AbhIya FF:_enTw!nED_B2_[ended...new link @ pg 144] - Page 86

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

M sory bt m nt updating...i lft the story in nvmbr n dis s march...iv lost my readers too



if u write ur readers will still read..
but hereafter if u r to write i'll think abt reading it..
ur 1st FF was going very well..but u gave some personal reasons for dumping it..
n u promised to finish this FF..but now again u r doing the same..
so i think if u r to start another FF i better keep myself out of that..
it hurts when writers dont give a damn abt those readers who read n leave comments for them..
many a times they r concerned of those who dont comment..😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
i jst luvd ur ff.. its amazing!!!👏
i jst read it in 2 days...
read ur note plzzz dnt stop it plzzz 😭
if u wil continue thn plzzz pm me 😊
i realy wnt u to continue this ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm very very very sorry guys (especialy 2 ramani)... I'l wryt again kae? Jst gimme a day 2 wryt smthng nyc
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-Roses

I'm very very very sorry guys (especialy 2 ramani)... I'l wryt again kae? Jst gimme a day 2 wryt smthng nyc



thats the spirit shalini..
bring it on..
never let this talent of urs go waste..abhiya might be the inspiration for u to write but it is not necessary that it should die with the show going off air..
y r YT videos there??
pick ur inspiration again n come back with a bang..
expecting ur update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
.part 48.


As the beatifuly decorated car reached the ancient church, Pia fought back the strange dizziness in her head. It was her marriage after all. She had been living with him for nearly a year but still she was nervous. It was a huge step of responsibility. Haseena took her nervous palm n gently sqeezed it. ''I know you're nervous but trust me I'll be with you'',she whispered. ''Oh how much I love you mumma'',Pia said fighting back a tear drop. Finally the priest arrived and started the ceremony. Both Chaand and Haseena walked down the aisle with Pia. She looked like a fairy dressed up like the sweetest doll. It was a 'walk to remember'. Pia felt her heart thumping even more against her rib cage as she nervously took each step just like a toddler does. Her eyes were fixed to the icy blue eyes worshipping her. She was so mermerized by the fact that she's actually getting entwined to Abhay that she never noticed when she had reached his side. Abhay gently touched her to bring her back to reality. She snapped out and looked at the hundreds of people who were about to witness a magical bonding. The priest read out their vows and they repeated after him still lost in each other's eyes. Then after he deckared them to be husband and wife, he asked them to kiss. Abhay pulled her close rather modestly and kissed on her trembling lips. Everyone felt the heat of their passion. They clapped in awe as to how can someone love somebody so insanely. Abhay pulled himself back even though he wanted her so badly. Pia shyly blushed harder than ever. She turned to her friends and smiled like a child who has just finished a candy. Abhay saw eveyone looking at them and smiling. He smiled back and said 'Oh come on! She's my wife now'. To this everyone burst out laughing. Abhay hugged Pia and kissed her again and again. Haseena and Naina reminded the people to attend the reception in the evening. Abhay and Pia got inside a green new car. Abhay kissed her earlobe and whispered,'' you like your wedding gift?'' Pia gave him a confused look. '' this car is for you jaanu'',he said. '' this is unfair Abhay...from the time we met you've been giving away so many posh gifts that I have absolutely nothing to repay'', she said. Abhay gave her a wicked smile and said,'' you 'can' repay me...just do as your sorry 'our' heart says''. Pia blushed and looked away outside the car window. Abhay strayly caressed her ears down to her smooth bare shoulder. Pia closed her eyes in ecstacy. They reached their house and Haseena welcomed them and blessed them. Naina reminded Abhay that much time wasn't left for the reception so he should let Pia rest properly. Abhay understood her point and took Pia to their decorated room. He insisted on her getting a shower and taking rest for a while. While Pia was enjoying a shower, Abhay folded her weddind gown and kept it in her wadrobe. She came out in her towel looking totally worn out. Abhay put on a loose sphagetti on her and after kissing her for some time,she drifted off to sleep with and angelic smile on her face. Abhay spooned her carefully in his arms. He thought about his dark past and how he had lost Pia once. He then resolved to create a new fairytale with Pia rather than dwelling in the past. After some hours Naina texted Abhay to wake Pia 'cause some beauticians were on their way to dress up Pia for the reception party. He gently nudged her and she woke up lazily. A team of five beauticians came and Abhay had to leave. Pia's attire was still kept as a scret to him. He along with Chaand, Jeremy and Jordon were given a seperate floor to use while dressing up. After like two hours, the Raichand men left in Chaand's BMW to the reception. All four were dressed in classy black. Soon after the Raichand ladies arrived. Eveyone stood in amazement as the trio stepped on the polished green marble stairs. There was Haseena clad in a seductive red saree which was very decent too. She had these gorgeous sparkling rubies on her smooth neck. Then there was Naina wearing a lovely blue gown with gorgeous ripples here and there. It was a strapless long victorian era gown looking glossy and enchanting. And then there was the sweetest girl wearing a baby pink gown. It had beautiful roses made just below her neck. Tinges of red roses scattered on her marvelous attire drove Abhay crazy. She nervously met his passionate eyes and immediately looked down. There was too much passion in his eyes now. Even Chaand and Jeremy couldn't get their eyes off their soulmates. Haseena walked up to Chaand and kissed his cheek saying very softly ,''thank you for being my soulmate". Jeremy simply held Naina close to his heart. Guests flocked at the central ball room where the dj was playing some really romantic songs. And the newly weds weren't found in the mansion. They were somewhere quiet making love. But evil powers were again ready to create problems.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow brilliant update dear! Plz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update
yiiipppeee...abhiya got married..i'm so happy for them
but the evil powers are back...i hope, abhiya stay together in every problem..
Continue soon
thanks for the pm
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
great to see you back 😃
wow.. abhiya married now...
thnx for continuing this FF
but i didnt get a pm this time 😔 plz pm me nxt time ...😳
continue soon dr😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
good shalini..
u came with the update as u said..
loved their church wedding..
the attire the ladies wore for the reception was awesome..could imagine it..
lovely shalini..
so evil is going to show their heads soon..hhhmmm..do continue shalini..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome and beutifully written. Loved it...finally they are married! But i didnt get pm this time. Plz pm me when u update next

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