happines...while her tears beamed in tears...why dis heart still craved for his single touch...she still could never forget dat 1 week of her love..d day she had realised her love for her maan..how beautifull dat week was...and life changed so drasticaly aftr dat 1 week...just 1 week..dats all she lived her love life...

maan's hold tightened and geet came back to her senses...what is she doing..how can she do dis to suzeil...no no..geet..u need to control urself...its not for u..its not ur love..let him go geet...let him live his life...accept d fact dat he was never urs..u r geet handa..and u dnt need any1..she tried to wake up her strong self between..but still couldn't cum out d freaking emotions...

"maan...get up maan.." she called louded dis time...

maan just stirred her in his embrace and turned to 1 side..taking her underneath him..she was just like a small feathed underneath him..it was impossible to stop him wid his strong toned body...

but her eyes widened in shock as she felt maan taking her under his toned body...

"geet...geet.." cried maan again in sleep wid restlessness...

his fingers dipped into her waist..while his nails scratched her delicate waist..hurting her...

"ahh.." moaned geet in pain as his nails marked over her skin and d blood oozed out...

her maon suddenly silenced as she felt tear falling on her neck and realised he was crying...

geet felt her heart crying in pain...what happened to him..why is he crying..why is he in so much pain...why is he so much restless...her maan...her maan dnt deserve any pain...he deserves happines..but why is he crying...i hope all is fine between him n suzeil.i heard dem confessing..den why...

she tried to cup his face but he just kept shutterng in restlessness..like he was experiencing sum nightmare...

she cupped his neck..digging her fingers into his scalp, "maan..utho maan...kya huva.."

maan rolled onto her continuously...trying to cum out of his mightmare..but d fear of loosing geet forever..just killed him million times...

he dipped his face into her neck and cried..biting her harshly..

"geet meri hai.."

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precap :

"i love u maan.."

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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