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Hi guys am starting two new ff along with Jeevan Sangini tell me your opinions.It's a supernatural stories but I hope you like it.
MAAN-EK MRIT INSAAN
PROLOGUE
A man was lying exhausted & half burnt & his eyes fell upon the half burnt house which has emgulfed the lif og his beleoved Geet.Geet,when the name came on his lips always he felt peace in his mind but now it has turned into sorrow & agony losing her.He closed his eyes & said painfully,"Geet."And he remembered the previous events.Geet was screaming for help trapped in the burning house & when the situation became out of control then she had decided to sacrifice her life in return of her beloved Maan's life.When Maan jumped inside the burning house to save Geet then she had pushed him forcefully to safer side & had saved his life sacrificing herself.Maan opened his eyes once again & a tear rolled down from his eyes but felt two bats flutter past him & turned to a man & woman.The man & woman had sky blue eyes & the man bent to Maan's neck & bit him immediately.Maan felt that his venom coursing in his veins rapidly with pain & he closed his eyes immediately.
Maan & Geet-do jadugar
PROLOGUE
A man came to street of Janakpuri in Delhi & lighted a cigarette lighter like object holding a small bundle.The lighter sucked the lights of all street lights leaving the street dark.The man had big black eyes & long crooked nose,with long moustache & white beard.He had a twinkle in his eyes & was wrapped in long travelling cloak.He came to the house no.4 & saw a tabby cat sitting on the wall & chuckled,"Good to see you here professor Mittal."The tabby cat had turned to a 40 aged woman who frowned at the man & said,"professor Dayashankar.Then the man had kept the bundle near the door of house no.4 & said,"Good luck Maan."When the baby boy cuddled up in the blanket then a lightening bolt shaped cut was seen in his forehead.
Which of the concept do you like do reply me guys.
MAAN-EK MRIT INSAAN
PROLOGUE
A man was lying exhausted & half burnt & his eyes fell upon the half burnt house which has emgulfed the lif og his beleoved Geet.Geet,when the name came on his lips always he felt peace in his mind but now it has turned into sorrow & agony losing her.He closed his eyes & said painfully,"Geet."And he remembered the previous events.Geet was screaming for help trapped in the burning house & when the situation became out of control then she had decided to sacrifice her life in return of her beloved Maan's life.When Maan jumped inside the burning house to save Geet then she had pushed him forcefully to safer side & had saved his life sacrificing herself.Maan opened his eyes once again & a tear rolled down from his eyes but felt two bats flutter past him & turned to a man & woman.The man & woman had sky blue eyes & the man bent to Maan's neck & bit him immediately.Maan felt that his venom coursing in his veins rapidly with pain & he closed his eyes immediately.
Maan & Geet-do jadugar
PROLOGUE
A man came to street of Janakpuri in Delhi & lighted a cigarette lighter like object holding a small bundle.The lighter sucked the lights of all street lights leaving the street dark.The man had big black eyes & long crooked nose,with long moustache & white beard.He had a twinkle in his eyes & was wrapped in long travelling cloak.He came to the house no.4 & saw a tabby cat sitting on the wall & chuckled,"Good to see you here professor Mittal."The tabby cat had turned to a 40 aged woman who frowned at the man & said,"professor Dayashankar.Then the man had kept the bundle near the door of house no.4 & said,"Good luck Maan."When the baby boy cuddled up in the blanket then a lightening bolt shaped cut was seen in his forehead.
Which of the concept do you like do reply me guys.
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