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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3:



There second meeting did not go that well,for the matter of fact it was a disaster,and no one would have got blamed for it.

But he felt he messed it up big time and the next thing was huh a grin on his face!!

Sameer's cellphone beeped

"Hello Sami,where have you been?" The person on the other side of the phone continued "Don't tell me you forgot abt it again"

It was Avi,Reminding Sami of there 15th friendship anniversary and he forgot abt it cause of his work.Now he was in deep trouble

Beep Beep (again) ;)

Prithvi's cell beeps..it was Sami calling for The Damage control mission

"Bhayya please,don't hangup need your help URGENTLY"A Distressed Sami

"Ok nautanki but last time,its high time that you put up a reminder on your oh- so- expensive I-Pad" Prithvi replies

"Thanks bhayya"Sami ends the call

Beep Beep Yet again!😆
her cell rang for the second time


"Hello"Damini picks up the call .

"Hello?"the caller

"Hm.." Perplexed whether or not she was right about the caller's identity,the tone was very familiar .

"Hi Damini" the Caller replied.

"Prithvi!!" She replied with dubiety

Why was he calling her now? After that Disastrous  day uh!

"Yes,Great..emm..how did you guess its me?" Prithvi questioned amazed at her memory.

"Umm it was not difficult to guess" She replies



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Sameer was waiting for Avi at there fav sport i.e  The farmhouse,which stood as a witnessing each event of there friendship which then turned into love...through years.

Sameer planned everything for there special day thanks to Prithvi who reminded him of the day.

Avni was late this time and now Sami had got his part of lesson ,how it feels like keeping someone waiting..as he has been doing for years to his love

There she comes after making her darling fiance wait for 2hrs

"Where were you?" I was waiting for u for so long?" Sami pouncing upon her with his quests

ok ok calm down Sameer, i was at the store"she replies

"Oh no not again dont tell me that you where shopping at the last moment!" Sami pouted

"Sameer" Avi gently creasing Sami's face by her palm


"Look what i have brought for you"Avi shows him the gift

It was a Black Tuxedo with Black vest and an elegant tie to do on

she always dream t Sami like that...and now she brought the same for him

He was so taken aback by her classy choice  in cloths
"This is cool,Thank u so much for this Avi" Sami with a glint of excitement in his eyes .
Was the excitement of the gift his would be wife brought fir him or is it the wedding daze which made him feel that..he didn't know

It was his turn to present her with a gift

He then closed her eyes and took her to the bench which they usually sat on..it was adorned with beautiful

And the tomb which was full of flowers,her favorite flowers ,the table  had rose petals on it and it  had two glass for wine.. It was all like a dream.

They both shared a Nip Kiss

They had there moment of romance,they spoke for long hours ,gave each other some lovely memories to cherish and now at last as he had planned a gift for her

He finally gave it to her.

It was some sort of envelope,she thought
it might be probably some card or a ring?
 
But it was non of them..

Avni unwraps the gift and is awestruck to see the content of the gift

It was there honeymoon ticket to Venice her favorite holiday sport and they where going to there honeymoon there she was esthetic abt the gift


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"What is it... do you need any help?"She continues."Hmm, yehs ahem I'm new to this place,its freezing out here now...and i have this strong urge to eat Italian food and some beverage  do you know any place i might find authentic Italain food ?" He inquires


"Oh ye..yes there is one place where one can find delicious Italian food" she acquaints


After a brief 10 seconds pause he then says...


"Actually, i.. i don't like to eat alone, i dnt feel comfortable without a companion ... if u don't take this wrong can you accompany me there?" Prithvi throwing his trump card

"Please" he adds ,such plea neva earned a 'NO' for him ..it was a skill he mastered and he was better than his younger bro who himself was a charmer.

He now waited for her reply,which was a Yes indeed..such was his confidence

"Umm...hm"Biting her lips

 "Ok,Friday will do?" she waits for his confirmation

"Friday night it is"He confirms excitedly."I'll be waiting for you then" he says knowing the fact that it was free time she had for herself in the week as all the days where reserved for her work and the wedding preparations.


Precap:


"I love you" he says

"Toh yeh puchneko mujhe yaha bulayathaa?"she chuckles.


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PS: Sorry folks abt the late update..Plz do read at ua leisure and drop in ua valuable comments
 

Edited by Killer_Shark - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Sia, nice part.

Actually I liked savni more here. Avni is super cute.
And sameer is like a typical boyfriend/fiance I liked it.

And coming to prida, prithvi and a charmer? That's interesting.
I loved the way he asked her to accompany him instead of direct date.

Precap looks interesting. Is it the concluding part?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Hi Sia, nice update. waiting for the prida update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Sia...

nice update .. savni part was really sweet.. waiting to know wat hpns nxt in Prida story :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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 Sia...

Nice part...Savni scene was cute...n Ahem looks like Pri's smarty in dis OS...warna sab usse Dhakkan bana dete hai...:P Waiting for Prida part nw...!!



-Nitika
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Have edited my replies for the last but one update:


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1755224?pn=4



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@...Tich...

Glad you liked the update..Already said ,he is not like the shrewd Prithvi we know from the show😆
I have no intention of concluding the OS so soon😉

@pia09

Thanks for commenting..


@Nan08

Hows u baby?
Update is on its way da..


@crazypridaholic

Oh yeh Pri is not dhakkan in this OS😆
@For the record i like your animated siggy from D3.
 


Keep reading folks!

Edited by Killer_Shark - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice n sweet savni scene...
Btw y Pri is having boring beep beep ring tone 😛
waise happy that pri is not a dhakan in this OS...kya baat hai propose bhi kardiya ussne..
Guess something interesting is coming up 😉

waise i know ua reply
dont read in between the line ;p 😆Edited by LazyKid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LazyKid

nice n sweet savni scene...
Btw y Pri is having boring beep beep ring tone 😛
waise happy that pri is not a dhakan in this OS...kya baat hai propose bhi kardiya ussne..
Guess something interesting is coming up 😉

waise i know ua reply
dont read in between the line ;p 😆



Boring beep tone..hmm Amy u uaself are a geeko why dnt u suggest him a proper ring tone😉
Yeh Pri is not a Dhakkan here like CTR..bolatha naa
(Or should i say 'I informed u thusly😉) no more Dhakkangiri will be tolerated😆


Originally posted by: LazyKid

.kya baat hai propose bhi kardiya ussne..



Oh i seee u have got a new way -a plan to make me write PRIDA..err Romantic PRIDA han!!
Stop watch BBT useless yahan yeh sare tark upyog mat karooo😈

Interesting toh hogaa ..now u wanted Pri to propose to her toh kuch na kuch toh karna hee padega naa..ok here is the deal i'll write what u want -the catch is if its good i go wid the credits😉
😈 n If if at all its bad...i'll throw dandas from here and and ..there is more to it..umm chat main bolungee fir kabhee😆

Waise ua late to reply😡 u see till u reply i wnt update!
sonchlo sab ke dandekhana hai ya 10line ka update padhna hai😛


Edited by Killer_Shark - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Killer_Shark



Boring beep tone..hmm Amy u uaself are a geeko why dnt u suggest him a proper ring tone😉 rofl i have myself tring tring tone 😛
Yeh Pri is not a Dhakkan here like CTR..bolatha naa
(Or should i say 'I informed u thusly😉) no more Dhakkangiri will be tolerated😆 thats very gud for us...atleast some1 is portraying Pri as smart dude




Oh i seee u have got a new way -a plan to make me write PRIDA..err Romantic PRIDA han!! see m very innovative person na  ðŸ˜‰
Stop watch BBT useless yahan yeh sare tark upyog mat karooo😈
hawww i dont watch ne TV shows now a days except mahadev that too once in a blue moon 
Interesting toh hogaa ..now u wanted Pri to propose to her toh kuch na kuch toh karna hee padega naa..ok here is the deal i'll write what u want -the catch is if its good i go wid the credits😉
😈 n If if at all its bad...i'll throw dandas from here and and ..there is more to it..umm chat main bolungee fir kabhee😆
heheh me eagerly waiting for it ðŸ¤£
Waise ua late to reply😡 u see till u reply i wnt update!
sonchlo sab ke dandekhana hai ya 10line ka update padhna hai😛
hawww sab toh mere wahaj se hi hota hai na 😛

Edited by LazyKid - 12 years ago