Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 4 pt 55 pg117 - Page 16

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Amazingg updatee yaar..
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i think that maan's parents and geet's relative r together and they r the reason that both have separated
and this DEV is no one else he is VED whom sam has mentioned

i might be wrong but let's see what u have planned for us
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osum update dear i m dam sad for this setuation...
o god help maaneet... uttara ne yaki dila hi diya geet maan ko deserv nai karati... bas ab maan aapani dil ki sune na ki kisi ki...
maans dad is sooo selfish... for his profit he use maan & suzeil... anfd he hat geet may be...and dev.. he is also like his dad...
oo so hart brocken they r both lov each other... but still caring to each other... maan geets scian was best... he said he dont deserv still on her bed.. hugong her

geet ab to samaz ja he lovs i u not suzeil... read his cry...
exciting precap... i hope it will too
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                 Part 50



maan dipped his face into geet's neck and cried..biting her harshly..

"geet meri hai.."

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"maan.." geet moaned his name loudly bringing maan to his senses...

maan snapped open his eyes and pulled out to look at her face...

"geet.." his eyes lit up in sudden contentment having geet close to him..god he himself dnt know how much he was dying for her single look..wat went through him when he was not able to search her..see her..and den he drank..he drank n drank till he felt out of senses..but still his heart felt as dry as b4..waiting for his geet..

n now having her right into his arms..was nothing less dan magic...

tears rolled down from his eys and fell on her cheeks..

"tum mujhse gussa ho na "

geet's heart cried in pain wid dose tears...why was he in so much pain..how on d earth can she ever be angry wid him...
d thought dat she was in his arms was long forgotten under dose tears...her maan is crying and dats all mattered for dat moment...

cupping his face, she wiped his tears wid thumb, "nahi maan..me tumse gusaa nahi hun..chup ho jao.."

"no.." he cried like a small chld.., "i hurt u so much...im bad.."

tears rolled down from geet's eyes..she snaked his face possessively into her palms, "no..my maan is not bad..my maan is d bestest..right.."

maan rested his face on her chin as d tears rolled out from her chin to her throat, "no..ur maan is very bad...very very very very ..bad..."

"shh.." geet whispered not able to bear his pain..his tears..., "aise nahi kehte..my maan is not bad..dnt u dare call my maan bad.."

"plzz dnt leave me..plzz.." maan's broken voice and his endless tears just worsened d situation all d more...

geet thought he is talking about suzeil...

"geet..tum meri hona..haan.." maan couldn't hold back his fears..d fear of loosing geet forever just killed him each passing second..he wanted her to ensure him dat she vil never ever leave him...

pulling closer, geet brushed her lips wid his, "geet sirf maan ki hai...sirf apne maan ki.."

she didn't care of dere proximity..she didn't care if she had d right to touch his lips or not..at dat moment..maan was not fine..and all she cared for..

as she back away, maan again pulled her closer and forced his lips on hers...

geet couldn't deny him...she never learned to...n specially not when he was in so much pain...she let him force his lips on hers...no protest from her just made maan confident all d more and unknown to himself...he started kissing her...

their lips met sending shivers down to their entire existance..

his hands snapped away her dupatta and went around her waist. She parted her lips as he tucked her closer.his lips rubbed overs hers continuously trying to feel dem all d way possible...he had no idea why he felt sudden urge..sudden need to hav her closer..to touch her..to feel her..but all he needed was to hear her heart beating against his.

his tongue rolled over lips..making dem moist while his teeth sunk into her skin just making her insane..till now she gave no protest but he wanted her to feel him d same way he was doing..he wanted her response..he wanted her to touch him..kiss him...assure him dat she is all his..n no1 on d earth can seperate dem from each other..not even she herself...

tears of happiness roll down from her eyes as d filthy touch of dat monster named brij was washing away from d warm n familiar touch of her maan..she couldn't express how much she needed it...

his tongue broke d barrier n moved in to meet her tongue..deir tongue tasted heavenly to each other..it was d touch of love..it was d touch of longingness..it was d touch of pain..it was d touch of medicine on deir bleeding heart..dey needed it more dan anything dey could ever ask for...

maan kissed her deeply till his tongue searched every hidden corner of her mouth..and he felt heaven as geet started to respond ...her hands crawled up to his neck and snaked him closer as she started to kiss him wid same passion she never knew she had...her need was maan...she denied it to even her heart..but how could she now deny dis fact dat her maan was kissing her...d thought completed her existance...

his teeth gently nip down on her lower lip..she groaned into his mouth and he release it instantly followed by his tongue dat sucked and licked away all traces of sharpness from his bite. He carrased the silky inner lining of her lower lip by his tongue and she felt she vil just go damn creazy...

dey pulled out aftr a long time when dey felt loss of breaths...but he couldn't part away from her...

"tum mujhse door nahi ja sakti..."

his hand dipped into her waist as he started to rub her waist over d dress irritated by d peice of cloth dat acted as a barrier...

rolling onto her...maan held her both hands tight in 1 place wanting to be dominant on her while his lips passed through every inch on her face..pecking everywhere...geet looked up in submission as his lips touched her right in d middle on her throat..upto her sanity..his teeth held skin into his teeth followed by his moist lips dat he rubbed desperately onto to it...

he moved from 1 side to another kissing n biting everywhere on her neck..her skin became red n alive under his touch..like it was just waiting for dat soothing touch on dose wounds...his tongue licked d skin behind her ears and she wriggled under him loosing all d self control..his kisses only became intense and her insanity started to wake..

geet moaned..groaned wid his each bite while his licking and sucking drove her insane..she kept wriggling continuously under him and dat gave enough space for his hands to snake her back passionate...

not able to control anymore..he snapped open d string of her kurti and she groaned desperately...

"i love u maan..."

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dat came as a hit nail for maan..

roaring he stood up on his kness in front up..geet gently opened her eyes staring at d greek god in front of her..

d confession just broke every hesitation..every discomfort..every unsure thought..just every barrier...

wildly bending down, he held onto d end of kurti right at her upper chest and ripped it apart in two peices wid all d force he had...

geet gasped wid his move but den closed her eyes back in submission..dere was no looking back aftr dis moment...she was his..all his..she had alwz been his though he could never be hers..but she was, is and vil alwz be his...

he threw her kurti away and fell back on her...giving a deep kiss right on d pulse on her nape..he made geet feel like he just kissed her heartbeat..her almost bare skin shivered under his waight..his hands moved passionately onto d bare skin of her back...as his teeth stucked onto her collar bone...

her bare skin created d havoc inside him and d passionate beast roared in delight..she was his..all his...no1 can deny dis moment...none can snatch his geet from him...he knew it aftr dis moment...



his lips moved from her collar bone to her shoulders..kissing her and tasting her all d way..he bite d strap frustratedly dat hide her skin from him.he hated every barrier between dem..groaning angrily, he bite her shoulder passionately making geet wince and she knew..how insane he gets when it cums to hers...

tears of contentment...tears of happiness..d feeling of completion...passed through her heart and she knew..only her maan could do dis magic to her...she didn't want to think of anything in d damn world at dis moment..for dis moment..it was just her and her maan..

knowing d reason of his frustration, her hands went to his shirt and started to unbotton dem..dat definitely calmed d passionate maan singh khurana..when his geet did wat he wanted..when his geet understood d reason of his frustrations..when his geet responded to him...

he stayed calm wid all his patience till she unbottoned his shirt and removed it away from him leaving him bare wid his toned body..

her hands went around his back snaked dem passionate..feeling his skin in her smooth fingers..and her nails dat she digged dem in...dat just broke his last bit of patience and he punced on her once again...kissing and biting right on her upper chest.on her heart...

his hands desperately rubbed her everywhere..moving from her waist to her curves..she held onto duver tightly as maan's fingers carrased her curve over d bra..

"maan.." she relished his name on her tongue as his lips slowly replaced his hands and he rubbed his lips on dat thin cloth...

his hands frustratedly rubbed on d hook of her bra and geet's beat caught into her heart...

dat fear..dat nervousness..dat anxity..dat happiness...dat hesitation..all d emotions started to emote all together as maan fought wid d hook and finally broke open it...

a sudden relaxation passed through her body and she felt naked all of sudden...her cheeks turned pink and she crushed herself into his arms..hugging him tight..b4 he could pull out her inner and vil see her bare...

it was maan..her maan..d thought just made her go red in blush..along wid d a tear of calling herself his geet..just his..

maan crushed her closer into his arms while his hands snaked her complete bare back...

his tears of having his geet..rolled down moistening her neck and she held him even closer...

"tum meri hona geetu.." maan shuttered crushing her damn closer...

geet's heart cried along wid him, "haa maanu..sirf tumhari..."

dat just gave maan's heart 1 more shock of happiness..his geet called him maanu aftr so long..aftr so many years..she called him maanu again..how could he not be happy..his geet alwz hav dis magic to vanish all his pain...she called him maanu..her maanu...

he rolled on d bed taking her along wid him..she rolled on top of him and again going underneath him as rolled back on her...she kept her eyes close as maan held on d strap n pulled away her bra...

"maan.." her breaths whispered in him name..more of a moan..and d fact ran through her spine dat she is half bare right under maan..

her hands automatically moved to switch off d lamp but maan held her hand n pinned it beside not letting her to do..

she was his..and she can not hide herself from him...

maan let his eyes slowly walk through every inch of her bare skin..d milky skin of her upper chest..her beautifull curves..her pink nipples..dat small valley in d mid..and dat beautifull lining going down to her belly button...

she was simply made to kill...

how on d earth can sumthing be so beautifull..co curvious...so seren..so pure...his lingering constant gaze just made her throat dry in desire...

she kept her eyes close and waited for him to devour her...

but proving her wrong he whispered...

"ankhen kholo geet..i want u to see me when i touch u..."

geet opened her eyes gently only to notice his eyes filled wid raw passion n desire oozing through dem..she felt like even his eyes could devour her...

maan stared right through her eyes as his fingers slowly carrsed her upper chest..making smooth patterns..geet couldn't bread g gaze..he had so much of desire in demm..dat geet felt lost under him...geet's heart shuttered as his fingers touch d hard nipple gently..carrasing it...den walking to another 1...his sudden gentlenesss just drove her creazy..she wanted him to be harsh n passionate d way he was a min ago...

he planted a kiss on her throat and started to move down...he bite everywhere he kissed..and he sucked everywhere he bite..

his kisses passed right through her valley but damn him..didn't even cum closer to her curves..she wriggled in passion underneath him till his kisses reached her tummy...her stomach went in as she felt his tongue rolling on to her belly button and moving in..how can his single touch drive her so creazy..he took d flesh of her tummy into his mouth and sucked onto to it like it was sumthing like ice-cream..she held her breaths till his tongue left her belly button and finally cuming back d same way..

he stared at her sensuous curves till his lips were dry again..bending down on it, he planted a smooth kiss at d climbing and started placing soundable and sensuous but dry kisses on her curves climbing up.and doing d same to another 1...she wanted his wet lips..his teeth..his tongue..but d damn maan singh khurana had his own plan...

"maan" geet moaned in desperation as she felt his dry lip touching her hard bud slightly...

"ohh god maan plzz.." how on d earth can she bear dis dry touch when her skin was dying for his saliva to drip down from her...

maan being maan..lets his dry lips carrased her hard buds from 1 side to another ..poking dem wid his nose..but not letting d moist touch it...god she wanted his wild touch so badly... 

"maan..." geet cried in despeartion and held his hairs harshly into her fist..forcing his lips on d hard nipple...d passionate beast inside maan groaned in delight at her need to want him and held her nipple straight into his teeth..without even bothering to make dem wet wid his saliva..directly bite hard on it followed by his teeths dat tried to pull d nipple hard...

"ahh..maan.." moaned geet in pain n pleasure as his teeth being so harsh on her soft 1...

he bite her nipple few times till her throat gave away screaming his name and his tongue finaly gave mercy to her swolen already swolen nipple..his tongue relished..licked..sucked each inch..each corner of her nipple and all d sideby skin ...making her feel heaven under his saliva dat bathed her nipples..rolling down from sides...

maan relish her nipple wid his own sweet time and finally moved to another to repeat it but geet'e heart felt on fire knowing he vil repeat d torture again...his dominance...his being aggressive n passionate..god..how can she ever deny him for anything..he was her maan..her 1st and last love..her life for dat matter..

geet wriggled her head from 1 side to another..pulling his hairs as harshly as possible..digging her nails ruthlessly into his chest and back while he continued to suck on her nipples as harshly and passionately as possible...d wetness of saliva on d nipples and d sharpness of teeth just drove d buds even more harder as d urge of wanting each other started to kill dem both within...

her nipples..became reddish and damn swolen under his raw touch...d mixture of pain n pleasure...god..it was sumthing beyond insanity...d cool bridze touch d swolen nipple just made her all d more breathless..

maan sucked on her cruves again n again but couldn't hav enough of it...dey tasted so amazing...nothing tasted so good to him till on d earth...but d sweetness of his geet just gave him d real taste of love...

moving down kissing his way to her tummy..he let his hand climb on her curves..and his fingers pinched d already swolen..wet and hard nipples..making her cry in pleasure...d real beast he was..didn't let her breath normally even for a second..as he cupped her cruves into his palm and kneaded dem in every sensuous way possible...his fingers rubbed d swolen and wet nipples again n again trying to wake d beast inside her..his palm became intense and passionate at times on her soft curves..his thumb rolled d buds in round shape and geet was on d verge of loosing all her huminity wid her moans and heavy breaths dat filled d room...

standing on his knees..maan once again climbed over her to take d lips back into his..she kissed him harshly dis time like wanting to take all d revenge..while her soft chest was once again crushed under his toned chest..d hard buds poked into his chest and he rested all his waight on her..grinding her under him...

rubbing his hands down her arms..his hands reached her tummy and he snapped open d string of her salwar...

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"maan.." she whimpered in desperation and forcedfully rolled on to him...surprised, he was about to roll back..when she smashed her lips ont his..kissing b biting him harshly as possible...her hands rubbed onto his chest desperately..wantting to feel him all d wild way possible..leaving his tempting lips, she moved down kissing her way till she reached his nipple and bite hard on it...

"geet.." maan groaned in pain n pleasure and harshly took a grip of her haisr..pulling him closer to his face...

her eyes filled wid love and incredible love just made feel all d happy n guiltless once again and he felt her maan..purely her maan wid no pain n no hurt...how does she had dis magic to make him feel so special...how stupid he had been all d while to not understand his love for her..how could he even think of another girl...geet..geetu...i vil never let u hurt again..i promise...and..

"ouchh..geet"  maan snapped out of his thoughts when his other nipple was also taken into her sharp teeth and he knew..she bite him again..taking d revenge...

graoning at her dominance..he forced hmself on her till she was underneath him wid her both hands pinned on either sides and her body dat was insanely wriggling...

"shh.." whispsred maan..rubbing his lips gently on hers..calming d passionate geet handa...n moved down to took her swolen red nipple once again into his teeth...

"ahh maan.." geet whimped closing heres eyes as maan gave her d taste of bite again..taking his revenge..proving exatcly who is in command...

cuming back to her face..maan planted a loving kiss on her forehead..

" i love u "

geet's every wound felt cured suddenly as d most wanted word finally registered her ears and her heart..

she started at him motionless as his hands went to her salwar and pulled it down..leaving her wid only barrier..

"tum sirf meri ho.."

geet's lost senses gave back wid sudden happines...sudden delight..udden burst of love..and she felt happy contended..soft..innocent n pure once again..lke she was in deir chldhood..

smiling in tears...she pulled him even closer on her..and maan landed all his weight on her almost bare body..she shivered under his manly touch...he rubbed himself on her and she felt his hardness driving her feminity so damn creazy...

"plz maan.." she cried in happiness tears and desperation...

maan knew wat she meant by plzz..she wanted him as much as he wanted her...how much deir wounded hearts needed each other's love..how much dey were longing for dis togetherness...simply how dead dey lives were when being away from each other..wat d mere existance of each other meant to dem..how much time dey wasted by not understanding deir love...how life could hav been so beautifull if dey might had understood deir love a lit b4...

but nothing can be changed now..d damage is done..and ey hav payed enough for damage...enough was enough now..no other pain vil touch dem when dey r together..he vil not let dat happen...she was his..he was hers..

bending down, he took her lips into his for a smooth and caring kiss while his hands went to his pants and pulled it out..geet's hands crawled to his chest and she pulled him back on top of her wanting to get crushed under his weight...

mana loosened all his weight on her and her soft body was literally crushed underneath his hard 1..

he let his hardness touch her softness wanting to give her d feel of wat he was feeling at dis moment..geet couldn't stop herself from feeling his manly body giving her pleasure...

his hands walked on to her waist..moving down ..making patterns on her smooth skin till he reached her thighs...lost in d passion, maan possessively held her thigh and pulled his to snake his bare wasit...breathing and moaning his name, geet just went along...

goosebumps passed through her stomach when his hands wandered on to her lower waist..sumhow wanting to get rid of dat last bit of barrier...he let his fingers move between her legs and squized her feminity..

"maan.." geet almso cried in intensity of d moment...but maan wiped out her moan into his mouth...

dey kissed on to each other while maan's hands went creazy over her..rubbing her delicate skin despretaly and maan almost ripped her d last barried not able to bear anymore...

geet gasped wid her sudden nakedness and hide herself underneath him...

"r u alright.." mumbled maan against her lips and geet smiled wid her closed eyes in response...

maan just wanted her right dere n den...

pulling away his own boxer, maan adjusted himself on her feminity...

"look at me geet.." geet opened her droopy eyes and stared at him...

d moment deir eyes met..maan entered her slowly at first letting her adjust to him and then thrust in again with force.

" MAAN " screamed geet, as he touched her soul for d very 1st time...

bending on her, maan carrsed his lips wid hers in soothing maneer and thrust her again...

geet closed her eyes in pain n pleasure while her nails periced his shoulders...

soon d pain n screamed were converted into pleasures n moans as maan started to move gradually into her...

she felt alive..she felt complete...

he felt alive..he felt complete...

his maan touched her...

he touched his geet...

she was his now forever n ever...

his geet was his now..forever n ever..

tears of happiness n delight rolled down down from her eyes as she stared into his wid all d love she had..finally she was his..her maan's ..d thought gave her all d happiness she ever longed for...all d pain..all d hurt seemed to vansih in his wramth...she felt her oldself once again..d old geet dat was only maan's...she vil never need anything else ever in her life aftr dis moment..her maan filled d dis last lack in her...she was complete now...his warmth gave her d strength to fight against any possible damn thing...she could thnk her maan all her life for giving dis moment to her..for making her his forever..she vil lead her entire life in dis moment..thnqq maan..thnqq so much..her heart cried in delight..thnq so much for completing me..i vil never need anything now..just nothing..

maan saw d tears rolling from her eyes and licked dem wid his tongue..hers tears were precious dan pearl..how would he let dem go waste like dis.he would rather drink dem...his geet was his now..no1 vil ever be able to seperate dem...his geet submitted herself to him without any question..he hurted her so much..but she never once protested him for anything..he loved her without his confession..but still she never demanded anything and just submitted herself to him wid all her love..how could he ever doubt dat she dnt love him..she does..her every touch made him realise dat he loved her..his heart felt bliss in d revealtion dat his geet loves him ..yes she does..otherwise she would hav never let him touch her dis way..

d fact dat she loved him..drove him all d more and he started t moe inside her passionately..aggresively...her moans only increased while he just couldn't stop himself from being aggressive on her...

he was not at all gentle..but she couldn't stop him knowing dat vil anger him more..his every string thrust made her realise how much he craved for her..how much he needed her..wid each thrust he went deep n deep inside till deir bodies felt almsot joined into each other...

his hand went under her thigh and spread her more for him while his other hand mercilessly squized her curve..cruhsing his lips on it to suck dem passionate...his passionate love make just made her forget d entire world...while her moaning his name didn't seem to end..

deir love making became intense and damn pasisonate wid every passing moment...while both cried out in pleasure as dey hit deir climax...

" i love u geet " 

mumbled maan in his high breaths...n geet could only hear his raced heart beats..

geet layed on bed wid d incredible feeling dat just blew her away while maan collapsed on her trying to catch his breath ..still lost in d magical feeling...

dey just made love..d mere thought was enough to thril deir hearts...dey touched each other..loved each other..d closeness..d proximity..d taste..d warmth..dey souls touched each other..and nothing else seemed to matter other dan dat incredible feeling...

none had clue when dey drifted into a deep sleep...

d most peacefull sleep of deir life wid deir bodies crushed into each others..breaths mixed into other..

and heart glued into each other.. !!

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 12 years ago
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Yupppieee me seconddd
OMG OMG OMG
Mishty is that you who wrote this
Haahhh itss soo sexy and breathtaking yaar
loved it
The Love making was just AHHH   
it still capable to increase my heartbeats
Finally they are one

He is hers and she is all his

Loved it alot

and what can I say
hmmm please dont make maan cry
Nowww
Enough of his Laments 

Update next part soon and thanks for PM





Edited by Angelic_analyst - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
One of the best update ...
Much awiated n much needed for Mann n Geet...
Wonderful ...
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!that was too hot...
ALAS!they confessed..
I hope geet wont back off from her love for suzeil..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum , superb , fantastic update dear...
This is d bestest update of dis ff...
I haven't any word 2 express...
   
 

   it sooo much
   &          2 u sweets...
 


Edited by Sailor_N - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hats off mishiii.. ❤️ U blew me away.. It ws beyond words.. Super duper update.. Wat a DHAMAKA 50th update! Beleive me it ws hot yet it ws pure.. Ur words were perfect.. ❤️ Loved it to the bits.. God bless u!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update👏
loved it...