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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahhh what a nice confession-awesome yaar
it was just a dreamy update for me
beautifully written
even i wanna confess one thing- I love u both..:D:D:D

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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a perfect reply one can expect from Mayank...
I so loved it...
Thank you so much.. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing to say the least...! Mehak & Kinza...U both are the Lifeline of this story..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeee...the bestest update
at last mayank confessed to her..
amazing
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update

finally they confessed.

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
my like button not working - nice one


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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter # 42

Nupur knew her eyes were brimming with tears and her heart was filled with joy. Mayank was right they never needed this confession after all that had been said between them, but still these three words made it all change. it transcended their relation to a far higher level. she hugged the letter and let her tears flow, slowly whispering, " i love u Mayank.. i love u..."
but somehow after all he had said in the letter , this just wasn't enough. she wanted to talk to him. to confess her love. to tell him how much those three words meant to him.
quickly picking her mobile, she dialed his number, wishing, hoping praying he will pick it up...

**

Mayank stood beside at his room's open window , looking out at the moon. it had been a week since he sent the letter and although he was trying hard to tell himself that he was not at all nervous about it, but somehow all his heart seeked was an answer to that letter. an affirmation .

here i am.. lost in the light of moon, that comes through my window..
bathed in blue, walls of my memory divide the thorns from the roses.. its u and the roses.
.

Mayank closed his eyes and her smiling image paraded before his eyes.. the way she blushed ... how he longed to hold her soft yielding body against his and make her touch him, just to know that she is real and beside him...


touch me and i will follow in ur after glow.. heal me from all this sorrow.. as i let u go.. i will find my way when i see ur eyes...
now i am living in ur afterglow..
.

Mayank's eyes were still closed when he heard his mobile ring.. moving away from the window , he picked up the phone, not knowing who would call so late and not ready to let his expectations get too high that it could be from Nupur. however it was indeed from Nupur. her picture flashing on caller id.. her only picture he took just before she left..
quickly picking up the phone, he burst out , "princess?"

Nupur who had been planning so much to say felt her words struck in her throat and tears threatening to flow again. the way he called her princess was all she needed to hear to affirm the words in his letters.
she didn't speak for a long while and nor did he. they just silently felt eachother's heavy presence, both knowing that the letters were read and the words of teh letters accepted.
they both were hesitant, inspite of saying so many things to each other, they both knew that syaing these words would change everything. its not going to be the same again.

Nupur: " dont u think we should play a game Mayank?"
her voice was so soft that he had to strain his ears to listen to her. her heartbeat was definitely more audible then those words..
"i am at ur service princess..."
"so how about song game? we will say whatever we want to say to each other through a song?"
Mayank knew what she was trying to play at and in other circumstances he would have preferred coming and saying it out straight, but this time was not just any other time. they were about to confess their love...
"sure.. would u like me to start keeping in mind u wrote the first letter beautiful?"
that endearment was like a caress to her.. making her heart flutter and her yees close.. taking a deep breath she whispered in the same dazed, dreamy, soft voice., " yes Mayank.. i want u to do this first this time..."
Mayank: " I can be your hero, baby.
I can kiss away the pain.
I would stand by you forever.
You can take my breath away.

Oh, I just want to hold you.
I just want to hold you.
Am I in too deep?
Have I lost my mind?
I don't care
You're here tonight.
he let the words absorb before adding, " would u swear that u will always be mine?"

it was agony for Nupur not being able to reach out and touch him, to make him hold her in his arms when he said those words.. tears were again flowing from her eyes when she replied tenderly, "but i wont hesitate no more..no more it cannot wait.. i am yours..."

even Mayank had to close his eyes to absorb those words. She had just offered herself up to him in the most beautiful manner and his heart was beating to fast at the way those words made him feel like reaching out to her and just hold in his arms to never let go. But as soon as he closed his eyes, something else happened, he felt her touch.. as if she was right beside him, waiting for him to say his heart out..

Keeping his eyes close to feel her , he whispered in a hoarse voice filled with all the emotions overflowing in his heart, "i love u Nupur. i love u princess.. i love with all my heart and soul.."
"i love u too Mayank... with all the love my heart has... i love u ..."

everything was said and now they both stood miles away just standing with their eyes closed, basking in the presence they felt of each other, and trying to absorb the most beautiful moment of their lives- the moment of confession.

Chapter # 43 - Page 132 - Fantasia.

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
API...šŸ¤—
it was Beautiful...just...
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...
i loved d official confession sooo very much...
it was the BEST part of dis ff till now...šŸ˜
i jst cant find ri8 words to describe it...
loved dis too much to say...
U write it soo Beautifully...mashALLAH!!!
it was a very Emotional, Serene n Adorable update...
its jst Amazing...
d way Mayank was waiting for her ans..
his feelings everything was jst Perfect!!!!!!!!
i dont hv words to say it rightly...
i loved it lodsss...
love every word u Wrote on dis part...
love u too much API...šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

ps: is dis ff coming to its End wid der Acceptence of der love????? i hope not bt if so dan i hope dat my BOTH APIs already have der next story ready to Start...šŸ˜‰

Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
KINza this comment is for your 42 update ...

i must say kinza ...i have read all your ff's regularly..without delaying a day...

but this one really amazing and really touching yar ...
no word to describe...

just loved the mayank letter ...


MEHAK and KINZA ...lovely work GUys ...


keep it up...


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Posted: 14 years ago
for update 43..

mehak ...

what can i say just loved ..they are together with so many months but ..they are confessing now ..

and with so much immotion just loved it yar ...and i am sure you two have done lot of hardwork in this ff ...
hats off guys...

just keep going and keep write on mayur so we can never feel absence of mayur...
Edited by raginisharma - 14 years ago

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