Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 4 pt 55 pg117

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

speechless update dear
love it to the core
thanx mishu

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Oh...that was really painful..
again maan left without noeing the full truth..
Nw dev?
OMG!wat s his father and dev trying to do?

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Nivedita

@Sailor_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Superb update dear...
Maaneet r awesum...
Kya maan apna love confess karega geet k samne...

Edited by Sailor_N - 13 years ago

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

awesome update mish..
loved it so much..

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

dont give pain to either of dem...pls

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Very very emotioanl part...

Both are too much hurt...

both are too much in love with each other...

Only left is to confess their love..

The it will be alright

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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Nice update again! I know there must be some twist cooking in ur mind but before any twist I wud like to say that plz made Maan-Geet confess their feelings & then there must be some nice,lovely & light hearted moments in the story coz so far the story has mostly sadness engulfed all around.Now for some upcoming updates a little bit of happiness ka dose toh banta hai boss. :-)

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

hey angel what a painful update dear

The realisation was great by maan

..he didn't care of her security..he never cared of her dreams..he let his love feel ashame..he find another girl..when he could never see geet wid sum1 else

the way u explain his guity was osum

did geet also had felt d same pain as im feeling now watching her wid sameer...did i hav also hurt her upto dis extent..like d pain im feeling now..how she beared it all alone...how she fought wid dat cruel family all alone..her studies..her life..her innocence..how she managed it all alone..he never cared about anything...

i hate maan father at that extent he thought geet as low class gal

dev bikul apne baap pe gaya one more waste guy who had ready to ruin maaneet life before set

maan ka reapeatedly i didnt deserve her kehna ha heart breaking

the most awaited truth out

"tumhe to ye bhi nahi pata..dat SHE LOVED U.."

jo maan ne firse sunne me miss kia

excellent memory from past i mean maan sleep on geet bed

only to find maan sleeping on her bed..hugging her pillow...

she alwz knew..dis habit of maan when he wud want her..he wud simply sleep on her bed..hugging her pillow...but she was confused today..why he needed her 2day..when all was fine between suzeil and him..

its really difficult to geet

1st d tight hold..2nd she was almost layghing on him..and 3rd d realization dat she was so close to her maan..just inches away..she couldn't ignore d heart which had started to beat fastly wid deir proximity...

i cant see geet in pain like this one week she is happy after realisation of love after all pain

...she still could never forget dat 1 week of her love..d day she had realised her love for her maan..how beautifull dat week was...and life changed so drasticaly aftr dat 1 week...just 1 week..dats all she lived her love life...

so maan heart open out means atleast geet could understand that maan also feels same thing for her

he dipped his face into her neck and cried..biting her harshly..

Hope next super confession ho taki dev aake sab barbaad karne se pehle

precap :

"i love u maan.."

"geet meri hai.."