FF : I Can't Let Her Go! Part 30 UPDATED

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This takes place

After 6 months are up.

After Arnav discovers Khushi's innocence.

After Arnav Begs her forgiveness.

After Khushi refuses and moves back in with her family who are now desperately protective of her.

After Arnav begs Di to help him get her back...




I Can't Let Her Go!


The Raizada's were awating the arrival of the Guptas.

Payal hadn't seen them for a week now and hadn't seen Khushi for almost 2 weeks.

Anjali could see Arnav's face impatiently waiting for any glimpse of his wife...

She didn't know the full story, only that her brother had done something so wrong that Khushi couldn't forgive him...

The doorbell rang.

Payal was so excited and rushed to answer. She immediately embraced Buaji and Garima...She knelt down to hug Babuji...and then saw Khushi standing behind them all...Payal ran to her hugging her tight...

As they walked in, Arnav's eyes eagerly searched for Khushi...

And then he saw her...

His heart plummeted...

She was thinner...

She was pale...

She no longer smiled...

He went to greet the family one by one...their eyes held contempt for him, but they were respectful...

He finally stood before Khushi..."Namaste Khushi..."

Her eyes met his and his heart tightened..."Namaste Mr. Raizada..."

She started to walk past him...Anjali looked at Arnav, who looked like he'd had all life sucked from him...

Payal saw how weak Khushi had become...and offered to take Khushi to the kitchen to make jalebi...

Khushi smiled softly and accepted...

Arnav was about to follow...when he heard Anjali ask..."How is Khushiji? We miss her very much..."

Buaji spoke first..."i told her i'd never allow her to set foot in hear again! But she insisted to come to see Payal. Why she is even talking to ANY of us after the way we treated her is beyond me!"

Anjali looked away sadly...

Nani spoke up, "How is she though..."

Garima looked at Arnav saying, "I'm sure you will be glad to hear that she is quite sick. She has hardly eaten for 2 whole weeks! She gets dizzy, she has fainted at least once a day..."

Arnav stared at Garima in horror...he felt like he was dying...

"And she cries all the time! It's breaking out hearts...the first time i have seen her smile in months is just now, when she walked off with her jij!" Garima started to sob as nani came to her and put her arm around her...

Arnav quickly stood...and said, "i can't hold it in anymore..."

Looking at Anjali he said, "Di, i don't want to do this , but i love Khushi more than anything in my life and NO secret is worth keeping seeing her like this...Shyam. He did all this. He decieved me. He deceived you. He was the one engaged to Khushi. He was the one who betrayed us. Khushi said she wouldn't tell you and she would keep it quiet but i can't do it...not seeing Khushi like this..."

Anjali was surprisingly calm..."Chote, i have known something was wrong for sometime...but i haven't been wanting to believe it..."

"I'm sorry Di..."

The rest of the family were in shock. The Guptas confirmed Arnav's story and gave more details to Nani who was astounded...

Garima looked at Arnav...

"Thankyou, for clearing Khushi's name. But this changes nothing. We want you to end the marriage. That is final."

"I can't, I love her...please let me try and..."

"You will not make her suffer anymore! END THIS! Or we will find our own lawyer and end it!"

Arnav staggered back...Anjali came to him..."chote...the damage is too great...you need to let her go..."

"no. Di i can't. I love her. I love her so much my heart is aching constantly...Di, i'm so sorry. i'm sorry for what ..."

"no chote. i'm stronger than you think. You don't need to be sorry...but you need to consider what Khushi needs..."

"She needs me. Not the ME she lived with before. She does. I know she does. I love her. And I Can't let her go!"

Part 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=7

Part 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=12

Part 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=20

Part 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=23

Part 6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=27

Part 7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=32

Part 8 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=40

Part 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=43

Part 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=48

Part 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=51

Part 12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=56

Part 13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=61

Part 14 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=71

Part 15 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=73

Part 16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=75

Part 17 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=86

Part 18 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=88

Part 19 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=91

Part 20 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated?pn=95

Part 21 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 22 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 23 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 24 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 25 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 26 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 27 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 28 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 29 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated

Part 30 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2819621/ff-i-cant-let-her-go-part-30-updated



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Posted: 13 years ago
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YAY! FIRST!
Dude I'm like stalking your "I Feel Nothing" Thread and saw this and like rushed here! Amazing as usual! I think your writing sets the bar to a good piece of writing! This is amazing!!! Loved it!! Part 2? Pweeese!!!! (no pressure) I love Arnav-Repentance writings and written by you = best combo ever!!

~Ashu <3
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Good work! This sounds like one of the last episode of this serial:)
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Originally posted by: london_doll

YAY! FIRST!
Dude I'm like stalking your "I Feel Nothing" Thread and saw this and like rushed here! Amazing as usual! I think your writing sets the bar to a good piece of writing! This is amazing!!! Loved it!! Part 2? Pweeese!!!! (no pressure) I love Arnav-Repentance writings and written by you = best combo ever!!

~Ashu <3

you are rapidly becoming my favorite 😛😊😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desi-

you are rapidly becoming my favorite 😛😊😉


Ji thank you, thank you! *Shys away like Payash😳* LOL!
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love our work continue soon can't wait to read more
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There has to be 2nd part to this...😃
Brilliant OS...and you wrote this in 5 mins?
Will be waiting for more...though I dont know if Khushi will forgive him or not, but perhaps she has heard all that Arnav has said right now? OR we can just let our imaginations decide the next part to this...but nice OS.
Edited by nyxx - 13 years ago
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Excellent OS, I'm glad Arnav regrets in this OS! Wonderful 👏
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Brill work...can't wait for the next part.
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I like it :)..
PLease continue and PM me thankss!!

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