MG-ss-Maan's love-#completed# - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
I read all parts in one go
awesome ss dear
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee she is geet ohh balle balle ,i m sooo happyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr888 ...yep it was geet ...updt sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ufff finally utoldt the truth
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
poor maan ...
coldnt even enjoy his wedding...
n geet she s such a dramabaaz n nautanki...
ufff...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!👏
awesome ss dear...😛
loved it...😳
thanks for this awesome ss...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab update yaar
me blushing when the truth got out gosh u made me smile yaar with this update love u honey

yaar no awesome sr and lit bit long also k
this was short
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
so we were right.. geet was playing with maan. loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n nice update dear...

nw d bride has been unveiled...MSK budhhu ban gaya...its really amazing...

yyyiiipppeee...i guessed right...

i really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi frnds,

thanks a lot for loving this ss and thanks for ur comments...i read every comment but cant reply u sorry...i dint give any pm's for this ff neither i updated my other ff's sorry again...yssr kya karon i am so busy do u know i have college tommorrow...huh how sad...poor me na...still i will try to write the next part of any ff of mine...

p.s: this is the last part..i never wrote SR before i dont think i can write it well so i dont want to spoil this ss but doing such thing...so i m leaving that to ur imagination...but i swear u that some day i will try to write romance between maaneet and post it to u as a OS...till then plz enjoy this last part or epilogue as u can say...

love u all...urs teju

Maan's love

part 8

She is back to her sherni mode…ha ha how much I love it.

Who knows who is behind that veil….and in future don't even think of wearing a veil.

They laughed and soon geet joined me and we are back to home.

So now care to explain our marriage?

I asked stroking her hair after our first love making session that night. Yeah we did it many times before but this is special as it is first time after marriage….SR

Hmm…so where to start.

At dadima

I suggested.

Okay. Maan did u remember what u said that day when I came to ur cabin asking u to take me out.

Yeah…I regretted it when u repeated the same words two days back.

She smiled.

Well that day I really got so angry and I went away from there.

Yeah along with my phone.

Yes. Becoz u r speaking on phone without answering me

Hmmm

As I went and sat in my cabin ur phore rang. I was so frustrated I thought to blast the person who called u. but I saw dadima flashing on the screen. I never spoke to ur dadi but heard at lot about her from u. so I thought this is the time to let her know me and I answered the call.

U answered her call!!!!

Yeah

Never in these 5 years of our relationship u spoke to her

Yeah so that's y I thought to speak to her.

How did she react?

Well actually dadi was shocked that someone else touched ur cell and more over a girl.

Obviously

Yeah obviously who will dare to pop in their head into lion's mouth.

Really!!!!

True. Now don't disturb me and listen completely or else I m not going to repeat.

Sure madam

Yeah….so she thought I m ur secretary and asked me to pass the call to u. but I said…

What did u say!!!!!

Well I said I m ur gf

Dadi would have got a mini heart attack

She laughed out loud.

She check whether she called to ur phone or not and I assured her that she called to the great MSK…

Wat else u told her

I said we both are in relationship from last 5 years and u never proposed to marry me. We spoke for hours and she is fine with me. I told completely about me and she said she wanted to meet me.

Then?

I said I will come and meet but she altogether had different plans. Then the next day u came to me and said ur dadi is not well and u need to travel to india..i thought to accompany u but that night dadi called me and I enquired about her health. She said she is fine and told me her plan. I was surprised how can she plan like this….

Dadi no this wont happen…maan will find out

No geet he cant find.

But dadi I don't have anyone in india I don't know anything.

Don't say that geet u have us.

Thanks dadi but I don't think this work

Trust me beta…maan is going to catch tomorrow morning flight and u catch the next flight. Maan is going to land in delhi but u r going to land in mumbia. Annie will come to pick u and she will take care of u.

Okay dadi.

Take care beta.

Omg!!!!

Yeah. After u boarded the flight I called meera and asked her to bring my bags. I hopped the next flight and landed at mumbia. There I met ur sister annie and she took me to some town in Punjab. There I met dadima and she trained me with the living style, dressing and the Punjabi fluent. It took much time but they are patient. Then dadi one day came a nd said u r ready for marriage. At first I was so angry on u for accepting some random girl when u love me but then dadi told me about her blackmailing u. I was a bit convinced. Then the marriage took place and u placed the black beaded scared thread around my neck and the sindhur on my forhead. Dadi I my ears said that the marriage was over and I m ur completely now.

Later I was unable to continue this drama and I want to unfold it in our SR. I waited for u to come but u never came. That is when I got call from u. I thought of continuing this until u urself ask me to remove my viel. So I spoke about the deal adi sir told me that afternoon and the meeting that is going to take place. So I spoke to u about that and said I need to go. Later at night I mailed u so that u don't get any suspicion that I am missing in London.

Then how come u chat with me on plane?

Well Mr.Maan Singh Khurana not only u head a lappy.

But I did see u use the lappy that day

Well the truth is u did even see the dress I wore that day.

I saw

Oh really so tell me what I wore?

Saree

Saree???

Haan saree

Then?

Then what

What color

Some gold and red mix

Hmm then did u observe the sneakers I wore under saree

What!!!

Yeah I actually wore sneakers….everyone on the airport gave me odd looks…expect u who dint even own that.

i….

whatever. U even left the seat beside me and went and sat far behind me.

Yeah

Then how come u went to paris

How my dumb hubby

Geeet

I never went to paris

What

Yeah how will I go to paris when I am at our home waiting for my stupid hubby to show his face and ask me to show my face.

Then meera

I asked her to lie

Omg

Yeah

Then how come u r at ur flat when I came to speak to u. I threw the coffee u gave and left the house. When I left the house u r there and when I reached there u r there.

U spent some time at our regular park

Oh yeah

I used that time. Actually when u left the house I ran changed my dress well actually removed that cloth which I wrapped around my jeans and drove to my flat in the way I saw u sitting at the park bench.

Omg geet u r…

Intelligent I know

No…I mean stupid

Maaan

I laughed out loud and she joined with me.

That reation of ur when I said I m married….u r a awesome actress trust me

Shut up maan. That was really hard u know. I was unable to control my laugh and keep that straight face before u. some home I managed but u…u r not at all stopping ur questions….whe u asked me why I m bothered a lot about that girl…I am worried…what if u caught me….but u dumbo..

Geeet..

Opps my baby chorry

Funny

We shared another laugh.

U know wat geet we married twice

Yeah maan

I love u geet

Love u too maan.

I once again took her lips into mine and the night continued……

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