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Hey guys dis is my first os''hope u all lyk it😊😊😊

(I wish akshara n gaya3 track cums soon)😉😉😉

I m a bit nervous writing dis but hope u all lyk it'.i wanted show aksh gaya3 faceoff n sum romance'😳 between naksh

Epi starts wid duggu crying n akshi making him stop In rashmis room

Akshi:bas karo duggu rona nahi rona nahi bas beta bas''

(as her ears r as sharp as a dog)😡 gaya3 enters into akshi room

Gaya3:kya hua lalla ko'.bahu tumhe dhyaan rakhna chahiye na'.itna ro raha h lekin tum apne kaamon me lagi ho'..hadd karti ho tum'.lao lalla ko mujhe do(snatches duggu)bas lalla'.bas karo(her usual dialogues)mera bahadur bachha h na..bas beta bas😡

Aksh:maa plz duggu ko mujhe dijiye na''kitna ro rha h wo..plz maa😭

Gay3:waise bhi tum kaha uspe dhyaan deti ho'.lao mai sambhalungi use'tumhe beechme aane ki jarurat nahi(shes such a neech lady ki wo ye bhi kahegi)😡

(Akshi coudnt see duggu crying n takes duggu frm gay3 hands)👏👏👏

Ak:maa har baat mere upar kyon daalti h aap'meri isme koi galti nahi'wo rashmi ne kaha ki use duggu ke saath khelna h'.pata nahi wo kaha chali gayi ab'mai to unke saath hi thi lekin mai naksh ke kapde lene room se gayi aur rashmi kahi chali gayi''aur maa ye mera beta h'.mai iski maa hu'ye jab rota h to mujhe bhi bura lagta h sirf aapko nahi 'aur ap kehti h ki mai gair zimmedaar hu'mai sambhal sakti hu apne bache ko'.aur mai sambhal lungi👏

Nk cums from d office n hears only d last lyn(as u noe hamesha wo galat tym pe hi aata h)🤢

Nk:akshara bas kijiye'.maa ke saath aap aise kaise baat kar rhi h'

Ak:lekin nk

Nk:BAS ab '.aap naksh ko leke andar jaayiye

Ak cries n goes inside d room'gaya3 makes faces n does chugli wid bm in her room(neechpan ki bhi had hoti h)🤢 n nk goes down in hall rum to sit

Rashmi cums n asks y nk is pareshaan'he tells every thing'rashmi confesses her fault dat as she was attending a call so she left naksh alone as ak went to tk his dress'.😲🤢🤢(maa aur beti dono ek jaise-STUPID )

Nk is ashamed of himself(nothing new in it'tubelite ke tarah batti late hi jalti h uski..)😲

AK to duggu:kya aap ko lagta h ki mamma aapka khayal nahi rakhti?😭(duggu smiles)😛nahi naa'.mamma aapse bohot pyar karti h'lekin aapke papa meri baat sun ne ke liye tayar nahi'.papa ko to adhi baat hi pata h..

Nk: nahi akshara'.mujhe ab rashmi ne puri baat batayi'.im so sorry(he is d king of sorrys)😕😕mai aise hi pata nahi kya hua mujhe'.aap..

Ak:duggu ab hum chalte h'ab se tumhara khayal rkhte hue mujhe saare kaam niptane h'(mauka milte hi bhaav khaana shuru)

(nk holds ak hands)she smiles but does not show it'.nk takes duggu n keeps him on d bed n says sry to ak in his own cute way..ak is happy but pretends to b angry'.nk cums to noe dat'he immediately takes a rose out of d vase n stands on his knees'ak is surprised😳

Nk: I love u'😳

nk gvs d rose'she accepts it n says ki mujhe manana aapse acha kisiko nahi aata'.

Nk:ab to aap maan gayi na'mai ab uth jaau na'she nods her head happily

Nk:tnx ab maine to aap ko wo 3 words keh diye'lekin ab aapki baari😳😳😳

Akshi:duggu yaha h aur darwaza bhi khula h..baadme

Meanwhile girija cums as kabab me haddi n says dj n rb r asking for duggu'nk tells to tk him'says they ll cum after sum tym)😳😳

Nk:duggu to ab nahi h'ab kaise bachengi aap '..abhi boliye warna'.

Ak;warna kya?

nk goes n closes d door

nk:warna mai aapko apne aur kareeb lunga(pulls her towards himself)aur ab'

nk takes sum rose petals n gently puts it on akshi'.she spreads her arms n is moving round n round'nk pulls her towards him n places a gentle kiss on her forehead

curtains fly'. n nk lifts akshi in his arms 😳n d rest u all know what will happen'.

(as of now we noe our very own cvs'they ll show jst dis much n phir sunrise dikhake raam charittra manas paath sunayenge😕😕🤢)but as ardent fans we can always imagine'sapne dekne me kya jaata h😉

HEY GUYS HOPE U ALL LYK IT'.I WANTED TO SHOW SUM DRAMA N ROMANCE IN D SAME EPI

DO LEAVE UR VIEWS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_chopra9

hey good workk..!!!
Keep writing..:):)

thank u so much...plz do tell me if i can do sum improvements
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thanks...plz do tell me if i can do sum improvements...feels lyk a gr8 achievement😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS dear
keep writing...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os...
keep writing like this

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