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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
wow yaar...you are on a roll...

me updating unwantedly tied...so after you have finished here...

come there

and we waiting for your update as usual!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -maankimishty-

wow yaar...you are on a roll...


me updating unwantedly tied...so after you have finished here...

come there

and we waiting for your update as usual!


Yes me waiting for unwantedly tied ..
I have like checked the thread 3 times still no sign of an update 😡😭
Jaldi update kaooo ..
Me waiting 😃😃
And yes i'll post the next part in like half an hour i guess 😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
congrats for the new thread...
and waiting for the update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: NaimaMSK1

Yes me waiting for unwantedly tied ..

I have like checked the thread 3 times still no sign of an update 😡😭
Jaldi update kaooo ..
Me waiting 😃😃
And yes i'll post the next part in like half an hour i guess 😆😉


well the reason you haven't got the update yet is because I haven't written it yet...thats why...

but I am going to write it now for you...so you update here...and

then come the unwantedly tied thread!

Okay 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Thank you everyone for your comments 😃
And a very important thing ..
Do you guys wants me to update both my stories regularly but short parts or long pats and irregularly ?????
PART 43

They were still in the hug and maan saw how emotional she got so to lighten the situation he said ..

Chaloo geet now your turn ..

My turn ? she asked confused

Haan your turn to confess and propose me .. he added mischievously

WHAT ?

Maan don't you know girls don't propose .. Movie nahi deekhtay kya ? The guys propose and girls accept it ..

Acha but girl also say I love you .. Movie nahi deekti kya ? When guys says it the girl says it too .. he replied in the same dramatic way with a smirk ..

She blushed and realized he said the truth but she was too shy ..

Umm maan mujhain nab hook lagi hai .. she said trying to divert him ..

Oh ho tou meri innocent pari ko topic divert karna bhi ata hai .. he said naughtily and then pulled her closer by her waist .. ofcourse geet kya mujhain nahi pata kay my pari is trying to escape my questions … She blushed at the word 'pari' it sounded so cute ..

Nahi maan aisa nahi .. she tried to reason ..

Achaw ? he asked innocently ..

Haan wo na maine subha se kuch khaya nahi na tou meray stomach main na haatii run kar rahay hain .. she said rubbing her stomach cutely ..

Any other time maan would have had fallen for her cute face and this time also he almost did fall but then he needed his answers ..

Acha .. I'll stop the haatti ..

How ? she asked amused ..

He kneeled down and pressed a kiss on her belly .. Then kept his ear on her stomach and said Hmmm hatti did not stop will have to do something .. and with that said he started to kiss her all over her waist .. There was not a single place left where he had not kissed her .. He even bit her at a few places as if marking her as his .. with his love and she hissed in pain and pleasure .. she was new to all this and her knees were going weak .. the sensation that he was creating within her she couldn't hold and thought she might fall any second .. as if maan read her thoughts he scooped her in his arms and went towards the table ..

He sat on the chair with her on his lap .. she was about to get up when he pulled her back ..

You will eat like this .. On my lap he whispered huskily ..

She felt conscious first sitting on his lap and secondly him feeding her .. But she wouldn't deny that she enjoyed it .. Yes she loved this new feeling so maan as promised fed her with her on his lap and on his insistence and requests she fed him too ..

After dinner there came the desert and geet was relishing her favorite chocolate trifle

while maan was just drooling at her .. she looked soo cute while liking her lips after finishing a bit and then the moans that she took out relishing the taste .. Praising it on every bit .. she was soo lost in herself that she did not realize maan was staring at her and that she was on his lap .. as she was about to take the last bite she remembered maan and said ..

Maan aap tou nahi khayee gay na ? And before he could answer the last bit e was also in her mouth .. He looked at her surprised but then thought to teach her a lesson..

Mujhain kahan tha geet he said making a straight face ..

Sorry she pouted cutely and said but it was soo yummy na that I ate it and made a baby face .. He melted but faked his anger and said ..

MUjhain abhi khana hai ..

Acha I will get more for you kal ..

No .. Now ..

Now par how ?

I know
and smirked ..

He jerked her towards himself and kissed her .. Now this was something she was definitely not expecting .. He sucked on her lower lip and then kept liking it sending a tickling sensation at the pith of her stomach .. Not able to bear this tickling she parted a little and he entered her .. He kept exploring her mouth with his tongue and relishing the taste of the chocolate but her sweetness more than that .. There was apiece left on her tongue and he practically chewed it .. They kept kissing for no one knows how long and broke apart due to loss of breath ..

Woww ! My dessert tastes soo sweet

And she blushed a deep red shade at his shameless remark .. She hid her face in his chest while he chuckled ..

Aree wah ! Meri pari mujhse sharma kar mujhain he galay laga rahi hai and laughed ..

She hit him on his chest and complained Maan pouting ..

Then there evening went well with all the teasing .. romance and all .. it was time to go back home .. The drive was silent while maan kept looking at her and she would blush remembering their evening and kiss .. The car stopped and he kissed her cheeks and whispered a good night … while she said …

Thank you for everything Maan and was about to get off when she came back and whispered .. I love you and quickly ran out of the car and in her house .. while leaving a shocked and a very happy maan behind ..

So how was it ??
precap : office Romance 😉😳
Do you guys wants me to update both my stories regularly but short parts or long pats and irregularly ?????

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Ok so me first...yaayyy! Chalo maine apna promise pura kiya!

Okay so that was fantastic 😭...I am absolutely thrilled...

Oh maan was so sweet with the way he treated her...😊

totally romantic...😆 main tho fida hogayi...

geet was sweet with her dramatic movie dialogue...

loved it to the core!

and geet so naughty the way she said i love you and then ran away! 😉

Precap...is really interesting...some office romance 😳

Thanks for such a lovely update!

As for your question at the end...I don't mind!

Love

MaankiMishty


Edited by -maankimishty- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Hey di
The like button is not working is just my not working or others to but anyways I love it it was nice update keep going
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awesome dear
loved it core
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: MONIJA78

Hey di

The like button is not working is just my not working or others to but anyways I love it it was nice update keep going

Ummm it was not working but now it is 😆
So you can like it 😉😆
And thank you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
awesome update...
loved the way maan confessed his love...
too lovely...
sweet..
amazing..
great...
n as always i loved ur update...👏

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