MG FF: kya mujhe pyaar hain pt 10 pg 112 3/8 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all forgive me for late comment...just now read it and now commenting...

hahaha kya update tha yaar..
pagal
bandar..
lol kya fight tha...just like kids..
bilkul kids ki tarah they were fighting...
poor rest gang...dev ko maja aa raha tha..
pls aisi fight dete rehna haan..
ohh rude gal sasha came...
chalo dev ko nt mil jayegi...
ye kya karan n yash?
poor boss..became sweaty after seeing geet n maan...hahaha
pls continue soon...
hugs to u for this...


yaar tere itne sare ff n ss hai...mai to story bhi bhul gayi hu...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

first of all forgive me for late comment...just now read it and now commenting...

hahaha kya update tha yaar..
pagal
bandar..
lol kya fight tha...just like kids..
bilkul kids ki tarah they were fighting...
poor rest gang...dev ko maja aa raha tha..
pls aisi fight dete rehna haan..
ohh rude gal sasha came...
chalo dev ko nt mil jayegi...
ye kya karan n yash?
poor boss..became sweaty after seeing geet n maan...hahaha
pls continue soon...
hugs to u for this...


yaar tere itne sare ff n ss hai...mai to story bhi bhul gayi hu...


yaar thanku very much for ur comment dear..
hahaha uska fight mujhe bhi acha laga...
ummm... sorry yaar... but kya kare... i cant hold back to write na... 😆
hugs to u too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


yaar thanku very much for ur comment dear..
hahaha uska fight mujhe bhi acha laga...
ummm... sorry yaar... but kya kare... i cant hold back to write na... 😆
hugs to u too...



welcome dear...
hmm write more...n more n more n...go on...
hugs back to u...

i am waiting for ur comment on my ff...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



welcome dear...
hmm write more...n more n more n...go on...
hugs back to u...

i am waiting for ur comment on my ff...



hahaha i will write pehle... let me complete all these...
hmm commented on ff n os also dear.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 3:


NOTE: plzz add 'maneetmaneet' for pms. or tell me i will add.


yaar I am so sorry. Ab mujhe pata nahi kya hoga.

God.. agar tum mujhe pehle bata deta tho I would have told u.

mujhe kya pata shilpa will take care of all these things.

Thik hain I can tell u only one thing.

Kya?

ALL THE BEST n laughed out loud.

YASHHH

arey karan cool yaar. Aur ha meri behen ko tang mat karna warned yash.

Ji Mr. handa. Ab main rakhti hu. Meeting jaana hain.

Thik hain yaar. Bye.

They cut the call n karan left for meeting n yash resumed his work.


Inside the conference shilpa is asigning the new interns their groups n works.

Hello guys welcome to our company. I am shilpa singhania. I am gonna tell ur groups n under whom u r working. Ok guys?

Ok mam all told in unison.

Ok listen dev n naintara are in one group n work under mr. sharma

adi n pinky under mr. surya.

Pari n sameera under mr. tandon.

Rahul n sasha under miss. Shruti and

maan n geet under me.

Hope this is clear for u all.


All are happy with their groups except one. They both are fuming with anger. They both started at each other angrily.


Yes mam told in unison.

Thats good your work will starts from tomorrow. Today u have to finish some formalities. Ok guys all the best. Bye.

Bye mam.


Wow guys they r soo cool. Hayeee I am happy with my group told pari.

Good my foot roared geet.

God yeh kya horaha hain. Ab tak we both r in same office but now same group. Muje iss pagal se jhelna padega told maan dramatically.

This made geet more angry.

Then y dont u leave from here? Just go away from here.

I told u before only why should I go. Thik hain main chala jaoonga par ek shart par?

Geet became happy n asked what?

I will go out of this office but u should also leave this office told maan n smirked.

Geet smiled at him. Maan is surprised by her smile.

Main kahi nahi jaane wali told geet n left from there.

All their friends know about maan n geet but its new for sasha n nt.

Hey what is all this? Why she is shouting like that? Is she crazy. I hate such type of behaviour.

This angered all of them.

Hello miss sasha be careful before u talk about her. She is our friend n we know about her, so dont dare to talk a word aganist her told sam angrily.

Sam chill yaar told maan.

No maan we all r friends from childhood. We cant bear a word aganist any of us told pari.

Rahul, dev n maan stood their seeing their friends so angry.

Maan we know that u hate geet but it doesnt mean that if anyone talk anything wrong about geet we cant tolerate told pinky.

All the 3 girls left from there leaving boys speechless. But soon they smiled at each other knowing how they behave when they get angry.


But sasha couldnt bear this n tried to talk rubbish about the girls.

Really these girls are such a irritating. God how they are shouting. When I saw geet I didnt like her but now even these told sasha sarcastically.


Look sasha u came from london for joining in this company as an intern. Do u want to go back to london now? No na then be in ur limits. U dont have any right to talk about my friends. Aur geet ki baat how much we fight but she is my friend. So not a word aganist her. Better u understand told maan.


With that maan, rahul, dev n adi left from there. Nt too left from there leaving sasha behind. She is burning with anger. Never ever in her life anyone talked with her in such a way. But today these people how dare they?


Nt ran behind boys n called maan.

Maancalled nt.

Maan tuened back n saw nt.

Yes.

Ek min.

nt took out a chocolate from her bag n gave it to maan.

Maan looked at her confusingly.

Ji yeh kiske liye.

Why u forgot.

Excuse me?? suddenly his eyes widened in shock.

Omg... gasped maan.

Its really u.

nt smiled n told yes its me.

Maan hugged nt n told I am so happy today. Kaise ho tum aur wo kaha hain.

Hmmm arjun went for higher studies. Aur main yaha kaam.

Acha.. fine I am very happy to see u. where were u all these days?

Papa got job in other company aur tum nahi the. Tum tho holidays ke liye apne gao gaye the aur humko jaana pada. Phir itne saal. Almost 8 years. Tumko contact karne ki bohot koshish ki but we lost ur contact.

Koi baat nahi nt, now we met. How did u recognise me. I didnt.

Maan yeh bracelet yaad hain tumko tumare 12th birthday par main aur arjun tumko gift kiye the. U promised me that u never remove it. But I challenged u that u will. But I lost. U didnt remove it maan told nt.

How can I remove this nt. I cant hum teeno aur priya. We all enjoyed our childhood a lot. We really missed u yaar.

Maan, arjun n nt are childhood friends. Nt n arjun are maan's dad PA's children. Maan in childhood use to go to office sometimes with his dad. They met there n played a lot in the office. So they became good friends. Sometimes maan invited them to his house , sometimes they invited maan. 8 years back nt's dad got job in other compant so he left the city. From that time they didnt have any contact.

Hello guys we r also there here shouted all other boys n girls.

Maan smiled at them n told

guys she is nt my best friend from childhood. But unfortunately she left us n went away due to her father's job. N today we again met. Wow... princess will be very very happy.

Chalo yaar we will have lunch n enjoy told rahul.

All of them went to canteen ordered their foods.

Pasta n coffee ordered both maan n geet at a time.

Wow.. I think u both r good friends told nt.

Maan n geet glared at her while other gang shook their head in no to nt.

Nt didnt understand anything n kept quiet.

Dev is drolling nt openly.

Hey beautiful, I am dev.

Hii smiled nt nervously.

They all introduced themselves n started chatting with eachother, now nt became a part of their gang. N all of them liked her. Soon they finished their lunch n completed all their formalities n left from there.

Dev jaldi jaake princess ko ghar lekar aao.

Ok maan I will go.

Maan main ghar jaake aati hu. Arjun ko phone karna hain aur mama papa ko bhi told nt.

Ok nt ghar jaroor aana.

Ok maan.


Dev left to pick priya. Rahul went to drop pari n sam , pinky n adi left from there. Geet too left from there. Geet went to parking lot n saw maan's bike.

Ohh yeh tho monkey ka bike hain. U will blackmail me ab dekhongi ki tum kaise ghar jaaogi.


With that geet punchered both his bike tires n smirked.

Ab dekhte hain maan tum kaise ghar jaoge. Wow geet u r awesome. Good going.

Geet took her bike n trying to start it but the bike is not.


Just then maan came there n told jabgaadi main petrol nahi hain tho kaise start hoga told maan sarcastically.

Ohh petrol katam hua. Suddenly she realised n asked tumko kaise pata.

Waha kisi ladke ke bike main petrol katam hua so main tumare bike se nikalkar de diya.

You.. you... cheater shouted geet n moved towards maan.

Tch tch tch this is called tit fot tat.

Geet took her cell to call to her bro but her mobile is switched off.

Cha iss mobile ko bhi abhi switch off hona tha.

Now they dont have any option other than to go by cab.

They both went out giving angry glares to each other.

Just then a taxi passed by

taxi shouted both.

The driver stopped n asked kaha jaana hain madam?

Mujhe...

1st I called him told maan.

Nahi I called him retorted geet.

Nahi I called hm.

Arey why u both r shouting, tell me where u want to go?

******** area told maan.

*********** area told geet.

They both r at same place both of u get in told driver.

Nahiii shouted both of them.

Iske saath jaane se acha main ghar paidal( by walk) chali jao told geet.

Why late u go by walk I will go by taxi told maan.

Hello, wo tho pehle wali baat. But now u too decided to go by taxi so I wont go by walk. Main tho taxi main hi jaoongi.

Tum har baat seeda nahi karti kya. Karo jo karna hain main taxi main jaa raha hu.

Nahi I called taxi first.

Nahi main.

Arey behenji dono andar ayiye na told driver.

Bhaiyaji ek min told geet.

Maan n geet started fighting who should go in the taxi.

Pata nahi aaj subah kiska chehra dekha main, pehle same office, then same group aur tho aur eh taxi bhi. Babaji aapne kya kar diya complained geet.

But here maan is smiling inside seeing her like that but maintained a straight face.

Thik hain tum apni babaji ko complaint karna main chala jaonga told maan.

Tumko sharam nahi aati ek ladki ke saath aisa behave karne ki.

Ladki yaha ladki kaun hain told maan.

Tum ko tho main nahi chodunga.

Kya karogi, tum kuch nahi kar sakti.

Aap log decide kijiye kaun jaana hain kaun nahi main tho jaa raha hu told driver n drive off.

Arey bhai ruko shouted geet.

Ab kya faida sab kuch tumari wajah se told maan.

Maine kya kiya. Chodo waste of talking with u told geet n started walking from there.

Maan too started walking. Geet turned back n saw maan walking.

R u following me? Asked geet.

Ha tum miss. World ho aur main tera deewana told maan sarcastically.

Geet gave him angry glare n started walking.

BHOOT shouted maan.

Geet stopped in her tracks n turned back scarily n asked kaha?

Maan laughed out loud seeing her scared face.

Tum has kyun rahe ho?

Nahi nahi bhoot apne aap ko dekke darr rahi hain.

Tum muje bhoot kaha shouted geet angrily n throwed her bag on him.

But maan catched it n throwed back to her.

Main tumko kal dekhungi. Good bye.

Bye.. told maan smiling n he took out his cell phone n made some calls.


Precap: maan called whom??? 😕

maan n geet talk on phone. Talk ya jagda? 😆


here is part 3. hope u all like it.

plzz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.


love

-jyothi




Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

dey fight like cat-dogs...

superb update

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
love dit
both r really impossible
kahin bhi suru ho jate hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

ek baat batana dear...kya inn dono k veech mein kabhi pyar hoga?humein toh namuumkeen lag rahe hai...magar ek baat hai...jo jitna jhagadta hai unke veech pyar utnahi intense hota hai...hum taras rahe hai thodasa pyar dekhne k liye...bhagwan hi jante hai yeh 8th wonder of d world kab hoga...huuff...
aur maan ne geet k gadise petrol nikal ke kissi aur ko de diye...aur geet ne uska bike k dono tyre puncture kar diye...batao koi aise karta hai bhala...itni dushmani...i enjoyed fully...

magar i appreciate whn maan defend geet n other frnds against sasha...
i really loved it a lot...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was so superb..
urgh..i hate sasha...
Loved maneet's antics and maan's retort to sasha for geet..
Loved the whole gang's friendship..

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