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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: AIMAMSK
Superb

thanku dear... 😊

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#272

Originally posted by: SONU_29
Maan-Geet married when he get some paper sign by geet na?
Maanvi is Maaneet's daughter.
waiting for their confrontation.
very interesting update.

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hmmm that u will come to know later...

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Originally posted by: geetsweet
awesome part jyothi lovely...
mundhe entha peddha twist echesav malli yem twist esthav...
nuvvisthanate nenodhantana...hehehhe
continue soon dear

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hmmm twist vastadi inkoti... kani adi manchi twist ee...
hahaha nuvvisthanate nenodhantana... 😆 😆 😆

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#274

Originally posted by: Rupal
Nice update.👏

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Originally posted by: suhaaana
nice update😊

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Originally posted by: shalinisaran89
omg awesome upd

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome, nice, lovely part
loved it

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul
so sad.Very emotional

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Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU
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chapter 30:

They all went inside. After half an hour geet saw someone came out of office n was shocked to see that person there. She started sweating n shivering. She held maanvi tight n a layer of tears formed in her eyes.
That person get into his car n drove as fast as possible. By seeing his face anyone can say that he is hell angry n frustated. But here geet is hell scared seeing him here.

Geet (st): what is he doing here? Does he know that maan is here? What if he do any harm to maan. Babaji main 2 saal isi ki wajah main mere maan se dur hui. Aaj phir se inka chehra dekhna pada. Yeh kya ho raha hain, what is he doing here. Yeh kiska office hain.

Geet is shivering thinking about that person. She took maanvi in her arms n got down the car n went inside. Here maan is in his cabin with di, yash, shanti n vicky.

Maan is discussing about the project which their college is going do. They both are so engrossed in the meeting n shanti is checking some designs. Sudha n yash are waiting for the meeting to complete. When geet entered into the office maan jerked suddenly. He felt a unknown feeling, a sweet aroma, unknown happiness.

Maan (st): muje kya ho raha hain. Aisa kyun lag raha hain ki geet kahi aas pass hi hain. Par geet yaha kaise aur kyun hogi.

He shrugged off his thoughts n concentrated on meeting. Geet made maanvi to sit on the chair outside n he went near reception. But maanvi climbed down the chair n startd walking towards maan's cabin. Maanvi just started to walk n her steps are so slow n with the help of wall she is walking. Fortunately maan;s cabin door is open so she entered the cabin without making noise. But no one noticed maanvi. Maanvi saw here n there with her big big eyes. But seeing all new faces there she frowned but seeing maan there she smiled. Baby dont know that he is her father but unknown warmth indulged her that she smiled seeing him. But here maanvi is very tired walking from waiting area to his cabin n she is not able to walk. She again frowned n started to cry.

Wuaaa wuaaa..

all of them turned to the entrance listening baby cry. Shanti's n vicky's eyes popped out seeing maanvi there. Immediately shanti got up n took maanvi in her arms. But she didnt stop crying.

Beta why u r crying? Bhook lag rahi hain aapko? Asked shanti.

But baby is crying loudly.

Kya hua beta? Asked shanti worriedly.

Shanti whose baby is she? Asked sudha.

Shanti dont know what to say but vicky answered meri di ki baby.

Oh ok..

but when maan saw maanvi he felt some unknown bonding with that girl. When he saw her crying he felt some pain.

Beta why u r crying? Asked shanti.

Baby pointed towards maan. They didnt understand anything. Baby started jumping n it became very hard for shanti to stop her cry. Maan went towards them n took maanvi in his arms.
Immediately maanvi stopped crying n started laughing n jumping in his arms.

Why u r crying beta asked maan.

Baby kept her hand on his cheeks n smiled. Maan kissed her forehead n sat on his chair with maanvi in his lap. Maanvi tried to stand in his lap but her attempts failed. But she is maan's daughter how can she fail. Atlast she stood on his lap n tried to lift the glass of water which is there on the table. She is just 1 n half year n see what she is trying to do ufff. Unfortunately she poured the water on the laptop.

Oh no princess gasped vicky.

Maanvi made a baby face n looked at maan. Immediately he melted that baby face reminded him of geet.
Here sudha n yash r surprised to see maan not getting angry. N shanti had tears in her eyes seeing father n daughter together. Shanti couldnt control n hugged di n started to cry.

Di got worried n asked shanti what happened? Why u r crying?

Shanti broke the hug n went near maan n holded her hands infront of him.

Shanti yeh tum kya kar rahi ho? Asked maan.

Shanti looked at vicky n he nodded yes.

But here the whole scene didnt got missed by geet. She had tears in her eyes seeing maan n maanvi together n maanvi playing with maan.

Shanti bolo kya hua? Asked di worriedly.

Bhai.. bhai.. wo.. wo.. maanvi..

maanvi?? asked maan.

Ha baby ka naam maanvi hain.

Oh ok.. aage bolo shanti kya hua?

wo.. wo.. bhai.. maanvi aapki beti hain told shanti n closed her eyes.

WHAT?? shouted maan, sudha n yash in shock.

Ha bhai mujhe maaf kijiye yeh baat main aapse chapana pada.

Sudha held her shoulder n asked shanti tum sach keh rahi ho?

Ha di maanvi, bhai ki beti hain.

Maan's happiness have no bounds. He kissed allover her face n hugged her tight.

Meri beti, meri beti told maan n tears rolled down his cheeks. he took her tiny tiny hands n kissed it.
Bilkul meri geet ki tarah hain. same eyes, same smile. par itni badi baat geet ne mujse chupayi. aisa kya ho gaya geet ne itni badi baat mujse chupayi.

Here maanvi is playing with maan's shirt buttons n smiling at him. Maan is staring at his princess.

Jab meri beti ko uski papa ki zaroorat thi main nahi the. i am sorry beta, ab tumko mujse koi bhi dur nahi kar sakta. Geet bhi nahi. Bohot ho gaya ab aur nahi.

Seeing maan like that geet broke down completely n sobbing loudly. She sat on her knees on the floor right side of the cabin door. All others heard the sobbing of geet. Maan understood who is that. He rooted at the place where he stood. Today infact a lucky day for him. He came to know that he has a daughter n geet is outside. He is gonna see his geet, his jaan, his mishty after long 2 years. Here his sweet cutie pie maanvi is messing his tie by trying to take it out n play with it.
All others r rooted in their sopts not understanding what is happening. But maan automatically moved towards the entrance n stood infront of geet who burried her face in her paims n crying bitterly.
Maan sat on his knees infront of geet. Maanvi started jumping on his arms to go near geet. Maanvi is shaking geet's shoulders, geet immediately looked up n took maanvi in her arms. Then he saw maan, her maan after 2 long years. He changed a lot. He lost some weight, dark circles around his eyes. She closed her eyes seeing him in that condition that too because of her.

They both are staring at each other for sometime. Soon maanvi slept in geet's arms. She made her sleep on the couch inside the cabin. Geet kept her head low n all are staring at her. But they decided to give maan n geet some private time n left from there. Once they all left from there maan whispered

geet.

Thats it geet forgot all her resolutions n ran into his arms. She flung into his arms n encircled her hands around his neck n hugged him tight. Maan too hugged her tight holding her waist. They felt so much peace after so long. That is not a simple hug, they are pouring all the pain, grief they felt in these 2 years. 2 years of seperation they never imagined they be apart. N they never imagined they will meet again. But every problem has a solution so they have to think of that solution instead of being apart.

Geet is crying bitterly hugging him tight, maan's condition is not less. After a long time they broke the hug. Maan cupped her face n looking at her lovingly but geet kept her eyes low not able to bear his questioning eyes.

When maan was about to ask something adi came to office n called him

maan.

Maan turned to adi but when adi saw geet his eyes welled up with tears.

Geet called adi.

Geet gave him a smile with tears.

Adi did u find her asked maan furiously.

Yes maan this is her adress told adi n gave him the address.

Maan took that n smirked. Geet is confused n asked.

Whose address is this?

Maan gritted his teeth n told swetha.

Geet's eyes widened his eyes then only she remembered whom she saw outside.
Geet is shivering with fear n cluched maan's shirt tight. Both maan n adi saw the change in her expression.

Maan cupped her face n asked kya hua geet?

Geet relaxed a bit seeing him but maan can see the fear in her eyes.

Maan wo.. wo.. yaha kya kar raha hain? Asked geet shakingly.

Maan didnt understand whom she is talking about.

Kaun geet??

wo.. wo.. sid..

sid?? he is 20% share holder of KT. Kyun geet kya hua??

From today onwards he WILL not be the share holder of KT came a voice from behind.

Maan, geet n adi turned to other side n saw karthik n maan's dad rishab there.

Dad aap yaha?? asked maan.

Geet immediately hugged rishab.

Papa.. wo.. yaha hain. Muje darr lag raha hain papa.

Rishab broke the hug n told kuch nahi hoga geet kuch nahi hoga hum sab hain na.

Nahi u all leave from here told geet.

Geet tum chinta mat karo, tum hamare saath delhi jaa rahi ho told karthik.

MAINE KAHA NA AAP SAB CHALE JAYIYE YAHA SE shouted geet on top of her lungs.

All of them came out listening to her.
Just then someone came there.

Excuse me asked that person.

All of them turned back saw someone standing there. But when that person saw rishab he is hell shocked. His happiness have no bounds n tears welled up in his eyes. Just then yash came to him n asked aap??
but that person is just staring at rishab but here rishab didnt understand who is that person.

Aap kaun?? asked rishab.

That person came to him n hugged him tight n started crying like a small child n told papa.

All are hell shocked to hear him.

Papa?? gasped all.

But somewhere maan, sudha n rishab felt something known feeling when he hugged him.

That person broke the hug n asked maan kaun hain??

ji main told maan.

That person stood infront of him n asked tumne mujhe pehchana nahi na.

Nahi told maan confusingly.

He took out a pic from the wallet n showed him n asked abhi bhi nahi.

When maan saw that pic he widened his eyes in shock.

Matlab matlab?? aap??

maan hugged him tight n cried like a small kid.

Itne din kaha the aap?? kyun nahi aye hamare paas.

They broke the hug n that person asked with tears meri chamchi kaha hain.

This time its time for sudha to get shocked.

Maan n that person laughed with tears n maan showed sudha.

Sudha had tears in her eyes n ran to him n hugged him tight. Now rishab too understood who is he.

Sudha broke the hug n asked kaha the tum. Aur hamare paas kyun nahi aye ho. Tumko pata bhi hain kya kya hua??

that person wiped her tears n told main sab kuch batati hu. Main pichle 2 years se aapko doond raha tha. Mujhe kuch bhi pata nahi chala.

All others r watching them (geet, yash, shanti, karthik, vicky) as if they all are some aliens.

Now after seeing all of them geet a bit came back to her normal self n made a angry face n went near them.

Yeh sab kya ho raha hain? Asked geet.

Maan n sudha smiled through tears n said geet.

Maan yeh hamari princess hain? Asked that person.

ha..

before he could react rishab came to them n hugged that person. He couldnt believe what is happening today. He broke the hug n told geet beta aaj aapka janamdin han aur sab kuch shub shub ho raha hain.

He saw all faces became curious.

ek min let me tell u all one thing.

Kya hain dad asked maan.

Geet beta ek aur good news hain. Batao??

ha papa.

Ur dad is out of coma now.

Hearing this all are very happy n geet asked sach mein papa, dad thik hogaye na.

Ha beta. Anand is fine now.

Suddenly that person came n asked papa, dad ko kya hua??

geet sat on her knees n told papa, dad ka accident nahi tha.

Humko pata hain geet, papa ne sab kuch bata diya told karthik.

Kisne kia yeh sab asked maan furiously.

Suddenly they heard maanvi crying. Maan rushed to her n took her in his arms.

Precap: who might be behind anand's accident??
who is that person for whom maan, dad n sudha are happy?? any gusses.

So here is part 30. hope u all like it.
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will be waiting for ur comments.

guys guys DBUC reached 30 parts... yayyy yayyy i am so happy... 🥳
part 31: page 56

Love
-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 14 years ago

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