Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 3 pt 47 pg130 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

part 38:

lovely update
i cant see maan with other
geet ka waise lonely shedding tears for maan really sad
flashback nice
especially when maan had injury geet cry maan explain with words
maan smiled n pulled her cheek wid a true reply , " ek baar ek thread ne candle se puchha..*why u dissolve wen i burn ?* to which candle repied..*u r in my heart,if u suffer Im bound to shed tears for U*...ab samajhi..."
maan shook his head wid a smile n cleared , " im ur best frnd..dats mean i hav a special place in ur heart..so wen i suffer from injury...u feel pain in ur heart n dats why u cry..."

but when geet asked him that he will cry when she hurt maan say NO geet ka cute angry face dekhne layak tha
cute fight was really nice
" oyye..agar mujhe chot lagegi to tumhe bhi rona padega..samajhe tum...ye mera order hai aur tumhe manana padega..warna aaj se uttara meri best frnd..."

dat was it..

maan pulled her down angrily as he barked , " tera best frnd me hu..samajhi tu...aur tuje chot lagegi to sirf mein hi rovunga...koi aur nahi..."


heyy sweets...

thnqq so much for d lovely comment...

thnxxx

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Part 42



d bottle once again spinned n stopped between maan n geet wid maan pointed...

geet smirked, "truth or dare maan.."

maan rolle his eyes, "ofcorse dare.."

geet thought for a min n said, "ok...so prupose suzeil now..."

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WATTT

dat came as a shock for every1..hameer n uttara who looked at geet shocked along wid dadi maa..while suzeil looked at geet confused..why geet want dat..doesn't she care for maan d way he cares for her...sameer was definitely happy wid i dea..dat wud just clear his line for geet...

in all dis maan was d most shocked 1..he looked at geet n den glanced a look at suzeil..he loves suzeil..but he never yet thought of marriage..he was happy wid thought but he wasn't satisfied..why his smile was not reaching his eyes..why dere was dis appoinment in his eyes..like if he vil prupose suzel..his importance in geet's live vil be reduced..ogg god..wat d hell im thinking..he was left confused wid his own thought..of corse he wud marry suzeil..but not like dis ..all of a sudden...

geet stared at him thoughtfully, "we r waiting maan..complete ur dare or get ready for d punishment.."

maan snapped instantly, "im doing my dare..i didn't say no.."

wid dat he made suzeil stood up n went on his knees in front of her, "suzeil..i (he tried to say i love u..but for unknown n weired reasons..his heart wasn't giving him words or dat satisfaction of pruposing her...) i need to say suming to u..."

suzeil's heart was pouncing in her chest..she was once again confused..maan is ready to prupose her..but if he hav feeling for geet den why is he pruposing me..oughhh its all just not making any sense...

sameer was looking at maan n suzeil..but when he turned his stare to geet..he was stunned wid d darkness in dose eyes..like she was bcuming cold..he snapped her hand and she looked at him litle startled n smiled weakly...

maan cleared his throat n looked at geet..like he wanted to tell sumthing else..but he was doing sumthing else..just wat d hell is wrong wid him...why he dnt hav dat strength to just say dose two lines n finish d dare...

Kaisi ajab kasmakash hai is dil me
Kyu itni udasi hai is mahual me...

Jise chaha use kyu wo nahi keh pa raha
Kyu itna dard kehne se mehsus ye dil kar raha...

Kyu uski ek baat ke liye dil taras raha hai
Kyu uski ankhen dard baya kar rahi hai...

Kya chahta hai mera dil mujhse
Kyu ye itna bechain hai khudse...

Use kisi aur ke sath dekh kar kyu dard hota hai
Dost hai fir aise ajeeb sa mehsus kyu hota hai...

Uski Aankein kuch batana chahti hai
Par kyu mujhse wo padhi nahi jati hai...

Ye kaisa ehsaas hai is dil me
Pyaar ho ke bhi pyaar nahi is dil me...

he kept looking at geet..but d coldness in her eyes scared him..like dere was no excitement..dere was no hope..why he wanted to see emotions in dose eyes n wat kind of emotions..just wat is he thinking..he closed his damn eyes n stared back to suzeil n let out...

"i love u..will u marry me ?..."

his heart felt a sudden pinch..like he was shocked of his own words..he looked again to geet like he was scared of sumthing..but wat he couldn't understand..and dere was no change in geet's facial expression which disappointed him..grhh wats happening to him..why he wanted reaction from geet when he pruposed to suzeil..confused at his own thoughts he stared back to suzeil when she replied...

"yes maan...i love u too.." wid dat she pulled him up n hugged him tightly..trying to hide her tears.she knew dis is just illusion..dis vil not be for long..when maan vil realise his feeling towrds geet..he vil leave her..he pruposed her..but his eyes were only searching for geet...she felt happiness n pain in same moment..happiness dat maan atleast pruposed her..though he vil not marry her but dat feeling of being pruposed by d person u love...and pain bcoz she knew..dose words were not for her..he was lost in his thoughts when he said it..

maan tried to hug suzeil back..but he felt lack of emotions in himself towrds suzeil...but why...

he gently hugged her n stared at dadi maa...dadi maa smiled at dem n assured him wid her eyes..he looked at uttara n hameer...but deir eyes didn't show any happiness..he looked at sam..she smiled..but dere was no excitemnt..he looked at sameer who just wished him all d best and den he again looked at geet who was as cold as b4..like it didn't even matter for her...

Aaj mene wo kiya jise wo khush rahe
Mere nasib me na sahi wo to use paa sake...

Mene aaj use kisi aur ko saupa hai
Par na jane uski ankho me ab bhi dard hai...

Shayad wo khud uske dil ke bich uljha hai
Wo khud uske dard badha raha hai...

Uski aankhein kyu mujhe talash karti hai
Uski ek nazar kyu is dil ko kamzor karti hai...

Use khush dekhne ke iye khud tadap rahi hu
Khud ko kisi aur ke sath dekh me har pal mar rahi hu...

Wo kisi aur ka hai ye sachayi to me bardasht kar lungi
Par me kisi aur ki ye Me khud nahi bardasht kar paungi...

Mera dil sirf usi ke liye dhadakta hai aur humesha rahega
Par kisi aur ke liye ise abhi Usse juda hona padega...

dat hurt him..it didn't matter her..sumthing so important about his life held no importance for her..why..dey hav been so close since young..so why he cnt he feel dat warmth from geet now..he felt like just took her in his arms n shake her for sum reaction..but wat reaction he had no clue...

every1 clapped for him and d rest of d evening went in no fun..like d soul of excitemnt just vanished sumwhere...

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MORNING..

when evening came to end..dadi maa surprised every1 by suggesting a small trip of 1 day..suzeil n sam smiled inexcitements so did uttara and hameer..geet smiled weakly n gave in while sameer was dearly looking forward to spend sum chance wid geet so he had no issues

d journey started...

geet was looking out of window lost in her thoughts...when sameer, who was sitting beside her, shook her..geet looked at him litle startled but instantly calmed herself..
maan who was sitting next to deir sit , had his eyes on geet n sameer all d time..he showed he is enjoying d trip but dat disappoinment on his face couldn't be hidden...he had so been so frustarted when he saw sameer sitting beside geet..just what d hell is wrong wid sameer..what is he trying to do wid my geet...geet is too neive to understand his traps...and wat is wrong wid geet..couldn't she sit wid me..we hav alwz sat together den why not 2day..he was lost in his own thoughts...suzeil tried to cheer up him but he had no mood...

dadi maa looked at maan n geet n den looked at uttara n hameer n rolled her eyes..uttara n hameer too were hell bored...
dadi maan winked at uttara n den uttara knew wat dadi meant..

uttara picked up her guitar n started to play it...

every1 looked at uttara surprised n smiled...
hameer too got up from his

dil kabhi ganda...kabhi hai nek banda
dil ka bharosa...kaise koi kare

sang uttara looking at geet for a moment, not actually making it notice but geet knew she was talking about her..geet rolled her eyes n smiled weakly...

dil kabhi thanda...kabhi hai item bomb sa
ye dhamaka ...kaise koi sahe

hameer too started to sing making funny faces and pushed uttara a bit away n in a fraction pulled her again towrds him..uttara giggled n gave him a bear hug...
dadi smiled at den n forced maan geet suzeil and sameer too also cheer deir mood..

dil ki yahi khata hai...
dil ko nahi pata hai...

geet smiled as she worded her feeling instantly grabbing maan and sameer's attension..dadi knew wat was going inside geet but she was proud of her strong grand daughter

dil ki yahi khata hai...
dil ko nahi pata hai...

suzeil to joined uttara in dancing as she sang while sameer joined from other side singing further...

ke dil chahta hai ke...

sang maan as he turned from to dem wid fake smile...he couldn't mix up wid dem..he tried hard..but just couldn't bring dat origional smile..everything seemed different and uncomfortable...

nazre milana...nazre churana
kahin pe nigahe...kahin pe nishana

nazre milana...nazre churana
kahin pe nigahe...kahin pe nishana

sameer dragged geet to dance while suzeil dragged maan..dadi maa dragged sam as dey sang...maan n geet looked at each other while singing n dancing...maan wanted to say sumthing but he had no clue wat it was..geet ignored his constant gaze and faked a smile at sameer while dancing..dat smile just burned maan from inside..his geet..his best frnd geet never ignored him..never..she has changed..he felt chocked..she has changed...or m i changed ??

music...

dey played in water fall for long time...throwing water on each other..pulling each other in water..standing below d fall..and it was just great fun..but d two best frnds, oblivious to d world felt no interest for a surprise...

niyat to dil ki...humesha hi sahi thi
dil ka irada...bhi samjho nek tha

sameer smiled feeling mesmerized, staring at d beautifull geet wid wet hairs..dring her hairs..she just looked damn beautifull...he sang sweetly more to himself...but every1 teased him noticing his constant eyes on geet..maan wanted to punch him heart..he felt weired like he just couldn't bear sameer looking at geet..how could he sbear sum1 bearing oversmart wid his best frnd, he reasoned himself..but geet's no reaction just triggered him more..could she just scold sameer for being an idiot...like she had no issues..

does she really hav no issues ?? d mere thought made him suffocated..

fitrat awara...to kya kare bechara
uska ho jaye...dil jisko dekhta

sam shook her head at d state of dis two most weirdest people.and she sang her heart...she knew, maan eyes were not showing d relationship of just best frnds..dere was more..but his pruposing suzeil last night left her confused..oughh dis confused heart..it vil make sum1 mad...but she did notice maan's angry glare towrds sameer...

it was so weired..

geet loved maan...maan loved suzeil..sameer loved geet..but maan's cnt bear dat..geet now dnt want any relationship wid maan for d sake of suzeil and still she cnt give herself 2nd chance as she think she is maan's...
does it has end sumwhere ??..

dil ne do dil sataye...
raaton me dil jagaye...

maan worded his confused state and d next moment sum1 grabbed him from back..he diverted his attension from geet n turned around, only to find suzeil..he smiled weakly at her..

dil ne do dil sataye...
raaton me dil jagaye...

suzeil lovingly kissed his cheek as she repeated his words and rested her head on his chest wanting to atleast enjoy dis few moments wid maan..shayad fir mauka mile na mile...
maan too weakly hugged her back ,not wanting to hurt her wid his weired behaviour...

arre chahta hai kya

geet instantly looked away n was about to walk when uttara n hameer grabbed her hand n made her stand dere forcefully..geet gave dem angry glare but dey didn't budze..dey wanted geet to face d reality..she want dem together..so dey r together..just walking away from reality vil not change it...

nazre milana...nazre churana
kahin pe nigahe...kahin pe nishana

nazre milana...nazre churana
kahin pe nigahe...kahin pe nishana

dey enjoyed deir lunch..fighting..talking..chatting..giggling..laughing..teasing..and wat not...
dey danced liek idiots..played lots of games..but geet n maan remained immune to dis all so did to each other...
maan's patience was giving up..he had no idea wat was disturbing him so much...his frustartion was increasing just every passing moment...
he even snapped at suzeil uneccesarily but den calmed down when dadi gave him disapproving look..
suzeil smiled weakly while geet felt miserable about suzeil's condition...

music...

evening appeared..
and dey decided to dance in partners as fun...
uttara n hameer started to dance..already lost in each other...while maan n suzeil too joined soon being insisted by every1...
dadi forcefully made geet go wid sameer and dey too made a pair..dancing on d theme..
sam naughtily grabbed dadi maa n started to dance wid her...

ankhon me koi hai basa...jane kyu lage ye dil khali
jane na kyu ye dil baja raha...ek hath se tali

uttara n hameer looked at each other while dancing and singing...while sam too sang further lines noticing dat fake smile on geet's face...

hothon se jane kya kaha...fir bhi dil ki baat hai dil me
ye raha tera humsafar...kisko dhunde dil ki mehfil me

maan felt uncomfortable watching sameer dance wid geet..his geet..he never liked geet dancing wid anybody ever..1st dat dance in party and now dis dance...sameer was actually checking his patience...thought maan frustarted...

sum1 poked maan's shoulder bringing maan back to his sense...he didn't even realise no 1 was dancing in pair now n he was practically looking at sumwhere lost...

hameer put his hand around maan's shoulder and told him dat he should be looking at suzeil while dancing...

jane hai fasi...kaise na hasi
...aaye haal dil pe

maan felt embarrased so did suzeil..both instantly broke which every1 giggle...sameer grabbed geet's hands n geet too gave in as both sang..she didn't wanted to but she knew she had too atleast for d sake of suzeil...coz dat unshed pain in suzeil's eyes didn't go unnoticed by geet or by dadi..

nazre milana...nazre churana
kahin pe nigahe...kahin pe nishana

nazre milana...nazre churana
kahin pe nigahe...kahin pe nishana

evening soon vanished and darkness surrounded...
dey lightened a fire and enjoying deir guitars and food stuff...chatting giggling...
uttara hameer and sam were still dancing in d middle while suzeil was playing guitar...
geet wrapped a shawl around dadi maa and sat beside her..maan smiled knowing how carefull geet is towrds dadi maa...
maan kept looking at geet motionless...geet noticed it n made a question face at him like asking 'kya huva..'
maan shook his head wid a smile and again payed his attnesion to others...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yuppiee me first for the first time

Check this out Dear specially for you

whats wrong with maan helll
being a maan singh khurana
he is not yet able to understand his feelings well that is weirdo
hmmm but weird is one more thing,
all knows that Geet loved maan

but still they were quite at that time
the thing which i liked the most is

first time maan hesitating to express his feeling towards that chudeil
(oops suzeil... i know she is sweet but she is between maneet)
i rememberd one quote i.e.
DICTIONARY SAYS THAT OPEN AND CLOSE ARE OPPOSITES ,
BUT LESSONS OF LIFE TEACHES THAT WE ARE OPEN ONLY WITH THOSE WITH WHOM ARE CLOSED
I think it suits for maneet only
ohhh dat one day trip is just owesome

i just love that song sequence,
i was imagining the Geets face with Genei's emotions and
you wont beleive that was fab
and at last just one thing cut the crap this confusion (oops sorry but maneet ko mila doh please)








Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very emotion😭
plz dear make maan confess soon 😔
Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
owaaa


sooo


sweet...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayamaan

owaaa



sooo


sweet...😛


awww

thnqq umme

love u


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Posted: 13 years ago

oh god!!!!!!!!!!!

itna confusion...

plzzz mishty make maan realise dat he loves geet

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oho...Geet ne yeh kaha phasa diya Maan ko!! plzz do something to make him realize what is happening with him(or his heart)
Edited by maanhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww awesome update...
now mean wii relise way real pain is?
great update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
evry1 knows evrythng.. still no one is speakin out loud..
feel bad 4 geet..
nd suzeil too.. she knows d inevitable.. bt only maan who s still n recognising his feelings!!

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