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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: music_girl
Tell, me how many pages to u wanna me spam for u to update!

😆 I am updating

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: music_girl
🤣 Lol, okay tomorrow me updating both LOL and MSWG

Yeah that's good news but tell me is jocky your stepchild

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: mel420

😆 I am updating

mom will be home soon, if can hurry do hurry! 😛

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music

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: mel420

Yeah that's good news but tell me is jocky your stepchild

nah dear, but my real child, 🤣 listen have 4 pages of epi to write so better i write 2 pages of updates plus sally posted me the LOL update just have to post it on the thread thats all 😉

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music

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Mel's tweetie ran away, here's her kitty Melsie

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Guys check this link out:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2657320/ss-falling-for-a-jock-completed

Part 9

M:But princess I can't let you go out just like that. I first want to see the guy.
G:What but dad.
M:But nothing won't let my princess go just like that. I comes to meet me, if I like him you can go on a date or else date cancel.
G:Okey dad I will tell
M:Good. Oh my little princess is growing, going on dates
G:DAD
M:Oh I am sorry maybe going on dates Mohinder chuckled.
G:DAD Geet hit her father playful on his arm.
M:ouch influence of Em he. He chuckled.

Geet called Maan.

M: Hey missing me
G:Maan wo you now na Saturday wo
M:Of course I didn't forget about Saturday. I am not ghaijni😆
G:Nahi wo Maan actually dad
M:Ha Dad problem don't worry Geet if you want I can talk to your dad and order him to let you take me out. And He won't be able to refuse
G:Acha itna confidence
M:Yes of course MSK can do anything.Maan said in attitude.
G:Good then you will talk to dad Saturday before you will take me out. So come at 7.30 bye The great MSK
M:Wait Geet main toh

Geet hung up.

Geet's monologue
Ab kya karoge Mr. Maan singh Khurana😆. Well Maan you just made everything easier for me and here I was thinking, how I would tell you that dad want's to speak to you. Just love you Maan😃

Emma walked into the room, with shopping bags.Geet and Emma shared a room.

G:Hey Emma what did you get.
E:Nothing special
G:Still what did you get

Mohinder:Girls come downstairs food is ready.

Geet and Emma walked into dinning area.

M:So Emma you went for shopping
E:Yes
M:What did you buy, anything special.
G:Nothing dad just some dresses.
G:Dresses you probaly mean tore up jeans😆
M:😆

Emma didn't reply back.

M:anyway talking about dresses. I think Geet needs to shop for a nice dress to huh for Saturday.
G:DAD geet said blussing. (She looked like a tomato😆)
M:What did I say something wrong.
Evelien:Why Mohinder is there something special on Saturday.
M:Yes Geet is there something special on Saturday.
G:Dad Geet glared at her father
M: No not dad tell your Evelien mom why do you need a dress for Saturday.
G:I don't know dad, you said I need a dress. You tell me what's so special on Saturday. Geet said with a teasing smile.
M:Well Evelien are litlle girl is going on her first date.
Evelien:WHAT.
M:don't worry I will check to boy first before I send here.
E: Who is the boy
M: Eh what was his name geet Mohinder acted like he didn't rembered.
G:Woh Maan dad
Emma:What but you hardly know him.
M:don't worry Emma daddy will take care of everything.

At night in Emma and Geet's room

E:Geet are sure about all this dating
G:Emma wait I'il be back in a minute

Geet stood up and went to her dad's room. She needed to ask Dad something. She stopped at the door when she heard Evelien and Mohinder talking.

E:Mohinder she is just 18 you can't go and let her dad.
M:relax Evelien before Saturday I will get a complete background check up of Maan. And Saturday I will talk to him personally Mohindar chuckeld. Don't worry.
E:You don't get it Mohinder she is to young to let her go on dates. Maybe Maan will be completly perfect but what if Geet makes it a habbit and she starts going out more often with different kind of guys.
M:EVELIEN I TRUST MY DAUGHTER!!
E:Don't yell Mohinder. I also trust her but she is just 18 a age where kids experiment.
M:NO My Geet is not like that. And if she would ever break my trust then Evlien I would consider her death.
E:Calm down Mohinder I was just getting worried about all this datting fuss, your right Geet is not such a girl. But what if Maan is not what he seems like. What if plays with Geet's feelings.
M:THEN I WILL KILL HIM WITH MY BARE HANDS.Mohinder yelled feeling disturbed and frustraited.
E:I am sorry Mohinder. I didn't meant to upset you.
M:hmm

Mohinder walked out of the room. Geet run quikly to the terras.

Geet's monologue
I will never break dad's trust. I will only love Maan always. And my heart tells me Maan feels the same way. Why else would a guy on the first date agree to talk to my dad. Your right Geet everything will be fine.

Mohinder walked up to the terras.Geet turned around when she heard footsteps.

G:Dad are you okey.
M:Yes doll why are asking
G:you only come to the terras when you upset.
M:The same counts for you, so what's wrong
G:I heard you and Evelien mom talking
M:Ah I see. Well Geet then you must now that I trust my little princess and I have a lot of work to do before Saturday. Mohinder chuckeld.
G:Dad I will never break your trust. I promise.
M:I know Geet, I know. Dady will always trust you.
G:Dad are you really going to do a background check of Maan
M:Yes my princess, won't let my princess go out just with anyone.

Geet smiled and hugged her dad.

G:Your the best dad you know.

Mohinder smiled.

M:Come on time to go to bed now.

Mohinder and Geet walked back to their rooms.

Emma:Geet where were you.
G:OMG I went to dad to tell him that Maan will be meeting hin at 7.30 Saturday but I forgot.
E:Forget it. Today it's Wensday, so it's not like Maan is coming tomorrow. So tell him tomorrow.
G:yeah your right
E:Anyway you tell me Maan. I mean are you sure you like him.

Geet stood up and hugged Emma.

G:Oh Emma I am so exciated.
E: That's what I mean. That it is not just exciatment instead of love, because you going on a date for the first time.

Geet got suddenly serious.

G:No Emma I am 101 precent sure that I am in love with Maan, and that he is the one for me.
E:I think you should think about it. I don't want you to make a mistake, dad won't take it lightly.
G:Don't worry I have never been so sure in my life about anything.
E:But what if Maan is just playing with you. He looks like a flirt if you ask me. And every girl is behind him, so why would he choose you.

Geet grabbed a pillow and started hitting Emma

G:Acha He can get any girl he. Listen clearly Emma. He may get any girl but.

M:But Geet is not just any girl.

G:Dad what are you doing here.

M:I was just going to the kitchen to get water when I hear you girls. Now Emma don't worry and trust your sister and your father.
E:Yes dad.
M:And Geet go to bed. I know the excitment won't let you sleep but try Mohinder chuckeld.
G:Dad😳
M:Yes dear😆
G:Dad wo I forgot to tell you Maan will be coming at 7.30 to talk to you.
M:Ah so I got a halve hour to talk to him.Great.
G:Yep dad grill him with you qeustions. Show that Maan singh Khurna who MOHINDER HANDA IS.

Geet said while standing on her bed.Mohinder laughed.

M:I will princess now try to sleep.
G:Good night dad.
E:Good night
M:Good night girls.

Geet fell on her bed took her blanket on her and felt in sleep with a smile on her face.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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nammmu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

I thnk emma is geets step sister and she is in love with maan.mostly she only created some misunderstanding between maan and geet and at present i thnk she married to maan.

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: music_girl
nah dear, but my real child, 🤣 listen have 4 pages of epi to write so better i write 2 pages of updates plus sally posted me the LOL update just have to post it on the thread thats all 😉

You do understand it has to be four pages of the thread. And I am really expecting you to right it or else I will be heart broken💔