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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

"Please listen to me" he said.

"No, don't utter another word" she said in tears.

"Please" he begged.

"No!" she shouted. "Another word, another lie, another hope and another broken faith" she screamed.

"Please" he implored.

"Don't!" she shouted.

"I hate you" she screamed again. She grabbed her purse and stormed off the house.

"Why...why every time me?" he cried breaking down.

"We were so happy" he said. "Just because one truth doesn't mean everything is over!"

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She walked on the road soaked with tears.

She felt that her feet couldn't carry her weight. She wanted to scream loud but instead broke into sobs praying "thank you babaji, you save me from committing a great sin! I don't what I would do if I came to know this later!"

"Why…Why you did this?" she sobbed and sat into her car.

"I am just an attorney, just an attorney, I don't have emotions…" she reminded herself.

"But, I am not even a machine!" she exploded. "I am going crazy! Yes, I am insane! I am talking to myself moreover I just said I am crazy! Oh babaji, I am losing my mind, I think it's call mental strokes" she said and brushed off her tears.

"Yes, I am Geet Handa, a lawyer!"

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He tried to concentrate on his work.

"Concentrate Maan, concentrate" he forced himself. But his mind diverted again.

"Why Geet, why you didn't let me talk – why do Sanchi has to come in between! Why? I hate this! I just hate this life! How I wish I was never married Geet! How I wish! But that's the reality of life but that doesn't mean everything ends for us!" he thought.

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"It's a crime, a very big crime, destroying someone's life…Oh gosh, what was I going to do?"

"I wish I never met Maan, how I wish I could turn back then time! Yes, I wish I could!"

Past

"Hi" Geet smiled to the passenger next to her seat. She was taking the plane for New York. Her co-passenger didn't smile; instead he looked outside the window.

"What an unfriendly person, I even smiled, greedy man" she grumbled.

The man glared at her and she quietly shut her mouth.

"Oh god, he has such sharp years, tell you what, detectors like those metal detectors, he has detectors!" she whispered and giggled at her new theory.

Suddenly the man next to her snapped "nobody needs detector when a talkative person is sitting next and is talking so loud".

"Excuse me; I was whispering" Geet replied back "and it's not my fault if your ears are so sharp? Is it?" she asked all innocently.

Annoyed, the man turned around and focused back to his view.

"At least don't be so arrogant for not giving a smile!" Geet giggled and drew her attention on her magazine.

Some minutes later, everybody was shaken.

"Hey babaji…I don't want to die so soon, I haven't got married yet, at least think about this!" Geet prayed loudly.

The man next to her braced his air jacket. They had just announced that there was a big serious problem in the plane and it was going to crash!

Note: Sorry guys…I don't know about these planes stuff…

Precap: A lonely island?

PMs later, you guys can check if I updated because now I'll PM at the end of the week, when I'll give an update for My Second Wife Geet!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
First time that I commented Firstly Yippe Yippe Yeah🥳

Yes, I am Geet Handa, a lawyer.
Really😡I am only Ms. lawyer, I even won't share my tag with Geet.

"What an unfriendly person, I even smiled, greedy man" she grumbled
he is a business men what do you expect Geet

Suddenly the man next to her snapped "nobody needs detector when a talkative person is sitting next and is talking so loud".😆 But I really loved Geet theory.

Really nice start of the ff. IT begins so interesting loved it con soon can't wait for part 2.

BTW Maan who is Maan's wife. I hope it's not Emma or maybe Evelien you never know😆


Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
love it Frankie
awesome dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
oho!so maan has a wife...
thats geet's problem..!
and geet,a lawyer..
dats pretty interesting..
gud one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
awesome😛
oh no maan is married
continue soon
plz add me in
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
ABSOLUTELY FRIGGIN LOVED IT !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
hey glad you finally updated this one...

liked it

nice intro of both👏

but confusing present😕

continue soon

love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
wow interesting..
hmmm geet a lawyer..
waiting for more..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
awesome start..really good...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
part 1
nice...
Maan is married to who?
Geet is a Lawyer...
cont soon...

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