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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy rashmi ... u r back tat really nice...great prolouge ...
continue soon dear...
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interesting concept...

i loved it...

continue soon plz...

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Character Sketch





Maan Singh Khurana




(AGE-25) M.D of one of the world strongest and powerful MNC Khurana Construction.He is proud,hansome,egoistic and can do anything which brings profit to the company.His persona captures the heart and mind of every single soul.He does not value any relationship and thinks that they make people fragile.On the personal front,he is a womaniser and has many 'time-pass-affairs'


Geet Handa



Age-17 A college going bubbly girl.MSK is her role model in terms of business and desires to meet him some day.She has not been a lucky child from birth.But one incident brings
a 360 degree change in her life...and she will never be the same before.....



Angel

A fairy from Celurean city far away from Earth in Palestine Kingdom.She has some great magical powers.She cannot understand the feeling of love because of which she can't reach her last stage of evolution.Her one wish
changes her life....



Raj Kapoor-

Maan's best friend and he helps him in business.



Miss Stella-

The Principal of 'Magicx' School where Angel is a student. She is very strict and disciplined but loves her students very much


Prince Sky-
Angel's secret Admirer & the ruler of Palestine Kingdom

Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 13 years ago
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~Kuch Iss Tarah~




Chapter-1






THE early morning sun rays made it's way inside her room.She yawned and stretched sleepily.After a whole night of dedicated writing,she had finally finished her presentation.She kept her pen down is satisfaction.She again gave a small yawn and wisphered,"i hope this does the work".It was Sunday morning,so she could sleep the entire day,even her uncle and aunt won't wake her up...


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AT Saxena Residence--

"Toh hum yeh rishta pakka samjhe?" asked Mr Saxena.

"Haan Bhai saab" said dadima,"ab jab Maan aur Priya ne ek dusre ko pasand kar hi liya hai,toh hume roke mein der nahi karni chahiye"

Saying this she looked at Priya who was blushing.

"Thik hai,toh hum panditji se baat karke aapko khabar karte hai" added Mrs Saxena

Both the families exchanged pleasures n it was time for Dadi and Raj to take leave.


Khurana Mansion--

Dadi was very happy that finally Maan had decided to settle in life.She wanted him to accompany her to Saxena House today but Maan had given an excuse of some pending work and had gone to office even on Sunday.

"Dadi" said Raj,"but you know it's a samjhauta"

"Raj,Maan will definitely change after marriage.Priya will make him less workoholic..."

"Yeah...i hope so" he said doubtfully, "Anyways,i better go to office and chexk out what he is doing."

"Thik hai beta.Tell him to be back at lunch time"


Khurana Constructions---


Maan was busy in the internet,reading mails n replying them when there was a knock on the door.Without looking up, he said ,"Come in Raj"

Raj came inside,"Wow man! you knew it was I!"

"Yeah...employees don't get salaries to work on sunday so..."

"Guess what.Tumhara rishta pakka ho gaya."

Maan seemed disinterested. "Good job!" he said dryly.

"Excuse me Maan!this news was supposed to be given by you.it's your marriage,not mine! you should have gone to the Saxenas today"

"I met Priya a week ago,there was no need for me to go."

"But--"

"Listen Raj,you clearly know why i agreed to this marriage.Saxenas & Khurana alliance will prove beneficial to our company in terms of profit and anyways Dadi is happy,so why not?"

"and Priya??"

"She will get all the luxuries which a Khurana bahu has got and what else is needed."

"and love and attention??"

Maan did not answer.He was studying the blueprint of his next venture.Raj sighed.he knew he wouldn't get an answer to that.He prepared to go.But just then Maan stopped him.

"Raj,we have a meeting tomorrow.Hope you remember?"

"Haan Haan...tum mujhe bhulne doge kya?"

"aur ek aur baat...you don't have to worry,i myself will tell you the date of my engagement!"

Raj did not answer.He went from there while Maan rested in his chair with a shrewd smile.

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IT was a busy as well as an eager day in college on Monday.After all it was the project submission day.The college campus was full of giggles and laughter.A girl sat on a bench giving a last look at her presentation.She was not that serious about the projects but this one was very very important for her given the reason.Just then a girl called out to her,

"Oye! you are still here?class nahi chalna hai kya?"

She got up.On her way she heard many of her classmates talking 'i really hope mine get selected', 'i can't believe he is coming to our college' ,'T.V par toh bohot dekha hai,i want to see him in real' ,'Kahin mein usse dekhkar faint na ho jaaon' ,'Aree,pehle selection toh hone de,then see his dreams' were some remarks which were common.


She sat in her bench and sighed.Few weeks ago,during the morning assembly the principal had announced of a seminar which would be attended by all the IIM students.The venue was their college.The students hearing her were disinterested, it's for those IIM's,what they got to do in that,everyone thought.But the next words spoken by her pricked every ear."The Chief Guest will be none other than Maan Singh Khurana".There was dead silence.Did she actually mention MSK?. Everyone waited with eager ears for her to continue.Having gained all the attention,the principal further said that those students who are interested to attend the seminar have to give an excellent presentation on 'Management' and the students who are selected will have an audience with MSK...

So,there she was again revising her notes.Just then the teacher called out to her

"Miss Geet Handa"

"Yes Mam" she replied


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i will continue on the basis of response😊.Please do comment as it motivates the writers.Criticisms are welcome😉



Edited by lovelygeet24x7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved it..continue soon pls..
the angel concept was quite confusing..i guess u ll reveal it in later parts :)
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nyc update bt d angl's part is bit cnfusing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one...waiting for the story to unfold
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi!! i just loved the begining... magar mere LIKE button work nahi kar raha hain... hope you understand!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..
maan s so money minded..
But angel seems to b interesting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsm part but maan gtng engaged... hope maaneet meets soon

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