Jeene ke Ishare mil gaye.[FF:VirMan] NOTE-pg57

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Hey guys, most of you won't know me as I'm a silent reader but anyways myself Pooja. Hola! (Spanish hi wave) well I don't really know what to say, but I've been writing lots of little things this weekend so I gave a try writing SS for all you EHMMBH fans and especially VirMan.

Just to warn you I'm not an amazing writer but I do enjoy writing occasionally. It might be boring because it's pretty long, I hope you guys are still alive by the end of it. (worried face) ok i'll stop talking now.. and let you have a little read.

Okay I will add people to my Buddy list if you want me to PM you the next update of chapters.

Sorry if any errors with Hindi grammar, I am so rubbish at it but I will try to express better with English. Just tell me if you want anything improved.

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Index:

Chapter 1: page 1

Chapter 2: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=3

Chapter 3: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=5

Chapter 4: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=8

Chapter 5: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=13

Chapter 6: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=17

Chapter 7: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=21

Chapter 8: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=27

Chapter 9: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=35

Chapter 10: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=41

Chapter 11: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2825376&TPN=45

Chapter 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2825376/jeene-ke-ishare-mil-gaye-ff-virman-note-pg57

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Holi with Bhaang. [Title changed to Jeene ke Ishare mil gaye!]

Chapter 1

It's 9:00 am everyone in Vedehra house was busy in preparation for tomorrow. Tomorrow is Holi, the festival of colour. Whole Vadehra mansion was excited about it even Swamini Bua who had been put in charge of organizing the festival, who obviously had her extra-ordinary ways of doing things but that didn't matter as long as everyone was happy. Everyone in the mansion were talking about it; Jeevika who was very happy to be celerating her first Holi in Chandigar with her husband but was all sad that she won't be able to celebrate it with her dear sister like always and was emotional that she wasn't in Rishikesh. While jeevika was thinking about this, Viren noticed that her beautiful wife was somewhere lost and he realized what she was thinking. He then smiled to himself and thought it's now time to surprise her and bring her happiness to her. With that thought, he went outside and made a phone call.

In Rishikesh

Maanvi was sat by the window seal, starring at an empty space in the garden that seemed colourless without her Di. Just then her paltan came and scared her from the back. She screamed and ran after them saying "aise koi karta hai kya, tum sabko to choodungi nahi..!!" They stopped running and came to Maanvi and said "sorry di. Aap kahan kho gaayi thi? Aap ko yaad to haina ki kaal kya hai? Har saal ki tarah is saal bhi hum khub maasti karenge!" Maanvi wasn't in any mood for Holi this year, she expressed her sadness to her paltan and they understood, but they weren't going to let her stay sad like this for long, so they sang a song to her with their cute innocent voice and danced around her. Soon she was feeling little better. Just then Beeji called her downstairs, so she told her paltan to disappear and she will see them tomorrow.

Kya huwa beeji? Aap ko kuch kaam tha? 'Maanvi said walking towards the kitchen.

Haan beta, ja tu apna saaman jaldi se pack karle.

Maanvi in total confusion at this point.. says "par kyun? Hum kaha ja rahe hai?"

Yeh kaisa sawal hai? Tuhje kisine bataya nahi?

"Nahi, is ghar mein meri kisko parwahi nahi hai, kamse kam aap toh baata dijiye..!" she said joking.

"Baatein kam kar aur ja aapne kamre mein, meine bag nikalke rakhi huvi hai" Beeji said in usual tone.

"Arrey yaar, par kabse pooch(asking) rahi hu ki jaana kaha hai?" Still confused, making faces.

"Chandighar, kal Holi hain toh Virenji ne boloyein hai. Do(2) parivaar sath mein Holi manayge" Beeji finally answered her questions.

"AHHH.. KYA? Saachi? Viren jiju sachmein world ke best jiju hai!" maanvi said while controlling her happiness, jumping up and down. Reaching cloud nine while thinking about celebrating holi with her Di. But then she came down to reality by a strange disturbed thought of..VIRAT. Uss Chep ka mua(face) dekhna padenga.! ..par fikar not, Maanvi choudary dikhenge usse Holi ka mazaa. She muttered to herself while walking up to her room with evil laugh. HA HA..HA.

Back in Chandighar

Viren told everyone except Jeevika about Choudary's coming to Chandighar for Holi. Everyone seemed happy and hearing this news Virat had a slight smirk on his face. He went to his room and dialed the number which was now saved on his favourite list due to excessive amount of calls to the same person-Maanvi!

BUZZ BUZZ! It was on slient, she didn't realise and was busy packing her stuff. Virat tired again, but no response and now really annoyed and tried once more thinking if this bandariya doesn't pick up I will murder her (with colours of course) when she comes tomorrow! She was almost done with her packing and was just about to call Jeevika, so she looked at her phone which was vibrating manically, Maanvi looked at the caller ID and thought "yeh chep ko abhi hi phone karna tha! Kahmkha sar khane k liye!" She causally picked up the phone and said "kya hai" in an annoyed tone.

"arrey, Kaise ladki ho, na hello-hi bolti ho" Virat replied.

"Kuch kam hai toh bolo, yeh faltu mein hello-hi bolne k liye time nahi hai mere paas, aur tumhe kya mein jaise ladki hoon waise hoon, tumse koi matlab.." Maanvi started her bickering.

Virat smiled upon hearing this, so he replied to annoy her "kitni boloti ho tum! Tumne seriously bakwaas karne mein PhD kar rakhi hai. ."

Maanvi made faces at this and went on to say "haan haan, toh kya? At least meine kise ek cheez mein to mastery ki hai, tumahri tarah nahi hoon main.. samjhe chep!" she said proudly.

Virat didn't take this seriously and laughed at her " tum sachi mein paagal ho, mein kya.. 'ek kaam karo psychiatrists k pass checkup karwahi lo! Daar lagraho ho tu mein tumhre saath chalta hoon, kya hai..dekho aise chote mote mental problems hote hai par'-"

Virat couldn't complete his sentence and was cut off by maanvi who was now absolutely annoyed and felt like killing him ..so she yelled "TUM CHEP ke CHEP hi rahoenge! Tum hai toh mein choodongi nahi, tum dekho chandighar aakar tumrah kya haal karti hoon!" She was about to cut the phone off but heard virat's innocent yet sexy voice.

"Arrey suno ji, Maanvi ji haan mein kya kahra hoon hain ji' sorry Ji. Ab maaf bhi kar do. Chaddo(proper Punjabi style?) yeh gussa, sorry." Virat said like a cute sweet baby that Maanvi was stunned.. he had said sorry many times but why was this any different?

"achaa..theek hai.. tum bhi kya yaad rakho gay, k kisse paala pada hai tumahra. CHOUDARY, Maanvi Choudary hain mera naam." She said cheerfully with attitude.

Virat gave a little laugh with his eyebrow remark, and totally forgot why he had actually called her. The call ended, and he ran his hand through his hair to remember why he had called her.. "aye hai ladki, aapni baato toh mein assie uljah diya ki meri baat toh kahena bhool hi gaya." He heard his name being called out by Viren. He left the room confused yet happy.

..to be continued..

so for those who managed to read all of it..without falling asleep.. how was it? Good/bad comments are all welcomed. (btw I know I have terrible Hindi, I never learnt Hindi, I only learn it from serials) Press LIKE, if you liked it.. Lol! If enough people like it, i will update regularly in 2-3 days.

I will defo add more VirMan Scenes in the next chapters! so please keep with me.

-Much love Pooja.

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i am the first one to comment😉

you are too good dear. and defo pm me when you continue
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This was amazing!
I'm speechless! too good! this brought a smile on my face. 😛👏
I give you 9/10..LOL. no 10 because of the lacking of VirMan Romance. 🤣 anyways please continue sooon & PM me xD

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Nyc 1 yaar... I always lovd readng dr nokh-jhok...
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Amazing!!! Excited for the next part!! Please pm me when you update.😊
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Hey it was really nice.loved the concept.
Cont soon will be waiting
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