FF: Kidnapped Update Chp18. Pg50 - Page 16

is it a manveer or monash ff??

see i was just kinda confused

if i hurted u then sorry

u can ignore this question

well do continue soon i really like ur writing style and concept

Hey maneta,

Dw I don't feel bad. The FF is based on ManVeer, and I no I've added some other bits to it. It was orignally written in a western style (the beggining parts) but I wanted people to read my story so this is why I made an India forums account. Since I'm obsessed with Dekha Ek Khwaab and Udayveer, I decided to then base it on them. Right now, I'm just trying to adjust the whole story to make it seem alright.

I hope this has made it more clearer for you, and I also hope you enjoy the following chapters.

Niha x

thank u n hugs for pm ing

Don't worry yaar. Its good to have some critisms some times, it makes me rethink b4 I update. Once again no probz.

i really want to know further plz update soon

Hopefully, I wil update today or tomarrow. 😊

Chapter 8

Uday had been driving for some time now. I quietly watched the sunset outside the window, not knowing how to continue the conversation with Uday. Soon Uday had pulled into what looked like in the middle of nowhere. I looked around, worried that we had come to the wrong place.

"Where are we?" I asked him, getting a bit frightened, but Uday just smiled. I thought this was meant to be a special place, but all I could see was an empty road and millions of trees. "You sure we're at the right place? Or have to gone the wrong way again?" I told him, rolling my eyes.

"I saw that!" he told me, "Yes we are at the right place. Just follow me OK?" . He walked into the forest, without hearing my answer. I followed him, trying to stay focused on his figure. It was getting hard to see him, as it was starting to get darker.

"Uday?" I called out, when I thought I had lost him.

"Don't worry Princess, I'm right here," he reassured me. Then I suddenly felt a hand slide into mine. I didn't flinch, it was the only way I wouldn't get lost, so that made me feel safe.

We had walked a long way. It was starting to get chilly and I had shivered. I hadn't brought a cardigan, but then Uday gave me his jacket. "Thanks," I mumbled, moving closer into him. His jacket smelt nice, it kind of smelt spicey.

"So Princess, let's get to know each other," Uday told me. "What's your favourite colour?" He asked me.

I smiled, "Pink!" Uday seemed to make a face, "What?! What's wrong with the colour pink?".

Uday started laughing, "What is it with girls and the colour pink?" he asked me making a gaging face. He suddenly lifted me up, and jumped over a fallen down log.

"Urmm... thanks?" I told him when he put me down. "So what's your favourite colour?"

"Blue," he told me, grinning at himself.

"Ugh, what is it with boys and the colour blue?" I inpersonated him, try to make his sick face. Then I bursted out laughing, seeing Uday's offended face.

We walked the rest of the place asking each other questions, and laughing at some comments. Soon, we had reached to what looked like an open area. There were no trees, so I guessed we were at his "special place".

"Wow," I stated, looking around the place. The moon was full, glistening in the pond's reflection. The water lightly trickled down, like a waterfall, into the small pond. The moon shone really brightly, revealing the green glass. It looked so beautiful.

"Welcome to the meadow, my special place I like to come to once in a while," Uday told me, looking at me and my reactions.

"It's so beautiful!" I exclaimed, walking towards the pond. I sensed that Uday followed behind me, but ignored it. I put half of my hand into the pond, feeling the water rush past my fingers. I sat down near the edge, I felt really exhausted from all the walking.

"I like to come here to think about things. This place really calms me down when I'm angry," he told me, sitting near the pond, staring at the stars.

I felt his warm breathe on my back. Suddenly, I had goosebumps all over me, and shiver of excitement went down at the back of my neck. I turned to look at Uday really close near me, closer than I've ever been. "Has anyone ever told you that you're so beautiful under the moon?" he told me, staring into my eyes.

I was really stunned, and our eyes had locked with each other. He had dark brown eyes, just like liquid chocolate. They were beautiful just like the meadow.

Uday moved in closer, closing the little space we had between each other. Our lips met, and a new sensation had reached me. His lips tingled against mine, they were soft but it gradually got harder. His hands moved from my back and then placed them near my waist. I shoved my hands into his hair, pulling him closer to me.

That moment, I was totally lost. Nothing mattered to me anymore. It seemed like the whole world had stopped, and it was only us two there. Aakash didn't matter anymore, I had forgotten about him and Jay. I had forgotten about everything that had happened today. Only this moment meant everything to me.

I soon pulled away, but not wanting to. I had to catch my breath. Uday watched me, as he quickly breathed. "We should be going now," He told me. I nodded, following him once again into the forest.

**

(UV P.O.V)

I walked through the forest, knowing that Manyata was following me. I had shown her my special place. I had found it one day when I was really upset when my mother had died.

I looked back, making sure that Manyata was still following me. I heard her footsteps, so I knew she was OK. I didn't want her to get lost, she has been through lots recently, and her getting lost will be worse. She had already found herself a place in my heart, but I didn't want to show that to her. Today was the day when she realised it. I knew it was the right moment, I knew I had to cheer her up after what that Aakash had done to hurt her.

I didn't know what this feeling was. It was so strange, I had never felt it before. I only got close to girls who I thought could amuse me, who will do anything I wanted them to do. But Manyata, Manyata was different. She had experienced any things, I could tell by her facial expressions. Her anger was just like mine, and it was because of her anger that I found out she had been kidnapped.

I suddenly noticed that I couldn't hear Manyata's footsteps, I turned around but she wasn't there. I knew I should have stayed more closer to her.

"Manyata?!" I shouted, I had to find her. I couldn't lose her. Maybe Unniti, my sister, was right. Maybe it was love that I had for Manyata.

**

(M P.O.V)

I looked around, not seeing Uday anyway. I started to panick, wondering if I had lost him. I started to wonder around, looking for him.

"Udayveer?" I shouted. "Uday, please don't play jokes on me, it's not funny. You can come out now," I told him, but he didn't come out. I knew I had actually lost him. I didn't know where I was, and it was night.

I walked one area to another, shouting his name, panicking. What happens if I don't find him? I will die here all by myself.

I kept walking onwards, to what seemed to look the right way for me. I hope Uday wasn't playing a trick on him, because I wasn't finding this funny at all.

Suddenly, I heard someone talk. I couldn't hear what it was saying clearly, but I knew it was Uday. I walked towards the voice, getting nervous at each step I took. But then I couldn't hear the voice anymore, had I lost him again?

Then someone had placed their hand on my shoulder. I quickly turned around to see who it was.

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