Mayur ff AHANKAR part4 pg11

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Bhawna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Congrates 4 new ff.
Happy new year.

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

congrats for your new ff
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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...EhSaas...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Nice start

add me to your PM list 😊

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arzzo

@arzzo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hey congrass fr the new ff love the tile and the starting scene and the characters are really great i am already in u pm lst just pm me whenever u update

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unknown

@--unknown--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Ahankar matlab ego pyar ki sabse badi dushman misunderstandings fights yeh sab har rishtey main hote hain par yeh hamare pyar par jyada effect nahin deta pyar ke liye sabse zaroori hain jhukna par agar hamara gamand humein jhukne na de toh zindagi nark ban jaati hain humse hamaara sab kuch cheen leta hain yeh ek aisi hi story hain pyar aur gamand ke beech ek bada war jyada tragedy aur serious type story hain

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unknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

N-yeh ladka kaun hain
m-mere aur dia ka beta krish
n-dia
m-meri ex wife

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unknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Dia dad-toh mayank maan gaya
d-agar wohmaanega toh bhi main nahin maanoongi
dia dad-kya hua beta
doagar aaj main usse nahin milti toh kabhi pata nahin chalta ki mera usse shaadhi ka decision kitna galat hain

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unknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

M-she is such a cheap charecter jab tak main uske baat sun raha tha mere saaath ab jab main uski baat nahin sunraha us shantanu ko pakad liya use pati nahin ungliyo pe nachaane waala bandar chahiye pehle main ab koi aur
n- main mujhse nafrat karne waale insaan ko bhi bardaash kat sakti hun par main aise insaan ke saath nahin reh sakti jisne mere charecter pe ungli utaya please give me divorce
she falls on her knees with tears he was also crying

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

NICE,... BUT KUCH SAMAJH MEIN NAHI AAYA...

VERY LOVELY...

THODA CONFUSING HAIN.. BUT...

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unknown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Life main kabhi kabhi choti choti galtiyan bahut bada asar laata hain. kabhi kisise itna dur mat jaana ki lautne ka raasta bhul jaaye. zakhm pe waqt pe malham na lagaye toh woh bimaari ban sakti hain.apne pyaar pe apne ahankar ko kabhi haavi mat hone dena hamaara gussa hamaara sabse bada dushman hain.
Here comes my first part

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