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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

Who wants a boss like Maan?

MEEE!!!! too young to work...hiiihiii
gosh, maan n geet fall in love pretty quickly
and even geet who was thinking abt dev...became maan's
she even forgot abt dev..whenever she's with maan just when the best moment onscreen she's start remembering him...
Tell me honestly. when u saw geet n dev (Maan nt arrived yet) u thought they were good-looking together? I skipped dev geet part just wanted maaneet!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

me here, replied on ur scrap

WHOOOPIE another update
me waiting!
hey did u like Dangerous Breakup (DB)?



yes I loved it I commented on your thread it sounds amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

and in those scenes i was seeing MAAN with my mouth open and my bro slapped me and said close ur mouth MAKHI CHALI JAYAE GI 🤣 🤣

gosh, they r confused when to tell n when not to tell
and Maan is seriously weird
who guy want the girl to say ILU first
i always know its the boy who says
maan was the first i saw wanted Geet to move for a go🤣
ur funny...did the fly went inside 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

you just watched it that was getting time😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

and in those scenes i was seeing MAAN with my mouth open and my bro slapped me and said close ur mouth MAKHI CHALI JAYAE GI 🤣 🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

Who wants a boss like Maan?

MEEE!!!! too young to work...hiiihiii
gosh, maan n geet fall in love pretty quickly
and even geet who was thinking abt dev...became maan's
she even forgot abt dev..whenever she's with maan just when the best moment onscreen she's start remembering him...
Tell me honestly. when u saw geet n dev (Maan nt arrived yet) u thought they were good-looking together? I skipped dev geet part just wanted maaneet!

i start watching geet after MAAN'S entry 😆i'm truly fully a gc'ian😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh
maan says why do i lost my sense when i see her
stupid because she stole ur heart, go n check if it is there in ur chest carriage...
they too good man
SIMPLY ROCKING
can watch them over n over again!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

i start watching geet after MAAN'S entry 😆i'm truly fully a gc'ian😆

ok
before i watched videos i read updates
so many werent happy abt dev's act...that's why they were angry with maan's entry
but forget it anyway! 😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
I got a pm from @love_lavnya so sweety here's your update:

Part 16
G: I am sure it will. She must be really beautiful. I loved to meet Mrs.Khurana

Geet said like really meant it.Maan was take back by her comment.

Maan's monologue
Maan she doesn't love get that straight her your thick head. That's why she is so cool about it. Show her you don't care either.

M:I am sure she would love to meet her favorite designer too. Maan said with a cold smile.

Geet' s phone rang.

G:Excuse me Mr Khurana. Yes Abigail.
A:Ma'am Mr. brown has come to meet you. He has no appointment. He is saying he doesn't need one.
G:Hmm Abigail take Maneet with you and send him in.

Maneet heard that.

Maneet's monologue
Hmm trying to hide something from Agent M huh. Does not easy.

Maaneet grabbed his teddy and put in on the sofa. He put a headphone on his head. So with the help of the teddy and the headphone I can hear everything, that there talking about.

G:Maneet what's that on your head.
M:Mom listen music. I am talking a little history break.Alright go to Abigial's cabin.

When Maneet left Mr Brown came walking inside the room.When Maan saw him he tighten is fist. He felt like hitten him in the face.He tried to calm himself.

Maan's monologue
She married him, so she really cheated on me. I was right she is the most discusting person. I can't believe I ever fell for such a low girl.She makes me misarble.

Maan stood up and shook his hand with Mr. Brown.

M:Hi Maan singh Khurana
R:Hi Ronald brown.
M:So you guys are married, huh.

Maan said giving Geet a disgusted look.Geet took a deep breath and stood up. Before she could she anything Ronald spoke up.

R:Yes I am so lucky to marry a girl like Geet.
M:Yes you are deffintly lucky.

Maan said that with a sarcastic smile.Ronald put a arm around Geet.
R:Geet sweety is this meeting going to take long. I wanted to take you out for lunch.
M:You can take her out we just finished.
G:Mr. Khurana the dress will be finished in two days. Is alright with you.
M:Perfect. Then see over two days.
G:Bye Mr. Khurana.
R:Bye and it was great to meet you Mr.Khurana.
M:The pleasure was all mine.

Maan said while gaving one last dirty look at Geet.When Maan left Geet broke down. She fell on the counch. Tears started making there way out of her eyes.

R:Geet I am so sorry for what I did. Let me fix everything.
G:NO. No Ronald you are not going to fix anything. It is not your fault that he ver loved me.
R:Geet he loved you and if you ask me he still loves you. Pleas let me tell him is truth just ones, jus ones Geet.
G:NO did you saw how he looked at me did you saw love in those eyes Ronald, huh tell me.
R:Geet he

Geet started sobbing and interupped Ronald.

G:He looked at me with like I am some filth. Today Evelien would be right he is ashamed of me.
R:No she is not right. She never was listen to her was my biggests mistake. And Geet if he was looking at you like that, that's because he doesn't now the truth. Because Evelien poisenend his Maan.
G:Really Geet give a sarcastic laugh.
R:Yes anyone would have reacted the same way, as Maan did.
G:NO I didn't ,beacuse I loved him and love means trust Ronald, whitout trust there's no love.
R:What do you mean you didn't
G:Forget it your work here is done. I will call you when I need you. You may leave.
R:Geet listen
G:Ronald pleas leave, you did enough
R:Alright, but remember Geet I first helped you because you blackmailed me. But after seeing all this, I just want to say I am sorry.
G:Leave.
R:Fine bye

Geet wiped her tears away and thought back at the day, that she saw Ronald.Geet was tired and disturbed making all those sketches for the wife of her love. She looked out of the balcony. She couldn't believe her eyes was that the same man that destroyed her life. Yep that was him she could never forget his face. Atleast not in this lifetime. Ronald was holding a baby and a marriege ring shined in his finger. So your married, interisting Geet thought. She sneeked downstairs. So didn't want to disturb Maneet. He didn't need to now what Mommy was up to.

G:Excuse me

Ronald turned. His eyes go all big. Schock was written all over his face.

G:Hi remember me
R:Nno who are you
G:The one whose live you destroyed 10 years back.
R: I am ssorry but your mistaking me for someone else.
G:Hmm maybe I should send that tape and those pictures to your wife, maybe
that will fresh up your memory.
R:No I am sorry I was young needed money and it happened so many
G:Listen I don't wanna hear you crap do as I say or else I send the tape and pictures up to your wife and do exactly what you did.
R:Alright tell me what to do
G:Play my husband in front of Maan
R:No I can't
G:You have no choice. Give me your number.
R:Here you go this is mine number. My name is Ronald.
G:Hmm and your surname is Brown
R:Anything else.
G:We've got a ten year old son named Maneet.
R:Geet you got a son
G:Yes
R:Is it Maan's child
G:NO it's only my child.
R:Hmm can I see how he looks. I am mean it would be awkward if I don't recognize my on child.
G:Hmm Geet grabbed her mobile showed Maneet's picture:
Geet also showed some more recent pictures.Ronald looked confused at the pictures.

R:The child is beautiful Geet but he doen't look like you or Maan.
G:Because Maan is not his father
R:But the who I don't get it. Who is Maneet's father
G:None of your bussineus. Anyway I will text you how late you will have to be at my office.

Geet walked back at to her place, but suddenly she turned.

G:Oh yeah acted like a hubby who really loves his wife. We'are happily married.
R:Hmm

When Abigail told Geet that Maan is coming at 4. Geet texted Ronald:

Ronald be there at 4.30. Ask me out for lunch and remember you love your wife a lot. So acted like a beloved husband.

Ronald:
Alright.


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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

oh gosh

maan says why do i lost my sense when i see her
stupid because she stole ur heart, go n check if it is there in ur chest carriage...
they too good man
SIMPLY ROCKING
can watch them over n over again!


😆

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