Virman OS: You're the color of my life

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BadtameezDil.

@BadtameezDil.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

loved it dearly...

pl do add me,i have also read and it is also awsem

please continu writing and pl add and pm it to me

luved it

regards

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: x.Maaneet4eva.x
WOW!!! If i should be honest then my request would be for u to change this from OS to FF!!! PLEASE write more for this!!! Its so great year!!! I simply loved it...PLEASE!!!

I loved Maanvi's doubt part a lot and the difference feelings between VirMan...It was so cute and lovely...

Ha ha ha in ur face Maya! LOL...Loved how u described Virat's feeling when he saw Maanvi in white and the effect of Virat's closeness has on Maanvi...

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!! IT should be a OS but a FF, if not at least SS! PLEASE.x.

Thank you so much dearie...😊 Will try to continue but no promises, really dunno hw to continue. Btw will another Holi theme post make u happy😉

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1
lovely rev i hope some thing like this would happen!!!!! cointinue sooon

Thank you so much dearie😊

Originally posted by: booksfreak07
Awww... It's adorable. Loved the contrast between maya and manvi
😊

Thank you so much, Btw when are you writing again😉

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: teri-diwani
Loveddd ittt... ❤️ Amazinggg... Everyyy wordd.. every detaill... Loved the wayy yuh made the holi festival come alivee 🤗 :)) Hmmm lovedd ittt.. Huskyyy viraaattt ☺️ Hayeee :p :p Nowww EAGERLYYY waitinggg forr part 2... Huuurrryyy :p PM mee when yuh finish pleasee :) Ive sent yuh a buddy requestt :)) Mwahxxx 👏

Thank you so much for such lovely comments. Can't think of how to continue as part 2 at the moment yaar. Btw thanks for the buddy request.

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: missingremix
Hey dear..i love this OS completely..d title is so apt..even loved d last line..Virat waiting for Manvi 2 come n color his life!!
D contrast u drew between maya n manvi was awesome n so true..enjoyed reading this d whole shot..manvi thinking that vadhera house holi wil b as flavorless or rather colorless as their diwali..she is so cute..n virat loves take her case as always..the CVs really need 2 read ur SS/OSs..this how d story shud progress..this is called true creativity..taking d characters..bringing them to life by weaving them in2 a beautiful story!! U do it brilliantly..i really need loads of OSs n SSs/udates from ur side..the show seems 2 b going down d drain these days (atleast 4 me, no offence) so u hv 2 b my saviour!!😃

Ps: I read this Os a couple of days back bt was busy n cudnt post a reply..hv reread it atleast 3 more times since then..😛..coz i love it!!

Aww, thank you so much dearie. Reading your comment really made my day gal... I hope we get a better holi scene with VirMan next year maybe. 😃

Originally posted by: arti159
wow..dat was amazing,,,thnks a lot 4 da pm...

Thank you so much😃

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: shivusharma
loved it dearly...

pl do add me,i have also read and it is also awsem

please continu writing and pl add and pm it to me

luved it

regards

Thank you so much gal. I have already send you a buddy req, will be easier to PM you whenever I write 😊